VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[loloby]

Why not AI while we're at it?

That must save a lot of time.

 

[lucadiadis]

Some time back, Eva Kiss mentioned how she sprinkles pieces of her personality across the characters she writes but that no character is a direct self-insert for her. It's typical for most writers. She addressed it several times, even during the early GGGB days when some patrons thought the Eva character was an in-game copy of the dev's real-life personality.

Also, the dev used to be more open and post more about themselves, including regular Q&As, photos, and other details about her life, but stopped sometime after sharing some selfies. I guess she didn't factor in that frustrated Stans and Arthurs are a sizeable chunk of the game's fanbase.

I didn't know, interesting. Thanks for sharing.

 

[Deathzazor]

I didn't know, interesting. Thanks for sharing.

It is indeed. I tend to just quietly observe/follow conversations in this kind of forum, enjoy the games and support one dev at a time when my financial situation isn't too dicey. Can't help but feel like this novel and Avalon are/were written from a female perspective. I recall the author of Long Live The Princess could've been a lady too, but that story gave nothing of that vibe...

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Cool, which comments are those? I only have the patreon to go by and last update there (29th May) it sounded faaaar from finished. I assume you have more up to date info on Discird?
2 or 3 months seems well within the realm of possibility, hopefully faster though

2 or 3 months would mean it will take 8 or 9 months for an update.

 

[ArcherHades46]

2 or 3 months would mean it will take 8 or 9 months for an update.

Are you kidding me? I'm already going crazy.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Are you kidding me? I'm already going crazy.

I'm not saying it will; the update should be around the corner. I'm just replying to the other person saying it would take another 2 or 3 months, which would be insane wait time. Honestly, the next "weekly update" should be announcing the release of the game... I hope...

Don't want to see this game abandoned.

 

[dolfe67]

Some time back, Eva Kiss mentioned how she sprinkles pieces of her personality across the characters she writes but that no character is a direct self-insert for her. It's typical for most writers. She addressed it several times, even during the early GGGB days when some patrons thought the Eva character was an in-game copy of the dev's real-life personality.

Holly is a more believable self-insert than Eva though, she's a female writer. Some of her lines are quite meta, feels like EvaKiss is talking to us via this character sometimes.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Holly is a more believable self-insert than Eva though, she's a female writer. Some of her lines are quite meta, feels like EvaKiss is talking to us via this character sometimes.

I've noticed some "meta commentary" from Lena when she reads the Stalkfap comments, specifically about the "cuckold fetish" requests she gets when she calls it "weird". It's more of self-aware comment considering how "cuckold-heavy" both of the games are

 

[Xupuzulla]

Holly is not a slut - for now - however a more interesting topic about Holly is that one forum member on this thread made the hypothesis that Holly was Eva Kiss' projection of herself within the universe she has created. An interesting idea, however since Eva Kiss has declined to disclose his/her gender and has revealed being a Catalunian Spanish from Barcelona, I am not too sure Eva Kiss is a woman any more. Eva Kiss writes like an American woman, but like a Spanish man. Then she would not be Holly but Ian maybe.

Holly is a big mary sue so im not surprised shes Evakiss favourite or self insert.
The perfect writer girl whos cute but humble,who has fans who love her,the awkward girl that somehow becomes a friend with the two MCs because fuck logic.

 

[mommysboiii]

Don't want to see this game abandoned.

you have the wildest takes mate

 

[Flowing Thought]

I thought we knew who the Eva's self insert was? The being from the drug trip.

 

[RenGames69]

I thought we knew who the Eva's self insert was? The being from the drug trip.

She's the owner of a black cat in the game.

 

[JohnnyKiss]

you have the wildest takes mate

Yeah like the time when I accurately predicted Chapter 11 release. Y'all cried your eyes out when I said it will be late November/early December release.

 

[BlackIsBetter]

True, but they have a point about the consistency being gone. We are in a third year currently of the 5+ months development c

Yeah, 6+ months is a new norm now. Get used to it.

OH NO!

 

[BlackIsBetter]

I'm not saying it will; the update should be around the corner. I'm just replying to the other person saying it would take another 2 or 3 months, which would be insane wait time. Honestly, the next "weekly update" should be announcing the release of the game... I hope...

Don't want to see this game abandoned.

This game getting abandoned would be a tragedy like Demon Boy

 

[SerHawkes]

The games not gonna be abandoned. Please ignore the resident DA.

 

[SlayerEternal]

Is this have pregnancy? ending or whatever...

 

[Shadowndev99]

Is this have pregnancy? ending or whatever...

ask eva if we will have pregnancy ending or no but I am sure will have because many time in sex ask you if you want raw or with com

 

[JohnnyKiss]

Is this have pregnancy? ending or whatever...

Most likely will have; both judging by the previous game and the fact that one of the side character's story is heavily focused around the male main character cumming inside her.

 

[Samuel Hidayat]

Holly is a big mary sue so im not surprised shes Evakiss favourite or self insert.
The perfect writer girl whos cute but humble,who has fans who love her,the awkward girl that somehow becomes a friend with the two MCs because fuck logic.

Calling Holly a Mary Sue is a major disservice to how terrible Mary Sues/Gary Stus are. Holly got cucked, couldn't pole dance perfectly on first try, doesn't have Ivy worshipping her feet, doesn't make Ian and/or Lena fall in love with her on first sight, doesn't create a perfect second book immediately after the first, etc.

Not exactly a good Mary Sue material, is she?