VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Deleted member 3064965]

I think that if Lena defended her independence and refused, then Seymour will try to get close to her through Ian who works with him. But if he is romantically involved with Lena, he may be able to build a partnership with Seymour, showing his qualities and strengths that will come in handy in Seymour's business and somehow not give him too many opportunities to influence the situation with Lena. I see Ian as the administrator of one of Seymour's establishments, sort of a "negotiator" for him (for example, with old perverts like Agnes or something less corrupted) or doing something in Hierofant.

That sounds like a plausible way for it to happen. Though it would still limit Ian to being a pawn in Seymour's game, at least in the beginning. And is it likely that Seymour will ever admit defeat in his pursuit of Lena, as long as Ian has a relation to her? Not necessarily.

I guess the alternative is that Seymour really tries to destroy Lena's life, as he threatened to — and that he somehow also tries to get Ian to help him. Either through being open about what he's doing, or through pretending to have good intentions, and somehow tricking Ian into helping him without understanding the consequences of what he's doing.

Let's say Ian and Lena decides to be in a relationship, and Lena then sleeps with Axel immediatelly afterwards, while she rejects Seymour. If Ian finds out about Lena and Axel, and Seymour then offers him lots of money to help him make Lena's life uncomfortable, it would give him a reason to choose Seymour's side, with Lena being on the other side. It would be petty of him, but still.

Generally I like the idea of Ian and Lena ending up as kind of enemies, through how they decide to relate to Seymour. And considering they both had the chance to cheat immediately after the relationship talk, I get the feeling there will be chances for their relationship to end incredibly bad way before the end of the story.

And yes, as several others have noted, Seymour is an intolerable, self-righteous asshole. I don't like him as a person at all. But I absolutely think he's good for the story (or at least he could be, it's still a bit early to pass a final judgement).

Edit: And regarding the picture in Eva's latest Patreon post: The file name is actually "v4_seymour4.png", so I guess that removes any remaining doubt about what scene it's taken from.

 

[Armada1987]

It would be nice to see a bit of BDSM action as Ian dominates Minerva and Lena Louise it would be nice to see

 

[lcvargas]

Is there a Lena X Axel Scene on ch. 9? Also Ian x Cindy?

 

[lipe2410]

Is there a Lena X Axel Scene on ch. 9? Also Ian x Cindy?

Yes, for both

 

[lcvargas]

Yes, for both

Ok, yeah, I was surprised when I used unren and saw CGs for both scenarios. I though there was a secret CG that is not used.

 

[PervySageKem]

The story is far from end dude. And Eva already confirmed that threesomes are coming for Ian, too.

Threesomes and meaningful relationships are very different things. I like the latter more.

 

[Dudlbert]

Well, Ian can kiss and have sex with Holly if he went with her to the book fair. If he is dating Lena, she will get pissed and will break with him. If he only kiss Holly, Lena will be mad but can forgive Ian sometime later. And if Ian just kiss Holly, he will say to her that he and Lena are dating and he have feelings for Lena, but he have feelings for Holly too. And Holly seems like to know that Ian like her. And Lena can want kiss Holly in the end of chapter 8, which will make she be aware of the attraction she have for Holly. So my guess is that the throuple can happen if Ian and Lena become a open-couple and in the future realize that they have feelings for the same person: Holly.

So finally at the part you mentioned BUT Lena stops right before the kiss and

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[Solomon Grundy]

Therefor i still have hope for Ian/Lena/Holly.

AKA The Holly Trinity.

 

[lsrolla]

perfect game that i just played recently

 

[lipe2410]

So finally at the part you mentioned BUT Lena stops right before the Kiss and

Yeah, she back off, i forgeted mentioned that, but the thing is this could keep Lena interested in Holly. Like i say, the right path for Ian x Lena x Holly is unknown but i'm going this way hoping this can be possible in the future

 

[CoalPhelps]

I really hate the double standards that exist in this community.

There is no reason for a throuple situation to be impossible. Girls can fuck other girls all they want, because people for some reason consider lesbian sex "not real", or something. Lena can fuck the other girls and Ian would probably be okay with it, Alison wants a threesome with Jeremy and that's okay, Cindy cheats on Wade with Ian, but Ian can't have two girls?

That's horseshit. In most games/visual novels there is this underlying problem: girls can fuck with other girls and it's okay. Guys can't.

If it's about me, then I never said that any of this is normal or better than this. I'm not a fan of cheating, let alone lesbian content and corruption of Holly.

 

[Dudlbert]

Yeah, she back off, i forgeted mentioned that, but the thing is this could keep Lena interested in Holly. Like i say, the right path for Ian x Lena x Holly is unknown but i'm going this way hoping this can be possible in the future

Well could go in either way Btw if you didnt go with Holly right at the start of CH9 while in the cafe with Holly Ian says something like "shes warming up to me again." So this could also be a direction

We will see

 

[CoalPhelps]

Well could go in either way Btw if you didnt go with Holly right at the start of CH9 while in the cafe with Holly Ian says something like "shes warming up to me again." So this could also be a direction

We will see

This is a phrase without any subtext, just Holly distanced herself from Ian a little, so that she can cope with feelings and the fact that he is now with Lena.

 

[Armada1987]

Ian and Minerva give me such a vibe of the road and Lena and Louis the same since that's how they started

 

[PervySageKem]

If it's about me, then I never said that any of this is normal or better than this. I'm not a fan of cheating, let alone lesbian content and corruption of Holly.

Yeah, I was speaking generally not about you in specific, sorry. I despise non-consensual sharing and 99% of games with threesome paths, harem paths or multiple characters have this notion that it's perfectly fine for the girls to play around with each other and it's never cheating. Lesbian content should always be an option, and not forced, even in Harem games.

But that's just my opinion.

 

[Overfoxed]

Ian, Jeremy and Stan

Give the people what they want -

Ian x Old Stan x New Stan

 

[Deleted member 3064965]

Yeah, she back off, i forgeted mentioned that, but the thing is this could keep Lena interested in Holly. Like i say, the right path for Ian x Lena x Holly is unknown but i'm going this way hoping this can be possible in the future

I’m pretty confident this is one of the key moments. The scene was changed several times — at first Lena could have sex with Holly even if she was fully invested in the relationship with Ian. But I guess Eva had second thoughts about it, because in the final version of the chapter the kissing option was greyed out if she was dating Ian.

It wasn’t until the release of the next chapter that the scene was changed to it’s current state — we can choose to kiss Holly, but Lena stops herself. I assume there’s some future development in the story that doesn’t quite fit with Lena and Holly having sex, and doesn’t quite fit with Lena not even considering it either. And that future development really sounds like the throuple to me.

 

[PervySageKem]

I've advanced a little further into the story.

So: Lena agreed to have a threesome with Axel and Cherry in the past. There is a possibility for Jeremy, Ivy, Louise and Lena to have fun together...

Why the fuck is the MAIN male character the only one that can't have that? This shit tilts me so much. And I hate how in these games the authors always like to retroactively put more baggage on to the main love interest.

"Yeah, I had a threesome with him. I also had a gangbang for Blacked.com. Ah, and there was the time I serviced the entire 88th Marine Corps regiment and let them run a train on me."

For the love of God.

 

[pavlogrk]

Here's a nude Nancy A photo for everyone to relieve that sexual frustration in the air in the current thread. It's who EvaKIss based Cindys model on for anyone who didn't put two and two together. Just kinda wish she was 5'10 instead of 5'6 cause i like girls over 5'9 lmao. Gotta wonder though if any of the others are based on real life porn actresses or models. View attachment 1592215

Haven't seen her before, thanks ..... LOl

 

[PervySageKem]

I just finished the available content:

I have to say, this game is pretty good. It shoehorns a certain type of behavior and isnt the most pleasant experience to "ride" if you are looking for a nice romance or two, but it is enjoyable.

Character art is great, Ian is a massive chad and Lena is adorable. I don't how the author continually used Ivy as a way to keep retroactvely changing Lena's past, adding more and more baggage to it, but I guess it's fine. You can ignore it pretty easily.

Either way, it seems very difficult to avoid corruption in this game. If its not Ian or Lena, it's Holly through Ivy, Alison or Emma through Jeremy, Cindy through Axel. I liked it better in GGGB, since you had full control and you could voluntarily go for the Corruption Route with the right mindset and enjoy it completely. In fact, some of my favourite routes were Corrupt in GGGB. But in ORS it seems like there isn't a way to avoid it, which is a shame.

There was an option to have an Open Relationship with Lena after all. But it required her being with Robert, Mike, or Louise. I don't really like that, as far as it might seem, since I don't like either of those people. They don't fit well with Lena (at least my Lena).

I'm hoping for a change in this in the future. It seems greedy from my part, but I really would like to have a serious relationship with Lena and Cindy. If not possible with both, at least have Cindy on the side.

Either way, Eva is a great dev. This game is great and is Top 5 or 6 in my short list of this site.

Looking forward for the future.