Please note, there's some other bugs in the script which need addressing:
"{image=icon_mad.webp}You don't need that" if v10_stan_pay > 2:v10_stan_pay == 2 instead if lena_athletics > 10:
call xp_up ('athletics') from _call_xp_up_755lena_athletics < 10 else:
l "We can do another one when whenever you want..."if ian_holly_dating: call xp_up ('lena') from _call_xp_up_760'lust' instead of 'lena' if v11sms_mom and v11sms_emma and v11sms_mike and v11sms_mark and v11sms_photo:and v11sms_axel otherwise the game will proceed without giving the player chance to read Axel's text, if it's left for the last.
Well thank you kindly, I fixed all of them except the first one. I think it should be
v10_stan_pay < 2 but I'll pass it on to Eva so she can decide.I imagine == makes sense, since it means Lena is being rude with Stan because she thinks she's entitled to it, paying the rent. But that's just a guess on my part.
That's valid reasoning, I can't look into Eva's head so I'll add your option to the bug report.
Somehow I didn’t get this scene. What do I need to do to have her as my sex pet?
For this particular scene Lena and Louise must've had sex previously, and Lena hasn't turned down Louise's advances (as in, they continue the relationship)
Sorry, i didn't make one and didn't touch the files on my end, just typed this in the post ;/ But by the sound of it the patch addressing these and other errors is likely to be issued shortly.
Thanks I might need to replay from the start since I never got that Mistress talk either. Hope there’s a lot more feet in Louise’s future, including Ivy’s like Lena can dare her to during that game!
This prologue was indeed underwhelming. But not necessarily for its amount of content, more so because of the writing.
I can't speak for Stan since I thankfully acted nothing more than neutral towards him and the whole Wade/Cindy Situation bothers me given that, at least at the very moment, there doesn't seem much difference between helping and not helping.
The worst thing though in my opinion is the way Holly and Lena interact. In Chapter 10 they fucked and then shared a passionate kiss (for me) with clearly reciprocating feelings, just so now Lena can ask Holly whether or not she is into someone specific for example the guy from work.
Like wtf?!? Did they just completely forget about what happened before? They are attracted to each other and have shown that but in the prologue, they just act as if nothing happened, as if the other person has no idea and as if you have to hide your own feelings.
I would understand it if someone else were around but that isn't the case.
The way it is written right now makes it seem as though Eva doesn't want the story to continue and relationships to form. Everything is supposed to move in circles. Great
What makes it even worse is the fact that they talk about their kiss and all of that afterward. So in other words their minds went blank for a second so that Lena can ask the above-mentioned stupid question and then they remembered what actually happened. I can't with this writing. It has gone downhill for a while now but this is a new peak for me.
Well, I simply hope the actual chapter will have better writing although I don't have too much hope.
PS: I'm curious though. Does anyone think Ivy will be part of the beach holiday with Cindy maybe absent due to the photoshoot? If so this could lead to even more drama with Ivy going for Wade as revenge on Cindy for taking her spot.
For Lena to become Louise's mistress she needs to take charge pretty early -- that means telling Louise she will "teach her" in chapter 5, and later when Lena catches Louise masturbating in her bed she should tell her to "keep going". HTH.Thanks I might need to replay from the start since I never got that Mistress talk either. Hope there’s a lot more feet in Louise’s future, including Ivy’s like Lena can dare her to during that game!