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Unfortunately....... hehe... JKI just thought that Canto Forte was just an actual confusin type of guy. I guess he just works hard at confusin us.
Wow, that dev notes already has this looking like a jewel
Here's some feedback based on that (not played yet):
Animation: Totally agree 100%. 90% of the games I see have pretty bad (imo, but my standards might not be reasonable) animation & the worst trap I see devs & players alike fall into are putting time into making animations at the cost of actual story content & playing such games just for the animation.
Even I see games that are basically real porn delivery system html games, only in renpy with animations
Even aside from the animations themselves, integrating them into the story properly is also very rare. Transitioning from picture to picture is already a skill that is often ignored.
So, yeah, no animation is 100% better than cringe animation.
But maybe throw in a few anyway so you get the tag atleast
"Incest Patch - The fact that the MC has been raised by Parker and alongside Riley since he was a baby means they are his mother and sister in everything but blood anyway. If incest is your thing, this needs to be enough.":
Again this goes totally to my tastes. A protag of unknown origins is always great in a supernatural setting.
So tired of ppl planning the characters/settings by cookie cutter kink settings instead of based on story needs. Such a story 1st approach has my vote at the very least.
One thing tho, hope this doesn't go to the other extreme either, of landlords & childhood/best friends.
If Patreon is a nuisance, create a patch file yourself that allows you to call your adoptive parents Mom & Dad, that allows you to tell your sister that blood relations doesn't matter, what makes a family is the bonds created, not the blood you're born with.
This type of setting is the true victim of the Patreon stance. Most patches go for proper incest while Patreon doesn't allow foster/adoptive/step incest, leaving these complicated settings with no representation
Also, an official patch will probably be great at stoping other incest patches from popping up ¯\_ (ツ)_/¯
(Also stuff like sisters 3some, mother-daugther 3some, etc gets flagged as incest by Patreon apparently)
Optional content:
" both giving and receiving content are separate optional content because some people might be open to sticking their dick in an ass but not their tongue. Some people might like sticking their tongue in an ass, but not having one in theirs. You get the picture."
Hopefully this exteds to "normal sex" too. Having the option to choose sex acts based on preference would be great as well, especially since:
”The femdom is not particularly hard either – Just some light cuffing, foot worship, face-sitting, edging, degradation, and submission."
Since stuff like oral/facesitting is part of femdom, it'd be nice if it (oral) wasn't forced in other parts of the story.
Having an option to choose/refuse sex acts separately would be a great feature that most games sadly ignore
Also be great if the male equivalent (rough bj) was available on the male bdsm path, including stuff like edging, submission etc.
It's sad how kinks are still somewhat gender locked, you rarely see foot worship out of femdom
Anyway, the bdsm/femdom will probably not be a big part of the game anyway, so it doesn't matter that much i guess.
Anyway, gonna try the game now, will append with feedback if I have any after playing.
Good Luck dev
Played the game, here's my notes & feedback:
Here's some feedback based on that (not played yet):
Animation: Totally agree 100%. 90% of the games I see have pretty bad (imo, but my standards might not be reasonable) animation & the worst trap I see devs & players alike fall into are putting time into making animations at the cost of actual story content & playing such games just for the animation.
Even I see games that are basically real porn delivery system html games, only in renpy with animations
Even aside from the animations themselves, integrating them into the story properly is also very rare. Transitioning from picture to picture is already a skill that is often ignored.
So, yeah, no animation is 100% better than cringe animation.
But maybe throw in a few anyway so you get the tag atleast
"Incest Patch - The fact that the MC has been raised by Parker and alongside Riley since he was a baby means they are his mother and sister in everything but blood anyway. If incest is your thing, this needs to be enough.":
Again this goes totally to my tastes. A protag of unknown origins is always great in a supernatural setting.
So tired of ppl planning the characters/settings by cookie cutter kink settings instead of based on story needs. Such a story 1st approach has my vote at the very least.
One thing tho, hope this doesn't go to the other extreme either, of landlords & childhood/best friends.
If Patreon is a nuisance, create a patch file yourself that allows you to call your adoptive parents Mom & Dad, that allows you to tell your sister that blood relations doesn't matter, what makes a family is the bonds created, not the blood you're born with.
This type of setting is the true victim of the Patreon stance. Most patches go for proper incest while Patreon doesn't allow foster/adoptive/step incest, leaving these complicated settings with no representation
Also, an official patch will probably be great at stoping other incest patches from popping up ¯\_ (ツ)_/¯
(Also stuff like sisters 3some, mother-daugther 3some, etc gets flagged as incest by Patreon apparently)
Optional content:
" both giving and receiving content are separate optional content because some people might be open to sticking their dick in an ass but not their tongue. Some people might like sticking their tongue in an ass, but not having one in theirs. You get the picture."
Hopefully this exteds to "normal sex" too. Having the option to choose sex acts based on preference would be great as well, especially since:
”The femdom is not particularly hard either – Just some light cuffing, foot worship, face-sitting, edging, degradation, and submission."
Since stuff like oral/facesitting is part of femdom, it'd be nice if it (oral) wasn't forced in other parts of the story.
Having an option to choose/refuse sex acts separately would be a great feature that most games sadly ignore
Also be great if the male equivalent (rough bj) was available on the male bdsm path, including stuff like edging, submission etc.
It's sad how kinks are still somewhat gender locked, you rarely see foot worship out of femdom
Anyway, the bdsm/femdom will probably not be a big part of the game anyway, so it doesn't matter that much i guess.
Good Luck dev
Played the game, here's my notes & feedback:
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You had me here
The term "optional love interest" doesn't exist to me
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Slut mom trope is not a first, it exists in many games, so trying to present it as something new is both inaccurate and unconvincing.
What I don't understand is that you said earlier that this scene had to be in the game to unlock another scene later in the story where the mother has sex with another man. Now that you canceled the scene where the mother has sex with another man later in the story, what is the point of having this scene in the game? Because that was the main reason.
So saying that there is such a scene to show that the "mother figure" is interested in young men is just an excuse, the real reason was what I wrote above.
Mc could find porn of a young man with a milf on his mother's laptop or adult magazines with young nude male models in his mother's room. etc...
I mean, is there any point in having this scene in the game anymore?
Is it worth losing the monetary support of some of your potential customers for a scene that no longer has any meaning and context?
Changing something that you think is going wrong does not make you weak, it makes you a smart person who is open to improvement.
What I don't understand is that you said earlier that this scene had to be in the game to unlock another scene later in the story where the mother has sex with another man. Now that you canceled the scene where the mother has sex with another man later in the story, what is the point of having this scene in the game? Because that was the main reason.
So saying that there is such a scene to show that the "mother figure" is interested in young men is just an excuse, the real reason was what I wrote above.
Mc could find porn of a young man with a milf on his mother's laptop or adult magazines with young nude male models in his mother's room. etc...
I mean, is there any point in having this scene in the game anymore?
Is it worth losing the monetary support of some of your potential customers for a scene that no longer has any meaning and context?
Changing something that you think is going wrong does not make you weak, it makes you a smart person who is open to improvement.
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Lol he never said that. He said there will be another voyeuristic render (yeah, just one render) with another future LI, but he decided scrap this idea thanks to the backlash from Parker's scene:
He NEVER said Parker will have sex with another man later in the story
Lol baffles me how people can spread incorrect/misinformation with such confindence they are right.
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I've said this in threads of other games in this forum. It seems to me that people here (not all but many) lack decent reading comprehensive skills. Apparently, most seem to respond from scanning a post, playing a game, then replying back to an OP they read, emotionally. They don't seem to Actually go back, read the OP to get the full understanding of what was said, then post a response.
You can change the names of save pages on certain Ren'Py games by clicking the "Page #" slot, but other than that, I don't think this particular game has that as a feature.
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seems this scene with parker is still the most controversial stuff right now, just replace this guy with a girl and everyone (probably) will be happy with some lesbian action. I honestly don't care about that scene, what happened in the past stay in the past
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Oh, you know nothing. There are people who despise girl on girl action to the heart and usually they let everyone know.
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THOSE BASTARDS! THEY KILLED KENNY!Oh, you know nothing. There are people who despise girl on girl action to the heart and usually they let everyone know.
no wait, that's not right.......oh well, those whiners will always find something to bitch about.....
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I am so angry at the thought of this i have to go beat somethingOh, you know nothing. There are people who despise girl on girl action to the heart and usually they let everyone know.
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most people hate complain about lesbian because most of the time, it's FORCED girl on girl content..Oh, you know nothing. There are people who despise girl on girl action to the heart and usually they let everyone know.
people like me, can tolerate it. (threesomes, group sex, etc) But, I also hate when it's forced.
there are people who downright hate it in any capacity.
even in group sex.
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I personally have no issues with that. I find it outright funny and smh when i read the complaints about it.
But, yeah...everyone to it's own i guess...
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Okay, you doesn't natural right? But why dev should make her a future Li? Is she worthy of being a Li in any way? Would you feel natural about her being a lover to MC? I mean, as a loyal romantic Li? Because, that's what dev intended about her in future.
Instead of that, I think he should write a scene where MC leaves her for good and never let her back into his life as a default option. And, now, that feels quite natural. Isn't it lol?
Rants aside, one thing is sure, dev has to work on Parker characterisation, particularly in writing, to convince us that she can also be worthy of being a Li. I know sluts who became good and married living as loyal wives for ages. It is, yes, natural. So, yeah, i'm ready to take her as a Li, if dev make sure she is worthy of being a Li in his future writings.
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They choose to fight for bigger evil. And you know what it is after seeing parker's scene lol.
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Yes, she is most definitely worthy of being a LI as she is, I see no need to change anything about her story but I understand why Jaq wants to.
So no, he doesn't really need to work on her characterization at all. If you don't like her character, don't say yes to her, problem solved......
This whining about Parker is just getting ridiculous at this point.....