Jericho85

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The very well-written Developer Notes was probably the one thing that made decide to download the game and try it.
Like any game, there will be the occasional typo and edit mistake, but terrible English? No. That's just silly.
Yeah I'm not seeing how they decided it was "terrible english". The dialogue might have the occasional typo and there are maybe one or two examples of what I'd consider oddly constructed prose, but overall I think Origin Story has better quality writing than most other VNs I see on F95.
 
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HornyyPussy

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Yeah I'm not seeing how they decided it was "terrible english". The dialogue might have the occasional typo there are one or two examples of what I'd consider oddly constructed prose, but overall I think Origin Story has better quality writing than most other VNs I see on F95.
Yeah, that was a VERY obvious trolling attempt and we all took the bait :)
 

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On the favorite LI topic, there was a recent patron poll of "Favorite LI" (of the ones so far with significant time). I can't recall the last time I've ever seen a favorite LI poll end this even.

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Really speaks volumes I think of how good all the LIs so far are, despite having looks and character different from each other.
 
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Jarulf

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On the favorite LI topic, there was a recent patron poll of "Favorite LI" (of the ones so far with significant time). I can't recall the last time I've ever seen a favorite LI poll end this even.

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Really speaks volumes I think of how good all the LIs so far are, despite having looks and character different from each other.
Yeah, that can't be common. And why the heck is Georgia only at 18?
 
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