VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[BloodyMares]

So why shoudl eva kiss set up such dialogue in the game when the biological father will not play a role later on in the game? no point in that. Of course Lenas real father will be discovered later on and play a role... and looking at her and seymours eyes, i dont think its a coincidence that they hafe the very same eyes.

Well, revealing that Lena is not related to her dad doesn't have to make her biological father relevant (Axel also has "piercing cold blue eyes" but he's not Seymour's son), but might hint at certain Patreon-safe opportunities later. Also, the game early on mentioned Lena's brother who so far didn't make an appearance but might play a role later into the story, and if it turns out he's only her step-brother (being the son of her not-father before he married her mother), then, well, implications are clear. It could go either way and depends on what Eva plans to do with that. But yeah, this chekhov's gun is hanging on a wall to be used later.

 

[jojogeo]

BECAUSE MAYBE HER STEP DAD LIKE LENA? THEN WHY ELSE DOES IANS COMMENT ABOUT LENAS REALATIONSHIO WITH HER ADOPTED FATHER HAS A SMILEY FACE?

Whose step-dad ?

 

[pavlogrk]

Whose step-dad ?

only one step dad in the game bruh....... Lena's !

 

[dolfe67]

So why shoudl eva kiss set up such dialogue in the game when the biological father will not play a role later on in the game? no point in that.

Maybe the point is just to challenge you if you want to keep helping your *now* stepdad or not and nothing else

 

[Hahn1900]

Well, revealing that Lena is not related to her dad doesn't have to make her biological father relevant (Axel also has "piercing cold blue eyes" but he's not Seymour's son), but might hint at certain Patreon-safe opportunities later. Also, the game early on mentioned Lena's brother who so far didn't make an appearance but might play a role later into the story, and if it turns out he's only her step-brother (being the son of her not-father before he married her mother), then, well, implications are clear. It could go either way and depends on what Eva plans to do with that. But yeah, this chekhov's gun is hanging on a wall to be used later.

of course, it doesnt HAVE to be relevant, but lets face it... i dont know about you, but i cant remeber any story, novel, book, movie, series, game or whatever where its mentioned that a main protag knows about the fact that ( at least one part) of the parents are not their biological ones without being relevant later on. There is just no point in it to mention that, doesnt add anything to the character of Lena.

and yeah, as you said "this gun will be used later" iam absolutely sure about it, same goes for the troublesome brother... he will play a role too.

 

[pavlogrk]

Just because Lena has a stepfather, it doesn't mean that Mr. Ward is the biological one ffs!

 

[Hahn1900]

It's an interesting topic, I said the exact same thing a year ago when chapter 9 first released. The matching eyes and the dialogue about her dad are the two hints we have so far. If we're right on the money i think it will be Eva's "big reveal" in the later stages of the game. But, when you think about it why wouldn't Lena know who her biological dad is ? her mom didn't tell her ? Why ? maybe because she wanted to keep Lena away from him (because he is evil ?).... and why didn't Lena investigate to seek the truth ? wasn't she curious ? maybe she just doesn't care, or maybe she knows who her real dad is and it's someone we don't know/haven't met yet.... There is also another character i am very curious about and that is the homeless man, i think he will play a major role in Seymour's path later on.

Well Lena said herself she doesnt care for her "real" dad cause to her... her adoptive father was always her dad, no matter what... she loves him, he loves her, no point in being curious about a biological father who vanished out of her lifes and abondoned her and her mother...

Maybe there is more to it than Lena knows (in fact i think there is more to it) but to her, everything was fine like it is and no point in questioneing her relationship with her parents... so far. I think this will change, late ron in the game Eva Kiss will reval who her real father is, and i think its a more than sure bet its seymour... MAYBE seymour even knows this. Wouldnt surprise me...

But yeah, enough said about it... we dont know, i think its very obvious, but we will know for sure late ron... MUCH later on. The game is planned out to get 18-20 chapters as far as i know. And if her real father will be relevant, i think it will be revealed about chapter 15 or so. At least to the audience.

 

[Hahn1900]

JUSt because lena has a step father that doen't mena tha mr Ward is he biological one ffs!

yadda yadda yadda, yeah i got it, you cant think straight for one second, just let it be... you obviously cant get your head around the fact that this game is a soap opera and what a soap opera is all about (social character drama btw)... just throw facepalms and thats it, your postings doesnt make any sense anyway... god (if there is one) bless the ignore button. *wave*

 

[Doppelgang]

I doubt Seymour is Lena's father.

First of all, I think it's too big a cliché. It's such a cheap soap opera trope, and I think and hope Eva won't go for so obvious (and in my view lazy) narrative choices.

Secondly, Lena points out to Ian that she's seen pictures of him. Those are old, but still. I think it would be very unrealistic that she wouldn't have recognized him, at least by now.

Third: GGGB was to a large extent based on porn fantasies, ORS is more realistic. For obvious reasons incest is among the porn fantasies that don't work as well in a realistic scenario.

Aaand fourth: There's already been quite a bit of sexualised content between Lena and Seymour. To then reveal later that he is her biological father, would be a pretty big turn-off for those who don't like incest content.

Still, I admit there's a Chekhov's gun lying around that I assume Eva will use in some way. (Do I have any alternative theories about how? Nope, none at all.)

if lena's current father is a step father, and we don't know who her biological dad is... and dashole is involved in the game... then it means there is a possibility lena will get double penetrated by her two daddy's; her real dad and her step dad.

how do you top what happened in good girl gone bad? with 1 dad?

easy... two dads at the same time.

Dashole isn't involved in the game. They just made some fan art.

 

[Arata20]

if lena's current father is a step father, and we don't know who her biological dad is... and dashole is involved in the game... then it means there is a possibility lena will get double penetrated by her two daddy's; her real dad and her step dad.

how do you top what happened in good girl gone bad? with 1 dad?

easy... two dads at the same time.

I think you are wishful thinking. It is in this game EK will never go for it.

 

[pavlogrk]

I doubt Seymour is Lena's father.

First of all, I think it's too big a cliché. It's such a cheap soap opera trope, and I think and hope Eva won't go for so obvious (and in my view lazy) narrative choices.

Secondly, Lena points out to Ian that she's seen pictures of him. Those are old, but still. I think it would be very unrealistic that she wouldn't have recognized him, at least by now.

Third: GGGB was to a large extent based on porn fantasies, ORS is more realistic. For obvious reasons incest is among the porn fantasies that don't work as well in a realistic scenario.

Aaand fourth: There's already been quite a bit of sexualised content between Lena and Seymour. To then reveal later that he is her biological father, would be a pretty big turn-off for those who don't like incest content.

Still, I admit there's a Chekhov's gun lying around that I assume Eva will use in some way. (Do I have any alternative theories about how? Nope, none at all.)



Dashole isn't involved in the game. They just made some fan art.

finally a smart person

 

[dolfe67]

The craving for incest is strong in some people

 

[silverfur3]

Is this game done or?

 

[jacobw81]

what are the chances that Reymour is actually the biologically father of Lena....

 

[pavlogrk]

Is this game done or?

for the 1000th time, no it's not!!! Many more chapter to come! From what has been said by the dev at least 18+ chapters if i remember correctly!!

 

[pavlogrk]

what are the chances that Reymour is actually the biologically father of Lena....

Slim to non existent !!!

 

[Eandrid]

what are the chances that Reymour is actually the biologically father of Lena....

absolutely none remember that ORS is finance on patreon and there can t be any incest content in the project by patreon's rules otherwise the game would get strike and since it's obvious that there is gonna be sexual content involving him he can' t be the father. That is also why many Dev use the term of step family as it s a loophole in the rule to avoid the strike. Because of this rule all this speculation about it is pointless ^^

 

[PurpleDude]

Many more chapter to come!

Many more years to wait.

 

[Doppelgang]

sure, it starts with fan art and then a few updates later we meet lenas biological dad who she finds on the internet under the screen name dashole and boom suddenly lena is pregnant.

but in all seriousness lena being adopted by her father means she could have a brother shes not aware of, separated at birth... or perhaps a step brother due to her biological dad having a son with another woman, before/after he left lena. QUEUE IAN being lenas brother, and the incest plotline is revived! *starwars music plays*. Seymour does remind me of emperor palpatine a little bit.

You’re not thinking far enough ahead. For a couple of chapters we’ll believe that Lena and Ian are related, because Lena’s dad or stepdad is also Ian’s dad. But Ian also tells Lena in chapter 9 that he suspects his parents have an open relationship; so eventually we will find out that Ian’s dad and Lena’s mom also had a relationship—and that Ian’s dad is actually Lena’s real dad. It will all be revealed at a very tense dinner when Ian and Lena decide to have their families meet each other.

Afterwards Ian and Lena go back home and put up a gigantic murder investigation style map on the wall, with pictures of their parents and themselves, different lines drawn between everyone, to try to find an answer to the gradually more and more confusing question: Are they related or not?

At this point there won’t even be any more sex scenes in the game, it will basically just be that interactive investigation map that you can point and click at to get different information, as you try to help Ian and Lena solve their puzzle.

 

[okal]

for the 1000th time, no it's not!!! Many more chapter to come! From what has been said by the dev at least 18+ chapters if i remember correctly!!

It’ll just take 72 years to complete it!

I was with the people who were telling others (especially non-patrons) to stop complaining for a while, but, relative to the money being made and the content being put out, the amount of time per update is insanely high.

I understand the creative difficulties story-writing can bring, but there are collaborative efforts that could be made to ease that issue. And I also know that coding and debugging a game can be very time consuming. But the amount of funds generated in comparison to the product being put out in the past +12 months is disparate. I also highly support someone taking adequate time away from their work, but there’s limits to that before you just question whether or not the project is even important anymore.
I honestly wish the time used for the re-release was used to do some major retconning/removing of characters to make the creative process more tenable. The more paths the longer it’s going to take for less and less unique/remarkable content.

I stopped supporting around 6 months ago because I just feel the creator is milking it, as frequently happens with these projects. If that isn’t the case, I feel the only other possibility is just he/she bit off significantly/progressively more than they could chew, growing with each chapter.

I was completely happy with the trajectory of the project 18 months ago, but it’s going to take a marked shift before I jump back in. Others will probably stick around no matter how long it takes, which is entirely their choice. I’ll just be bummed about a solid project from a talented creator getting closer and closer to being abandoned.