VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.5.0] [JDOR]

[Jarulf]

Well, you know, not everyone here is American. And not everyone understands your strange dialect. Sometimes it is impossible to understand what is meant at all. It’s much easier for me with the texts of the Australians, the guys are very literate. Books seem to be held in high esteem in prison.

I'm not American, English isn't my first language.

 

[Rehwyn]

Yeah, that can't be common. And why the heck is Georgia only at 18?

Recent proximity probably plays at least a small role. She hasn't had quite as much screen time recently as Evelyn and Lady Steel, for example.

 

[Rehwyn]

Well, you know, not everyone here is American. And not everyone understands your strange dialect. Sometimes it is impossible to understand what is meant at all. It’s much easier for me with the texts of the Australians, the guys are very literate. Books seem to be held in high esteem in prison.

The irony here of course is that the dev is German, not American. And yet, as a native speaker of American English, I think everything is perfectly understandable and natural sounding (though of course there's the occasional typo's and whatnot). They intentionally use American English slang and vernacular because it makes the dialogue more believable for a game set in the US. It wouldn't make a lick of sense for them to speak in the Queen's English or something.

 

[Jarulf]

Recent proximity probably plays at least a small role. She hasn't had quite as much screen time recently as Evelyn and Lady Steel, for example.

You are no doubt right. I just played through the whole thing, so that nice little scene with Georgia and Evelyn is very fresh in my mind.
*sighs wistfully*

 

[Jarulf]

So we know what the MC's power is by now, or do we?
Several times now in game, someone has commented that he appears much more experienced in bed than he should be, so is there something else going on here. And his peach tasting cum, what's that all about? Are girls getting addicted to him?
Was he made in a lab, designer super baby?

 

[Elduriel]

So we know what the MC's power is by now, or do we?
Several times now in game, someone has commented that he appears much more experienced in bed than he should be, so is there something else going on here. And his peach tasting cum, what's that all about? Are girls getting addicted to him?
Was he made in a lab, designer super baby?

well there is something, who knows what, there is the attack for whatever reason, and scheming about him in the background, so it's anyone's guess at this point.

 

[Jarulf]

Lots going on we've just barely seen hints of yet.
And, I guess a little too early to theorise.

Still, a lot of content after only one year.

 

[e6mill]

So we know what the MC's power is by now, or do we?
Several times now in game, someone has commented that he appears much more experienced in bed than he should be, so is there something else going on here. And his peach tasting cum, what's that all about? Are girls getting addicted to him?
Was he made in a lab, designer super baby?

Both his parents worked in a lab and supposedly "died" in some unexplained way. He then gets basically adopted by the super-rich lab owner. Some weird tiger mutant comes looking for him BY NAME to kill him, and the notorious Crimson Shadow visits his room at night, risking Lady Steel's wrath? Nah, nothing at all sus here...

 

[e6mill]

I his shoes the first person *I* would use Evelyn's power on is Parker. Not bc I think she's a baddie, but bc I think she knows a lot more than she's telling us.

 

[Jarulf]

Nah, nothing at all sus here...

pretty much. I expect Crimson Shadow to be his first Super Villain conquest.
Maybe she isn't that bad, just working under cover ( literally one would hope soon) for some government agency or something.

 

[e6mill]

pretty much. I expect Crimson Shadow to be his first Super Villain conquest.
Maybe she isn't that bad, just working under cover ( literally one would hope soon) for some government agency or something.

She looks (to me) a lot like the new girl at school whose clothes we helped recover and knows what people get off on...

 

[Jarulf]

I his shoes the first person *I* would use Evelyn's power on is Parker. Not bc I think she's a baddie, but bc I think she knows a lot more than she's telling us.

I dare say she does. Is there a proper telepath or mind-reader character, I forget?

 

[Jarulf]

She looks (to me) a lot like the new girl at school whose clothes we helped recover and knows what people get off on...

Marina, I think. Yeah, perhaps. Not convinced they are the same though. But if CS is keeping tabs on him, she could definitely be in school.

 

[e6mill]

 

[Jarulf]

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Hmm. You have a point. Would that mean she has more than one power?

 

[satirious]

Hmm. You have a point. Would that mean she has more than one power?

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That's CS naked and it's missing some obvious features that Marina has.


Also, if you compare the rooms from those two scenes, they are different apartments.

 

[HornyyPussy]

That's CS naked and it's missing some obvious features that Marina has.
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Also, if you compare the rooms from those two scenes, they are different apartments.

But what the hell is Amber up to there???

 

[Jarulf]

That's CS naked and it's missing some obvious features that Marina has.
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Also, if you compare the rooms from those two scenes, they are different apartments.

You also have a point. A second flat could be explained by being part of a cover story, with Marina's being the fake one. The tats, well I don't know much about that so I don't know how real fake ones would look
But, that all seems a bit contrived. It might also make Marina's situation less interesting, why is she living like that? No adults around? What's her story.

 

[Jarulf]

But what the hell is Amber up to there???

Amber? What did I miss now?

 

[Jericho85]

Amber? What did I miss now?

You don't see her?