MrWarmBeer
Firstly, this game is a great start, I can't wait to see where it goes. Congrats!
It's nice to finally have another decent NTR game to invest time into.
If I could lend my opinion though, my only "qualm" is the the NTR feels very... Quick and disjointed.
The wife goes from seemingly perfect and loyal to cock hungry and willing, in the blink of an eye.
And having a lot of the cheating happening literally right in front of the MC is a little bit unrealistic and unfeeling.
Have you considered pacing things a bit and maybe having the MC discover his wife's true colours via more passive means? I.E hacking, peeping or going through her phone/pc etc, instead of it being so instant and blatant?
I know you've said we are to imagine the MC as a "bitch", but we also need to connect with him in a way that illicits the intended feelings of NTR.
Atm, the MC seems like a non entity. Things just happen around/to him and there's no real meaning or interaction, there's no connection. It kind of takes you out of the "moment".
True, hardline NTR is king, where it happens without any/much input from the MC.
Discovering it and not telling your S/O that you know is far better than just immediately (and literally in Rick's case) offering her up.
Personally I'm not a massive fan of wives fucking about with old men either, but, this is your narrative, I'm just a passenger.
Rather than the tomfoolery with Chou being so blatant, it could all be discovered via hacking (instead of him immediately coming to your house and fucking her in front of you).
With Tyrone and Rick it could be a case of her going out or inviting them round whilst you're not there and the MC peeping/setting up cams (Instead of them both nailng her literally feet from you).
And with Burrows it could be that you follow after her and peep, or listen through the walls?
There's no real mystery or anxiety here. Everything is literally splayed out in front of you from the offset.
Let us discover your story and the world you're trying to craft, instead of it being dropped on us right from the outset, with no pretences or intrigue.
Let our Wife reveal herself to us, rather than us just immediately throwing her into it without any real feeling, connection or background?
However, that's just my two pence on things.
All that said, this is shaping up to be a fantastic game. I hope it works out and that the content/updates keep flowing!
Thank you WB,
NM.