VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[phantomedrealm]

One thing Lena really loves is sucking Mike's cock

 

[Xupuzulla]

IIRC Ian doesn't know who Gillian's boyfriend is. Billy is a very unlikely candidate, though -- Gillian's boyfriend moved to town a few months ago because he's found a job here, and that doesn't really fit Billy's circumstances.

edit: a fun fact, now that i thnk about it. When Chapter 10 was released, i thought the way the game avoided ever having Ian and Mike interact has gone to ridiculous level, with Jeremy (who is familiar with Mike, his coworker) for some reason choosing not to introduce him to Ian, his friend even though all three of them were in the same spot and shared the screen. But now, given Jeremy's reluctance to tell Ian about Gillian, his behavior regarding Mike would actually make certain sense, if Jeremy has learned recently that Mike is Gillian's new boyfriend, after seeing Gillian with him together at the club.

Guess we'll see.

Anyone who expects a twist about who Gillian boyfriend is will be dissapointed.
Im 90% sure Mike is dating that hoe,it just makes sense.

 

[88stanford88]

One thing Lena really loves is sucking Mike's cock

Lena really love cocks and not only the Mike one... but the sex scene with Mike are very good.. but I agree with you...

 

[DeemLeem12]

I think it will be fixed during revision.

have errors on cindycry (last Axel photoshoot)
I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
NameError: name 'cindycry' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "scripts/story/chapter_9_cindy.rpyc", line 906, in script
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 921, in execute
renpy.exports.say(who, what, *args, **kwargs)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1373, in say
who(what, *args, **kwargs)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\character.py", line 1266, in __call__
self.do_display(who, what, cb_args=self.cb_args, dtt=dtt, **display_args)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\character.py", line 927, in do_display
display_say(who,
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\character.py", line 666, in display_say
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='say', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\ui.py", line 299, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3377, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3810, in interact_core
root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 582, in visit_all
d.visit_all(callback, seen)
[Previous line repeated 5 more times]
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 572, in visit_all
for d in self.visit():
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1494, in visit
self.update(self.last_st, self.last_at)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1505, in update
raw_child, redraw = self.function(st, at, *self.args, **self.kwargs)
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1596, in condition_switch_show
return condition_switch_pick(switch), None
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1587, in condition_switch_pick
if renpy.python.py_eval_bytecode(code):
File "C:\Users\User\Downloads\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1085, in py_eval_bytecode
return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
File "<none>", line 1, in <module>
NameError: name 'cindycry' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.19045 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
Our Red String v11_Alpha
Fri Jul 7 11:47:11 2023

Brother, please use 'spoilers' when posting bugs and errors.

 

[moovigym]

Give Ed a chance

 

[Prinzessfreya]

Don't turn this into GOT S8 where it's all about "subverting expectations". Mike fits Gillian's boyfriend so well from all the details in the game. It also make sense from a narrative point of view and is more interesting this way given the possible decisions we can do in the game. Changing this because "audience already knows the twist" just screams that the author just wants to feel smart by proving people wrong and inadvertently ruining the established hints and narrative potential for a cheap "plot twist".

Or you doing it like rian johnson: subverting expectations and here we gave you shit ^_^

 

[ffive]

......is there a theory that Seymour is her dad?

Yes, though people base it mostly on Lena and Seymour sharing eye color and Lena's dad abandoning them early, so at this point it's quite a stretch.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Question: I haven't been lurking on here much after the release of Chapter 11 but has anyone genuinely liked this update?

 

[ffive]

Yes?

 

[Codename:golden]

Mac release?

 

[MF_DOOM]

Question: I haven't been lurking on here much after the release of Chapter 11 but has anyone genuinely liked this update?

I didnt like the story progression but the sex scenes were fine I think.

 

[Arata20]

One thing Lena really loves is sucking Mike's cock
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Like everyone else, because they have the same pics.

 

[Johnson2588]

anyone knows how to fix this? i'm tired seeing this errors

I'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
NameError: name 'cindycry' is not defined

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
  File "scripts/story/chapter_9_cindy.rpyc", line 1204, in script
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\ast.py", line 1658, in execute
    renpy.exports.with_statement(trans, paired=paired)
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\exports.py", line 1657, in with_statement
    return renpy.game.interface.do_with(trans, paired, clear=clear)
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 2798, in do_with
    return self.interact(trans_pause=True,
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3377, in interact
    repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, pause=pause, pause_start=pause_start, pause_modal=pause_modal, **kwargs) # type: ignore
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 3810, in interact_core
    root_widget.visit_all(lambda i : i.per_interact())
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 582, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback, seen)
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 582, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback, seen)
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 582, in visit_all
    d.visit_all(callback, seen)
  [Previous line repeated 6 more times]
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\core.py", line 572, in visit_all
    for d in self.visit():
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1494, in visit
    self.update(self.last_st, self.last_at)
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1505, in update
    raw_child, redraw = self.function(st, at, *self.args, **self.kwargs)
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1596, in condition_switch_show
    return condition_switch_pick(switch), None
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\display\layout.py", line 1587, in condition_switch_pick
    if renpy.python.py_eval_bytecode(code):
  File "D:\Notforlong\OurRedString-v11_Alpha-pc\renpy\python.py", line 1085, in py_eval_bytecode
    return eval(bytecode, globals, locals)
  File "<none>", line 1, in <module>
NameError: name 'cindycry' is not defined

Windows-10-10.0.17763 AMD64
Ren'Py 8.0.3.22090809
Our Red String v11_Alpha
Fri Jul  7 14:18:27 2023

 

[ffive]

anyone knows how to fix this? i'm tired seeing this errors

Is this when playing from a save, or with fresh start? If the former then might want to try starting the game from scratch with new build; odds are some changes could make old saves incompatible in some ways.

 

[| Vee |]

Question: I haven't been lurking on here much after the release of Chapter 11 but has anyone genuinely liked this update?

There are some good parts and some bad. Story progression seems to have backed a bit (might be me) will wait till final release.
Bit of hanged and kinda feels rushed. Animations are improved too and EK art seems to improved too.

 

[noturiah]

Question: I haven't been lurking on here much after the release of Chapter 11 but has anyone genuinely liked this update?

My sense is there's about 2/3 of people posting here who were unimpressed generally but liked certain things, and 1/3 who did like it generally. My own opinion is that I do like what's in the update, but it feels slim overall. Also I think I was expecting more forward story movement and Eva gave us - being upfront about it in one of her Patreon update posts - more character exploration and continued plot setups rather than plot payoffs. But I see that as my own expectations and not a fault with the chapter. A few characters didn't appear at all or were used only in exposition roles, while others were given multiple sex scenes, and that can be great or annoying depending on which characters you like better/want more content for. Generally people here have agreed the sex scenes themselves were solid and the art very good.

 

[bauman]

Question: I haven't been lurking on here much after the release of Chapter 11 but has anyone genuinely liked this update?

I thought the update was solid. A bit underwhelming compared to the excellent Chapter 10 because there was little story progression and some scenes that felt like a retread. Also, little to no Ivy or Minerva on Ian's part was a bummer, especially since I thought the scene Ivy had with Ian was the perfect opportunity to get the ball rolling on that path.

 

[| Vee |]

There's at least the possibility. It's an old thought of mine that there could be something deeper to Ivy's feelings for Lena. When it comes down to it, Lena is her only social contact that doesn't depend on sex or materialism.

If anything though I think it might be subconscious, maybe Ivy doesn't realise she feels lonely? She does sometimes come off as having a bit of tunnel-vision when it comes to her desires, evidenced how Axel made a fool of her in regards to Wildcats despite her knowing very well that he isn't a dude that keeps his promises.

That was exactly my thoughts on first playthrough of ORS about IVY. She is kinda keeping herself reserved from getting any kinda attachment/commitment emotionally and she just lives on edge that's the life she is living continuously. Her behavior towards Lena is on more emotional level but she just flips/goes extreme sometimes not in order to hurt Lena but out of habit.

EDIt: LIKE SOME DEFENCE MECHANISM

 

[popple]

My opinion is : by producing a game that is more "intellectual" than GGGB, EK satisfies only a part of her fans ; and (as myself) the ones who don't speak fluent english are lost... I will take a look at the game when it will be completed, but i don't expect to really enjoy the final result (even GGGB could have more interesting endings).

 

[| Vee |]

You might be right but it can be like this too

I feel when he talks about "that person" he means it as "that dude you cheated on me with (whoever he is)". In fact, if Ian knew the guy's identity then it makes little sense his name never comes up, in the dream in this chapter nor anywhere else -- it's always just "The Guy" or "he", even if it'd be natural for Gillian in Ian's dream to refer to him by name,

It just that when people take emotionally massive hit they tend to indirectly approach those things. Some people I watched around show this exact behavior referring to the person the one their partner cheated with as "that one" etc. Even Gillian mention him as Her boyfriend and not mentions his name(check how she talks about him).

for Ian questioning Jeremy to simply ask "was she with X" than the roundabout way he goes about it. Lena, who is in similar situation, has no trouble with calling Cherry "Cherry", instead of only ever "that girl".

Jeremy gives impression that he doesn't know the one Gillian cheated with. Ian also gives this impression many times that Ian didn't discussed details with anyone before and just kept things in closet. this might be reason that Jeremy doesn't know him otherwise he would have said so to lessen the damage he done by not telling Ian that Gillian is back.

Cherry was introduced way before to Ian and Lena came clean a bit later but Lena is more open than Ian so her rage is what pushed her to share her ideas.

* Lena can share her thoughts with Ivy at least Ian doesn't have that otherwise Ian would've shared his thoughts with Perry, Wade, Emma or Jeremy.

EK also had gone to lengths to keep his Identity hidden.