VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[Samuel Hidayat]

I would agree and had that in the back of my head when typing it. But despite that fact, all of Holly's previous dorky outfits still feel appealing in a way this doesn't. It all feels a bit tone-breaking. We want the "guise" of unappealing nerd a la 80's movie sexy wallflower, which is why her character has worked so far. We don't want the actual reality of it. It's like a well-designed background of a bathroom. You don't want Eva to design actual turds in the toilet.


This also just feels off in general and not in a "oh, she's just being more slutty" way. I just feel like an intelligent nerd with great artistic prowess would feel a little less Walmart, even in her awkward bimbofication process.

Maybe the pink top is Holly's own attempt to look sexier? She's clueless about fashion, after all.

If true, there might be a scene where Ivy would laugh her ass off and try giving Holly advice on how to look sexy right.

 

[yellomit]

So, just got this game, just started Ian's Chapter 5 and I'm saying it now.

This game exceeds GGGB by a long shot, and that's a great game itself.

Art is better. Characters are better. Gameplay is better. Story is better.

Eva, you've made one hell of a game.

 

[Ceesko]

Does anyone know how the upcoming prologue will be structured? will it be divided between Ian and Lena or only one of them?

 

[Chuck_Bass]

Does anyone know how the upcoming prologue will be structured? will it be divided between Ian and Lena or only one of them?

Eva Kiss probably knows that.

 

[ffive]

This also just feels off in general and not in a "oh, she's just being more slutty" way. I just feel like an intelligent nerd with great artistic prowess would feel a little less Walmart, even in her awkward bimbofication process.

Ehh, i don't know, she looks cute to me. A little sexy, but still casual. Honestly, the "Eva Kiss doesn't get fashion because i don't like this" feels like a weird flex to make.

 

[buyduck79]

Waiting for IanxIvy

 

[Blurpee69]

Waiting for IanxIvy

It's kind of already a thing, spoilers for chapter 10 I guess.

 

[jimul18]

Alison only wears the 2nd sexy outfit if you told her to be more like Cherry.

I personally don't like it. Alison's red top works best because it shows off her best assets; the jugs.

How I think Alison should look if she is more promiscuous, i.e. going for a threesome with Ian and Jeremy...vs what she looked like in my playthrough.

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[dontcarewhateverno]

How I think Alison should look if she is more promiscuous, i.e. going for a threesome with Ian and Jeremy...vs what she looked like in my playthrough.

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Gotta be honest.
Who would I approach in a club for the chance of easier sex? #1. She's advertising it.
Who would I actually prefer for a threesome/devil's-triangle, gangbang, ect? Alison #2 all the way. There's something to the contrast that is so much hotter when doing nasty things with a "nice girl" or at least a chick that looks like that 'girl next door' type. Plus, I suspect Alison #1 would just try to redirect all comers to her Onlyfans or otherwise try to get your credit card charged. "Yer half hour's up, honey" in 2-packs-a-day 40-year-old pro-am pornstar chain-smoker voice.

I'm glad Eva doesn't auto-slut the girls' looks so easily in ORS the same way she did in GGGB. One of my least favorite characteristics of the first game. Now if only she would eliminate the dreaded "I'm a wild girl" horny-slut tongue-bite expression you see on Lena in just about every debauched sex scene.

 

[Blurpee69]

I'm glad Eva doesn't auto-slut the girls' looks so easily in ORS the same way she did in GGGB. One of my least favorite characteristics of the first game. Now if only she would eliminate the dreaded "I'm a wild girl" horny-slut tongue-bite expression you see on Lena in just about every debauched sex scene.

I'm with you on this. The only two girls that "slut it up" are the two that are already the most comfortable with their bodies; Ivy and Lena. Even then Lena really only has her lust outfit.

 

[dontcarewhateverno]

I'm with you on this. The only two girls that "slut it up" are the two that are already the most comfortable with their bodies; Ivy and Lena. Even then Lena really only has her lust outfit.

Ironically, the outfits I always pick for Lena at the club are slutty as fuck. But that's only because the user has full control of the MC and I can play her as a sweet, kind, decent person in all other ways as a stark contrast to her uncontrollable nymphomania affliction. Poor soul.

Now if Lena had the option to do the botox-lips instathot thing to her face like Ivy's got going on, or like slut Ash involuntarily had in GGGB.... "Abort! Abort! Abandon ship. Steer back in non-hoe-ish direction." Can't stand Kardashian-face.

 

[Beast Master69]

How I think Alison should look if she is more promiscuous, i.e. going for a threesome with Ian and Jeremy...vs what she looked like in my playthrough.

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Someone should put this on Eva's discord this would be a good option depending on the route with Ian.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

How I think Alison should look if she is more promiscuous, i.e. going for a threesome with Ian and Jeremy...vs what she looked like in my playthrough.

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That stockings look tacky. She'll look better without it imo.

 

[What'sNew]

So this upcoming prologue is supposed to make up for the abrupt ending of ch 10. But I cant for the life of me recall what was the ending. Can someone remind me?

 

[Chuck_Bass]

So this upcoming prologue is supposed to make up for the abrupt ending of ch 10. But I cant for the life of me recall what was the ending. Can someone remind me?

It ends after the threesome with Jeremy, Louise and Lena, the day after her photoshoot with Seymour/that new photographer.

 

[dolfe67]

It ends after the threesome with Jeremy, Louise and Lena, the day after her photoshoot with Seymour/that new photographer.

Not every playthrough ends the same. Mine ends just at the end of the photoshoot with Seymour. Don't know where it ends if you're not on Seymour or Jeremy's path

 

[Chuck_Bass]

Not every playthrough ends the same. Mine ends just at the end of the photoshoot with Seymour. Don't know where it ends if you're not on Seymour or Jeremy's path

You get some other photographer who is a friend of Denny's.
And yeah if I remember correctly, if you don't go for the threesome it just ends after the photoshoot.

 

[Blurpee69]

Feels like this epilogue/ prologue is going to deal with the fall out of Louise. Whether it be her growing resentment of Lena spending time with Holly and Ivy or what happened with Jeremy.

That's why I felt the chapter ended abruptly, because either way it felt like Louise's storyline was coming to a head. And then the chapter just ended.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

You get some other photographer who is a friend of Denny's.

His name is Kent.

Most likely a Kryptonian too.

 

[ffive]

Feels like this epilogue/ prologue is going to deal with the fall out of Louise. Whether it be her growing resentment of Lena spending time with Holly and Ivy or what happened with Jeremy.

Somewhat doubtful because Louise can also be perfectly happy being a slave for her Mistress.

I'd imagine it more likely the episode will be extended with Lena dealing in some way with Axel's interference at the end of birthday party, something she didn't feel capable of on the spot.