Hm first time through,went for harem(as any gentlemen of cultured taste would).
The writing and jokes were a bit on the unpolished and juvenile side but overall a very enjoyable first attempt.
Felt like it fell apart a bit in the final confrontation and epilogue though.
The former definately was too short(and honestly,a bit anticlimatic)and the latter felt like it would have delivered better with a bit of narrative.
Leaving out the first big harem confrontation felt outright cheap.
Like,sure Carla knowing was pretty much stated but I was still anticipating the sisters reaction to it,which isnt even mentioning someone like Rebecca who´s only hint at accepting such a situation was a throw away line right during her last appearance.
We also never really see how Jasmine takes her father being killed and so on.
The epilogue all around sadly feels like wasted potential and rushed.
Also,no grand oyakoden made me a sad panda(and since we actually got the shimaidon,big P cant have been all that much of a concern for the final release).
Oh well,here is hoping the author will actually return to add some more content when he needs a break from Eternum.