VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12.3 Alpha] [Eva Kiss]

[Gicoo]

I think the main issue is that Eva is essentially creating 2 visual novel games at once and trying to combine both of them. It is an incredibly ambitious goal but it means that the sheer amount of choices/routes will take a super long time to write.

Don't worry, Eva learned their lesson and will never have two protagonists again.

Next game will have three protagonists.

 

[ffive]

This isn't the second half of chapter 12? If we get Lenas section later, then this would be the second quarter? Then this chapter would require one year to develop instead of just ~eigt months.

I think the conclusion to Ian's part will also conclude the beach trip, which means all these permutations of plots coming to the head will be dealt with. This should make Lena's part much easier/faster to produce in comparison.

 

[Gicoo]

Another possibility: Lena doesn't even have a proper beach part, the trip is only from Ians PoV, just like how Ivys birthday was entirely from Lenas PoV and Ian was just a NPC there.

 

[BlandChili]

Another possibility: Lena doesn't even have a proper beach part, the trip is only from Ians PoV, just like how Ivys birthday was entirely from Lenas PoV and Ian was just a NPC there.

Well Eva already previously stated that the beach trip would be entirely from Ian's POV. Lena having a random temporary POV shift last update put that into question however, which is probably where the confusion comes from.

 

[Skylark21]

Well Eva already previously stated that the beach trip would be entirely from Ian's POV. Lena having a random temporary POV shift last update put that into question however, which is probably where the confusion comes from.

So I guess Lena's part for chapter 12 would be centered around Seymour's trip. But what about alternative? for people who aren't on his route.

 

[noturiah]

Well Eva already previously stated that the beach trip would be entirely from Ian's POV. Lena having a random temporary POV shift last update put that into question however, which is probably where the confusion comes from.

It's entirely possible that's why I'm confused. Where did Eva say that the beach trip was entirely going to be from Ian's pov? I don't remember seeing that, but it's very possible I missed it somewhere - I was playing catch-up with the last two updates and didn't get to them until a week or more after they dropped.

 

[robs1234]

It's entirely possible that's why I'm confused. Where did Eva say that the beach trip was entirely going to be from Ian's pov? I don't remember seeing that, but it's very possible I missed it somewhere - I was playing catch-up with the last two updates and didn't get to them until a week or more after they dropped.

it will probably be like last update where we got a small part of Lena pov, i think it will be the same after Ian povs is finish we start with lena where she either go to that old perv dude or back in town idk

 

[Lazarusxgames]

i have a question for anyone who can and willign to answer really, not really related to the game but more to the art(style) from this game. i myself i'm working as a renpy coder for other devs but i wa thinking about creating my own AVN. í really love evas art style so does anyone know how Eva creates her art? if i had to guess probably ai ? but i not entirely sure. so does anyone know and can help me out.

thank you

 

[ffive]

So I guess Lena's part for chapter 12 would be centered around Seymour's trip. But what about alternative? for people who aren't on his route.

She hangs out and has sex with the rest of the cast? Lena can potentially talk earlier with Jeremy about spending some time together. Then there's her regular lineup of dudes (and Stan) as well as girls who would be more than happy to keep her company.

 

[robs1234]

i have a question for anyone who can and willign to answer really, not really related to the game but more to the art(style) from this game. i myself i'm working as a renpy coder for other devs but i wa thinking about creating my own AVN. í really love evas art style so does anyone know how Eva creates her art? if i had to guess probably ai ? but i not entirely sure. so does anyone know and can help me out.

thank you

as far as i know she draw it herself with her style over a similar random image from the internet when she does scenes.

 

[Dirtydan6996]

i have a question for anyone who can and willign to answer really, not really related to the game but more to the art(style) from this game. i myself i'm working as a renpy coder for other devs but i wa thinking about creating my own AVN. í really love evas art style so does anyone know how Eva creates her art? if i had to guess probably ai ? but i not entirely sure. so does anyone know and can help me out.

thank you

it's not really something complicated. she takes chooses a pornstar/model and traces a line art for the character and color's it. and for scenes, she takes a images probably of the pornstar or as a reference and does the same.

 

[mommysboiii]

the stat requirements are a nightmare and give me a headache

Its like ultra hard mode for cuck/ntr you only try to go for one person/ loyal

but than you get problems in future if you sleep with holly but dont commit she can slowly turn into a slut

but what if in the future to get with her into a relationsip my ian needs 9 hotnessmy cuck/ntr ian dosent has high skills at all.... not a sex god

same will gillian in future.....

very difficult to play with low stats and get the girl

 

[xnxxfreak99]

the stat requirements are a nightmare and give me a headache

Its like ultra hard mode for cuck/ntr you only try to go for one person/ loyal

but than you get problems in future if you sleep with holly but dont commit she can slowly turn into a slut

but what if in the future to get with her into a relationsip my ian needs 9 hotnessmy cuck/ntr ian dosent has high skills at all.... not a sex god

same will gillian in future.....

very difficult to play with low stats and get the girl

Rip inglis

 

[mommysboiii]

I wonder if we'll get one more change out of the characters, or if they're locked in. Obviously there are a few variables we've found in the code for some tattoos on Holly, Lena, and Ian that haven't been implemented yet and Eva has talked about the potential for facial hair for Ian.

But I'm talking about overall appearance. Like will there be another wardrobe change for Allison, Emma, and Cindy or really for everyone? Honestly I'd like to see Cherry, Ivy, and Louise get some updates, as they've been very static with their wardrobes. Will Holly, Ian, and Lena get another physical appearance change to match their fitness levels? Will I ever see Allison with a navel piercing again?! With the characters at the beach, and Cindy on a boat, it would be a good time to introduce tans.

There will probably be some final appearance changes for the ending scenes like there were for GGGB, but I'm thinking more what they'll look like for the next 2-4 chapters or whatever. Again, just another example, Ian can tell Emma he likes her sluttier look at the beach and she'll change into her club outfit. What if when they get back Emma and Lena go on another shopping trip and Emma buys a new outfit, maybe with Lena's help?

I would like to see ivy destroy cindys career

And cindy turns into a hooker

Bad ending.... ( jess 2)

 

[mommysboiii]

I imagine we'll see upgraded Stan at some point, if nothing else.

Also pregnant Alison :hidethepain:

Who is the father

 

[mommysboiii]

I hope we'll see the necklets Ian can buy for Alison, Lena, etc. incorporated into outfits.

Yeah cindy wear that

God axel spay cum on that shit

 

[mommysboiii]

All this talk about change in visual appearance got me thinking if we would get one for Wade and Perry. For Perry I really doubt it as there has been nothing to indicate it so it would come out of nowhere if it were to happen. As for Wade, I have recently taken a liking to his character arc. Maybe if he amicably breaks up with Cindy, he can fully focus on his E-sport career and in his free time get back in shape and maybe fix his wardrobe. Maybe something to indicate he is a gamer but still hip and cool .

I always told wade revenge arc

Ians big rival

 

[amber111]

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Something about their pose here strikes me as Holly either casually letting Emma know that she can hear her and Ian through the walls, and / or inviting Emma to join her and Lena later that night for some more "private" fun. Emma doing a double take to either statement not expecting them from Holly of all people.

Will definitely come back to this post in 1-4 weeks time.

Emma has been self-conscious about her image, just like Holly was before she became friends with Lena and Ivy. Emma thinks she needs to be more slim and feminine like Lena, and she sees the same in Holly right now. I think Emma is admiring the change in the confidence of Holly, and also wants the same for herself.

 

[mommysboiii]

Wade needs to return to be the chad we all want him to be and cuck Ian of course

I pray for wade chad/revenge arc

 

[mommysboiii]

I really hope that Mike is Gillian's boyfriend, and that in the end she is devastated to discover that he is unfaithful. Then she tries to return to Ian, but he rejects her, and leaves with a faithful Lena.

That, and that Ian can get revenge on Mike by winning in the final of the boxing tournament.

By the way, do you think Eva Kiss will include bloody endings? Like when we could die in one of the GGGB endings, and when some characters could commit suicide depending on our actions. No, I don't want our ex to die, just to suffer a little.

Nooo take her back PepoRage