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satirious

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You also have a point. A second flat could be explained by being part of a cover story, with Marina's being the fake one. The tats, well I don't know much about that so I don't know how real fake ones would look
But, that all seems a bit contrived. It might also make Marina's situation less interesting, why is she living like that? No adults around? What's her story.
The ink, the bush and the tits are all different. Those are the obvious ones. If you look closer, the only thing they share is hair color and both are vaguely Asian. If you're playing on a smaller screen, it may not be as obvious. On my 72" screen, it's more obvious.
 

UnoriginalUserName

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What a terrible English. Hire an editor already, otherwise nothing is clear.
Well, you know, not everyone here is American. And not everyone understands your strange dialect. Sometimes it is impossible to understand what is meant at all. It’s much easier for me with the texts of the Australians, the guys are very literate. Books seem to be held in high esteem in prison.
It's pretty ironic and hypocritical that you're complaining about the English in the game when your own English appears to be on the level of Google-translated Mandarin or something similar.
 

Jarulf

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The ink, the bush and the tits are all different. Those are the obvious ones. If you look closer, the only thing they share is hair color and both are vaguely Asian. If you're playing on a smaller screen, it may not be as obvious. On my 72" screen, it's more obvious.
I played on my computer, but I'm in my phone right now.
But not that you point it out I definitely agree. Different ladies.
 

satirious

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That's the feeling I'm getting. My only very minor annoyance so far is how horny the MC is for Parker, when I as a player am completely indifferent to her sexually. There's a bit of a disconnect there, one certainly not unique to this game.
I have a suspicion that the MC doesn't have a choice when it comes to Parker being on his mind and his reaction to her. I suspect Parker isn't as "powerless" as most are assuming. That applies in game and with the reader. There are too many bread crumbs in the text to suggest that the MC's inner monologue about Parker and Riley at the start were "as he knew it" and not absolute facts.

Read that section a little more open minded to how it's worded and start paying attention to all the subtle mentions of Parker's influence on peoples state of mind and such. There are at least 20 such subtle hints that Parker can influence people and it's not just be showing her tits.
 
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Jarulf

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Very good point. I did notice that Parker had persuaded the board not only to continue to fund development of the vaccine, but also to increase it when they were about to just about drop it.
There's definitely more to her than implants.

Speaking of, and I may remember this wrong or perhaps I just read a little too quickly.
I think it was on his birthday, didn't she say she had implants only to say the opposite in chapter 4 or 5.
 
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