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Overview:
Taking place twenty years after the Metagen-92 virus – aka the “Superflu” – has swept the world and rendered many of its adult population superpowered or mutated, Origin Story follows MC (name customizable), a seemingly normal nineteen-year-old struggling with his social status and his virginity, who is shunned by his peers due to his ability not yet manifesting. After the death of his parents when he was just a baby, he was raised by their close friend Parker Samson, an influential and beautiful woman who is now the co-owner of the lead organization behind Metagen research and development of the Metagen Vaccine.
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Thread Updated: 2024-02-02
Release Date: 2024-02-02
Developer: JDOR - -
Censored: No
Version: 0.2.0
OS: Windows, Linux, Mac
Language: English
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Good for you on making a stand for your game as well as explaining what is and isn't in the game and why? I hope that this will be a success for you.
 

Gabi99

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While I agree with the general thrust of what you say, the sentence I highlighted from your paragraph seems wrong to me. Obviously there are people who just "cry" about what they don't like and it's annoying and discouraging, but what's the point of not being able to write about the negatives for someone about a game? Under your logic, if there's something I don't like about a game the only thing I can do is to

a) cry about it
b) create my own game

Isn't there an option c) where I can argue why I didn't like a certain thing in a rational way? Yes, I know the word "rational" and f95 don't go hand in hand, but I repeat, locking all 'negative' comments into "just crying" seems unfair to me. Criticizing a certain aspect I didn't like about the game doesn't automatically make it a negative thing. Especially if you do it in a minimally polite way.
Look homie,im not here to argue aight,BUT i never said you shouln't write bad reviews and etc but most of the people here (no offense but if you cant handle the truth then...) are "salty" (like you) oh and please do try to prove me wrong,also maybe try reading again?That was meant for the dev and the dev only.
Edit:Just to clarify i meant that the dev DOESNT have to take the negative shit too serious
 

darlic

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When it came to choosing between having sex with Moonsong or refusing, fulfilling the promise MC made to Evelyn, I thought I would be punished with one less sex scene for doing what was the right choice for me, but to my pleasant surprise, this choice gave me sex with Evelyn and Moonsong.
Thank you so much for saving my playthrough, I didn't know this scene was possible. This is why I hate "your choices matter" games with a passion because I always end up making the wrong one :ROFLMAO: :cry: :ROFLMAO:
 
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Old Grumpy Wolf

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Thank you so much for saving my playthrough, I didn't know this scene was possible. This is why I hate "your choices matter" games with a passion because I always end up making the wrong one :ROFLMAO: :cry: :ROFLMAO:
Make sure to save when there's choices. It's what I do.
 

darlic

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Make sure to save when there's choices. It's what I do.
Yeah, now I don't want to throw undeserved shit on this fantastic game, but in this case, there are absolutely zero hints you're doing something "wrong". Sure, you later get to hear her disapproval about that, but I thought this was a "necessary" plot device to add a little bit more spice between mc and Evelyn's relationship. Turns out I was miles away but there is no way of knowing it, not even in hindsight. I always make saves, in fact I had one right before turning down Moonsong but I created it for replaying value, as I didn't expect that scene to possibly have other outcomes, for the reasons I stated earlier.
TLDR: please add a walkthrough in the game or something dev, I suck at choices lol
 

Old Grumpy Wolf

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Yeah, now I don't want to throw undeserved shit on this fantastic game, but in this case, there are absolutely zero hints you're doing something "wrong". Sure, you later get to hear her disapproval about that, but I thought this was a "necessary" plot device to add a little bit more spice between mc and Evelyn's relationship. Turns out I was miles away but there is no way of knowing it, not even in hindsight. I always make saves, in fact I had one right before turning down Moonsong but I created it for replaying value, as I didn't expect that scene to possibly have other outcomes, for the reasons I stated earlier.
TLDR: please add a walkthrough in the game or something dev, I suck at choices lol
I learned to save long ago in another game. Sometimes our understandnin of things don't mesh with what the dev is writin and we end up in situations where we don't want to be. Sometimes it can be funny, most times it's aggravatin.
 

The ArcKnight

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I'm going to give my opinion about the game, firstly making it clear that I have no intention of offending the developer, but if it seems that way it's because my English is rubbish.

I like Evelyn and Amber's interactions with the MC, their banter and how they seem to be good friends.

I look forward to seeing more moments with Amber and what sexual interactions with her will be like.

Regarding Evelyn, I personally don't like how her power works, and I would prefer it to have more to do with her being a bystander than her actually feeling the entire sexual act itself, this doesn't make me dislike her as LI, but I hope that from the moment Evelyn and the MC start having sex, she will be able to better control her power so as not to be linked to other people.

About Moonsong, I really liked her and the sex scenes, I would just prefer her to be a virgin, not because I think all women in games have to be virgins, it's just that some of them I like because of their personality.

Emerald, for example, I don't mind that she's not a virgin and I really liked the sex scenes with her.

When it came to choosing between having sex with Moonsong or refusing, fulfilling the promise MC made to Evelyn, I thought I would be punished with one less sex scene for doing what was the right choice for me, but to my pleasant surprise, this choice gave me sex with Evelyn and Moonsong.

About Parker, I really don't like her either as a LI or as a mother figure, I have no problem making it clear that she is very sexually active, what I don't like is how she acts about it, on the MC's birthday she flirts and goes to the bathroom with the waiter, or masturbates thinking about him, a waiter who also flirted with Evelyn who acted differently, this shows that Parker only cares about the pleasure she can feel with some random man, and the comment that MC talks about how after Parker's husband died, she brought men home to have sex without caring if MC was there and whether that would make him uncomfortable, this only supports the idea that she only cares about sex. This makes me believe that even if she had a romantic relationship with the MC, if a young man flirted with her, Parker wouldn't mind having sex with him.

If Parker hadn't reciprocated the waiter's flirting and just masturbated when he got home, and the MC's comment had been that he knows that since Parker's husband passed away she's had several casual encounters but never brought any of them home to not make MC and Riley uncomfortable, combined with the conversation Parker had with MC and Evelyn at the restaurant about her having previously worked as a stripper and having started her sex life when she was much younger than MC, it would be clear that she is very sexually active, but she still has some self control and cares a lot more about family than sex, that would make me see her in a much better light.

In a general context, I liked the game, the theme, the female models and the sex scenes, only Parker that I really didn't like, and the MC being turned on by Parker's sexual interactions with other men.
I agree with you on almost every point here.

Moonsong would have played better if she were a virgin, the innocent but curious/inqusitive would have fit her personality well.

Emerald is fire.

Evelyn's power working the way it does is problematic, nothing I would stop dating her for, but it does bother me if she uses it with other dudes or girls to feel other guys having sex with them. As is nothing I would stop fucking her for, depends on how this is used in the future.

Parker I can 100% agree with. I LOVE her look, but her personality towards sex is a major turn off. No one wants to think their mom's a whore, but seeing her go after the waiter or masturbating in the bathroom due to his flirting was a major ick factor for me. I know its to show how easily she would accept the MC as a sexual partner, but you can show that other ways as you said.

I'm looking forward to more, but the game definitely doesn't hit right on the mark for me due to the reasons above. I don't need everyone to be a perfect virgin, but at the same time, who wants to ride the town bike?
 

lorkdubo

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I agree with you on almost every point here.

Moonsong would have played better if she were a virgin, the innocent but curious/inqusitive would have fit her personality well.

Emerald is fire.

Evelyn's power working the way it does is problematic, nothing I would stop dating her for, but it does bother me if she uses it with other dudes or girls to feel other guys having sex with them. As is nothing I would stop fucking her for, depends on how this is used in the future.

Parker I can 100% agree with. I LOVE her look, but her personality towards sex is a major turn off. No one wants to think their mom's a whore, but seeing her go after the waiter or masturbating in the bathroom due to his flirting was a major ick factor for me. I know its to show how easily she would accept the MC as a sexual partner, but you can show that other ways as you said.

I'm looking forward to more, but the game definitely doesn't hit right on the mark for me due to the reasons above. I don't need everyone to be a perfect virgin, but at the same time, who wants to ride the town bike?
At least be a cool and self-admitted town bike tho. Nobody wants to be with the town bike who pretends to be holy and pure.
I, myself don't see any problems with Evelyn tho. Parker's attitude is quite a turn-off.
 

Sothasyll

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This game really satisifies a lot of my itches. The superpowers so far are all used in creative ways and they offer such hot scenes.

Man, I hope we see more of Lucia. I'm very biased because timestop is a personal fetish of mine, but the way Lucia uses it as well as her general personality seems like she'd offer an interesting experience. Also curious to see what "changing the meta" means for Fraser's power.
 

HornyyPussy

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This game really satisifies a lot of my itches. The superpowers so far are all used in creative ways and they offer such hot scenes.

Man, I hope we see more of Lucia. I'm very biased because timestop is a personal fetish of mine, but the way Lucia uses it as well as her general personality seems like she'd offer an interesting experience. Also curious to see what "changing the meta" means for Fraser's power.
He's gonna fuck with Zuckerberg........
 

McDentao

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Ever since I played, I've been wondering: would we get the physical mutations that come with some powers?
But like, two different cases, one the physical mutation has nothing to do with power and in the second, the mutation has to do with the power. For example, a girl with a tail, horns and red skin, but the power is cryokinesis, or in the second case Amber, we would obtain the physical mutation in one of these cases, and we would be able to control the mutation? And in Amber's case, would we become the InvisiBoy or could we turn off the invisibility?
 

HornyyPussy

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Ever since I played, I've been wondering: would we get the physical mutations that come with some powers?
But like, two different cases, one the physical mutation has nothing to do with power and in the second, the mutation has to do with the power. For example, a girl with a tail, horns and red skin, but the power is cryokinesis, or in the second case Amber, we would obtain the physical mutation in one of these cases, and we would be able to control the mutation? And in Amber's case, would we become the InvisiBoy or could we turn off the invisibility?
Damn, that's a good question. I guess a physical mutation is a part of the "power" that's given by the virus so the MC should get it as well.........hmmmm, gonna be interesting to see what Jaq has to say about this :)
 
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motseer

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Damn, that's a good question. I guess a physical mutation is a part of the "power" that's given by the virus so the MC should get it as well.........hmmmm, gonna be interesting to see what Jaq has to say about this :)
The nice thing about super powers is that you can make them up how you like them. You just have to get creative and sometimes alter the laws of the universe...:eek: I believe this one is some sort of viral mutation so... lots and lots of potential alterations to a really large number of DNA markers... not to mention various mutations of the virus itself. Anyway, all that by way of saying it's conceivable that the virus won't necessarily have the same exact effect on two different individuals. Plenty of room for writer's license in there. Jus' Sayin':cool:
 

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The nice thing about super powers is that you can make them up how you like them. You just have to get creative and sometimes alter the laws of the universe...:eek: I believe this one is some sort of viral mutation so... lots and lots of potential alterations to a really large number of DNA markers... not to mention various mutations of the virus itself. Anyway, all that by way of saying it's conceivable that the virus won't necessarily have the same exact effect on two different individuals. Plenty of room for writer's license in there. Jus' Sayin':cool:
True! Which is why I'm curious how Jaq will handle it ;)
 
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Well .. .you might have actually played this game before your wishful thinking deliberate out of context whining ... but the story shows you point blank and personal thaT:
MC has sex to get powers, because him being the only muddle kid in the places he lives his life in, if he could get them any other way, then he would be Rogue OP JUGGERNAUT by now with all the bullying he is handed every day.
Also, MC is literally living in a place of total femininity, absolute heaven for someone the girls are intrigued to do it all with - but these girly powers seem to work based on affinity, so MC never actually gives any mind to the power of feeling everything someone else feels, when he can summon a wolfette or fire itself.
Damn, that's a good question. I guess a physical mutation is a part of the "power" that's given by the virus so the MC should get it as well.........hmmmm, gonna be interesting to see what Jaq has to say about this :)
The nice thing about super powers is that you can make them up how you like them. You just have to get creative and sometimes alter the laws of the universe...:eek: I believe this one is some sort of viral mutation so... lots and lots of potential alterations to a really large number of DNA markers... not to mention various mutations of the virus itself. Anyway, all that by way of saying it's conceivable that the virus won't necessarily have the same exact effect on two different individuals. Plenty of room for writer's license in there. Jus' Sayin':cool:
Safe to say MC is well guarded against accidental power up or downs, as the power puff gang is fiercely guarding him as their personal diddling boy toy for the forseeable future, if not the whole duration of this game.... what consumate throbbingly exhilirationg heaven it would be!
 

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Well .. .you might have actually played this game before your wishful thinking deliberate out of context whining ... but the story shows you point blank and personal thaT:
MC has sex to get powers, because him being the only muddle kid in the places he lives his life in, if he could get them any other way, then he would be Rogue OP JUGGERNAUT by now with all the bullying he is handed every day.
Also, MC is literally living in a place of total femininity, absolute heaven for someone the girls are intrigued to do it all with - but these girly powers seem to work based on affinity, so MC never actually gives any mind to the power of feeling everything someone else feels, when he can summon a wolfette or fire itself.


Safe to say MC is well guarded against accidental power up or downs, as the power puff gang is fiercely guarding him as their personal diddling boy toy for the forseeable future, if not the whole duration of this game.... what consumate throbbingly exhilirationg heaven it would be!
Wow. I actually understood everythin you wrote. You can talk normal without confusin everyone. I'm literally impressed by this.
 
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