VN Ren'Py Origin Story [v0.6.0] [JDOR]

[dpx79]

I wouldn't mind her power tho... But Ruth's power is the one. She's MY waifu in this (so far). Imagine the damage of all that strength on him and a couple clones... ... ........... dust... the whole planet is dust...

Peace

Ruth is pure Tsundere but i really hope she doesn't lose that rough edge. Also after dong of ice and fire joke i hope he ends up with inferno and coldsnaps powers

 

[HiP1]

weird update. quite big, though. MC's face looks quite a bit better.
but characters acting out of character ?
Evelyn especially. far too focused on having sex that night and giving MC permission to fuck everyone. even weirder how she reacts to the rejection if we choose that.

I was hoping we would get a bit of progress with Amber. though, she got to indulge in her voyeurism kink by getting in MC's bedroom while he fucks Evelyn. Amber got explicit permission from Evelyn but we already know nothing will really happen until Moonsong fixes her. and it seems she is the redhead LI in this game... redhead fans must be eagerly waiting for her to control her power

and now we know MC *must* have Ruth's power before fucking her

during MC's dream, it seems he can't see what Marina sees with her power.

one thing that is not said out loud : MC can get powers from guys too with the pills. the game really wants to insist that he will only get powers from girls, like it is a limitation. I'm surprised Moonsong didn't suggest it herself, as she is bi, and she wants to experiment.

 

[-DarkSky-]

Android port?

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

Everyone, the MC is already overpowered.

He now has 2x (at least) the power of the 4 girls. If the clone can also duplicate, etc... how much powerful that is? If he gets the stopping time power... it's over. He's now an army.

Does he need extra powers? For the fun of it, yeah... but for real? No.

Him and a clone, the green power and 2 wolves... Game over.

Not to mention that he is now the solution for the gangbang fantasy of the wolf girl...

Peace

We still need to see what will be the limitation for his powers. We already know per the game's lore if a super is deemed too dangerous they are taken out by the autorities very fast. This could happen to Jack if this accumulation of powers has no limits.
I don't think the author will just forget all that to turn the game into a generic power fantasy.

Ruth is pure Tsundere but i really hope she doesn't lose that rough edge. Also after dong of ice and fire joke i hope he ends up with inferno and coldsnaps powers

She is playful but i don't really see her as a tsundere, specially because Ruth knows how easy it would be to hurt others que her super strenght.

 

[dpx79]

Maybe that's the point. if he is to powerful and sisters cant save him, then he is going to need help and in swoops this "aunt". but as i said still to early to know or as fatgaint would say cart before horse

 

[HiP1]

We still need to see what will be the limitation for his powers. We already know per the game's lore if a super is deemed too dangerous they are taken out by the autorities very fast. This could happen to Jack if this accumulation of powers has no limits.
I don't think the author will just forget all that to turn the game into a generic power fantasy.

we begin to see some hints of his limits.
seems he gets all the powers but not as powerful as the original. for now it passes as him not having mastered the power. he can't make more than one clone, he has a weaker psychic bond with his wolf, he can't choose his host, could have less control or energy output from the "green stuff"(TM)... also, having the wolf out drains him, so it's probably the same when he uses the other powers, and he gets limited like that. a bit like some kind of mana reserves. though he doesn't seem tired when drained.

Amber's invisibility might be related to her emotions. maybe she gets visible the better she feels. so a big orgasm will make her stay visible for a few days though she masturbates often, so it might have to be with a partner. some kind of feeling of being loved ? feeling seen ?

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

we begin to see some hints of his limits.
seems he gets all the powers but not as powerful as the original. for now it passes as him not having mastered the power. he can't make more than one clone, he has a weaker psychic bond with his wolf, he can't choose his host, could have less control or energy output from the "green stuff"(TM)... also, having the wolf out drains him, so it's probably the same when he uses the other powers, and he gets limited like that. a bit like some kind of mana reserves. though he doesn't seem tired when drained.

Amber's invisibility might be related to her emotions. maybe she gets visible the better she feels. so a big orgasm will make her stay visible for a few days though she masturbates often, so it might have to be with a partner. some kind of feeling of being loved ? feeling seen ?

I like this idea. So the more powers Jack tries to copy at the same time the less powerful said copies become and the less control he has over then. That could be a nice way to implement a limit to his powers. And it makes sense, he was able to use the green fire and call that black wolf without any training, but now with more powers he seems to be having less control over them.
This could also open up the possibility of Jack having to choose which powers too keep, which in turn could change how some situations unfold.

About Amber, i don't think it was anything to do with orgasm. She is a stalking voyeur creep, so i doubt she haven't masturbated A LOT.
But it may have some emotional/anxiety component to it.

 

[HiP1]

I like this idea. So the more powers Jack tries to copy at the same time the less powerful said copies become and the less control he has over then. That could be a nice way to implement a limit to his powers. And it makes sense, he was able to use the green fire and call that black wolf without any training, but now with more powers he seems to be having less control over them.
This could also open up the possibility of Jack having to choose which powers too keep, which in turn could change how some situations unfold.

About Amber, i don't think it was anything to do with orgasm. She is a stalking voyeur creep, so i doubt she haven't masturbated A LOT.
But it may have some emotional/anxiety component to it.

MC needing to drop powers, and then keep a pool of girls with useful powers around so he can switch the ones available could be funny as a harem setting

yeah, she already masturbated for sure. and she already ate his cum when they were both aroused, so at that time MC hadn't manifested yet, and we know her power is not related to touching or eating cum
we only know that something might have happened when she kissed him. but did she really reappear briefly or was it just a storytelling thing for fan service ?

 

[Elduriel]

we only know that something might have happened when she kissed him. but did she really reappear briefly or was it just a storytelling thing for fan service ?

I think it could be either, but if I had to guess it would be the first, her permanent invisibility may be more like a mental block over her having feelings for the MC (but not being able to do something about it coz of Evelyn) so when they kissed she temporarily dropped that block. But I'm just theorizing here.

 

[Hungover00]

MC needing to drop powers, and then keep a pool of girls with useful powers around so he can switch the ones available could be funny as a harem setting

yeah, she already masturbated for sure. and she already ate his cum when they were both aroused, so at that time MC hadn't manifested yet, and we know her power is not related to touching or eating cum
we only know that something might have happened when she kissed him. but did she really reappear briefly or was it just a storytelling thing for fan service ?

Having to have a logistics system to rotate powers in and out is such a perfect fit for this kind of harem. Maintaining at least fuck buddy status becomes important then, and it also goes from the MC just becoming Superman, to actually needing tactics, strategy, etc, but be a Swiss-Army Knife of a hero, adaptable and flexible, if a little tired and smelling of sex.

But he'll have to learn how to forget, or run into those hard limits.

 

[HiP1]

I think it could be either, but if I had to guess it would be the first, her permanent invisibility may be more like a mental block over her having feelings for the MC (but not being able to do something about it coz of Evelyn) so when they kissed she temporarily dropped that block. But I'm just theorizing here.

that's what we all hope for, at least. but then it means that if we are not on her path she will get sent off ? or allowing herself to love him freely even without him reciprocating would be enough ?

Having to have a logistics system to rotate powers in and out is such a perfect fit for this kind of harem. Maintaining at least fuck buddy status becomes important then, and it also goes from the MC just becoming Superman, to actually needing tactics, strategy, etc, but be a Swiss-Army Knife of a hero, adaptable and flexible, if a little tired and smelling of sex.

But he'll have to learn how to forget, or run into those hard limits.

yeah, and the most fun would be to prepare his powers depending on the team mates he runs with to complement them in the best way and having to hold sex back during missions to avoid screwing up the available powers and their efficiency ?
the pills could help for local logistics, but it would be funny as hell if he has to stock up on cum reserves for machines around the world that administers cum+hormones remotely while he also takes the blue pill at the same time on the other side of the planet xD

 

[dpx79]

TBH i dont think he can get too overpowered as you already know they have tech that supresses powers and there are always going to be bad match ups with others who are equally if not more powerful then him.

 

[Rehwyn]

we begin to see some hints of his limits.
seems he gets all the powers but not as powerful as the original. for now it passes as him not having mastered the power. he can't make more than one clone, he has a weaker psychic bond with his wolf, he can't choose his host, could have less control or energy output from the "green stuff"(TM)... also, having the wolf out drains him, so it's probably the same when he uses the other powers, and he gets limited like that. a bit like some kind of mana reserves. though he doesn't seem tired when drained.

Amber's invisibility might be related to her emotions. maybe she gets visible the better she feels. so a big orgasm will make her stay visible for a few days though she masturbates often, so it might have to be with a partner. some kind of feeling of being loved ? feeling seen ?

I like this idea. So the more powers Jack tries to copy at the same time the less powerful said copies become and the less control he has over then. That could be a nice way to implement a limit to his powers. And it makes sense, he was able to use the green fire and call that black wolf without any training, but now with more powers he seems to be having less control over them.
This could also open up the possibility of Jack having to choose which powers too keep, which in turn could change how some situations unfold.

About Amber, i don't think it was anything to do with orgasm. She is a stalking voyeur creep, so i doubt she haven't masturbated A LOT.
But it may have some emotional/anxiety component to it.

To be honest, I suspect that the main reason his current version of the powers he's gotten is noticeably weaker than the originals is more a factor of his lack of experience and practice with them than anything else. MC has had powers for all of 1-5 days at this point (depending on the power in question). There's no way he's going to be as good at controlling any of them as people that have had their power (and only their power) to learn and practice with for years. Especially since he hasn't really actively practiced with them yet.

Even in the future, I suspect the fact he has more powers than anyone else to try to learn means he's probably not going to be as good at any of them individually simply as a factor of time limitations, even if there isn't an inherent limitation to his absorbed power. It'd be like trying to learn to be good at every instrument in a band vs focusing on just one.

Of course, if "time limitations" is the main factor, if he gets and can control Lucia's time power he potentially could go DBZ-style Hyperbolic Time Chamber and compress years of training into weeks or days. And he does have a potential head-start if people are willing to train him in how to use their power, which could cut off a lot of time in the learning curve (for example, I suspect he'll have Evelyn's power under control within a couple days, whereas it took her months to learn).

 

[RC-1138 Boss]

yeah, she already masturbated for sure. and she already ate his cum when they were both aroused, so at that time MC hadn't manifested yet, and we know her power is not related to touching or eating cum
we only know that something might have happened when she kissed him. but did she really reappear briefly or was it just a storytelling thing for fan service ?

I think it could be either, but if I had to guess it would be the first, her permanent invisibility may be more like a mental block over her having feelings for the MC (but not being able to do something about it coz of Evelyn) so when they kissed she temporarily dropped that block. But I'm just theorizing here.

Jack was with his eyes closed so my first thought was that he was imagining Amber, but the idea that she may have undone her power for a brief moment without noticing makes sense too.

 

[Jericho85]

Jack was with his eyes closed so my first thought was that he was imagining Amber, but the idea that she may have undone her power for a brief moment without noticing makes sense too.

I definitely agree with the mental block theory. I suspect the mental block has more to do with her severe depression though. That moment when she was kissing the guy she liked let her forget things just for a moment. I think the moment she realizes that for herself is when the block is gone for good.

 

[Ssato243]

does the hero path have a harem or not?

 

[HornyyPussy]

does the hero path have a harem or not?

Not yet but it's coming.

 

[HiP1]

To be honest, I suspect that the main reason his current version of the powers he's gotten is noticeably weaker than the originals is more a factor of his lack of experience and practice with them than anything else. MC has had powers for all of 1-5 days at this point (depending on the power in question). There's no way he's going to be as good at controlling any of them as people that have had their power (and only their power) to learn and practice with for years. Especially since he hasn't really actively practiced with them yet.

Even in the future, I suspect the fact he has more powers than anyone else to try to learn means he's probably not going to be as good at any of them individually simply as a factor of time limitations, even if there isn't an inherent limitation to his absorbed power. It'd be like trying to learn to be good at every instrument in a band vs focusing on just one.

Of course, if "time limitations" is the main factor, if he gets and can control Lucia's time power he potentially could go DBZ-style Hyperbolic Time Chamber and compress years of training into weeks or days. And he does have a potential head-start if people are willing to train him in how to use their power, which could cut off a lot of time in the learning curve (for example, I suspect he'll have Evelyn's power under control within a couple days, whereas it took her months to learn).

in theory, if the tiger assault was not random, MC could be some kind of origin of all the powers and he doesn't really absorb them, but just gets them back, or reenables them by having his body/metagene remembering each power by coming into contact with it.

 

[Hungover00]

To be honest, I suspect that the main reason his current version of the powers he's gotten is noticeably weaker than the originals is more a factor of his lack of experience and practice with them than anything else. MC has had powers for all of 1-5 days at this point (depending on the power in question). There's no way he's going to be as good at controlling any of them as people that have had their power (and only their power) to learn and practice with for years. Especially since he hasn't really actively practiced with them yet.

Even in the future, I suspect the fact he has more powers than anyone else to try to learn means he's probably not going to be as good at any of them individually simply as a factor of time limitations, even if there isn't an inherent limitation to his absorbed power. It'd be like trying to learn to be good at every instrument in a band vs focusing on just one.

Of course, if "time limitations" is the main factor, if he gets and can control Lucia's time power he potentially could go DBZ-style Hyperbolic Time Chamber and compress years of training into weeks or days. And he does have a potential head-start if people are willing to train him in how to use their power, which could cut off a lot of time in the learning curve (for example, I suspect he'll have Evelyn's power under control within a couple days, whereas it took her months to learn).

Jack of All Powers, Master of None.

 

[dpx79]

I agree with the drain on his power. Doesn't matter how many powers he has because he only has limited energy so he is more of a utility power user rather then op user. Training will help but he will never be too overpowered once he runs out of steam.