Generally, I've liked this epilogue.
There was more content than expected even. I really liked the Lena+Emma shopping trip and the litte tease we got, which could lead to a great threesome with Ian, or Jeremy, or even all of them hooking up in a foursome. The dress and bikini options are really hot(wonder how the white bikini fares with water...)
Stan is hiring a personal trainer and trying to get in shape after Lena told him to in my playthrough. Could be an interesting transformation. (Small bug: Lena comments on his clothes, but he's still wearing his everyday stuff).
Now the bartending night, I've liked the small scene we got with Jeremy. Lena mentioning that she may post pictures of that on her Stalkfap has some interesting implications, if Ian is a subscriber and has seen that dick with Allison and/or Emma previously.
Mark now may also update Lena directly on Hollys corruption which is nice and Robert has her number now (I may need to start a save where Lena still keeps him around to see if there are gonna be threesomes).
Ivy and Jeremy are banging real soon if both Ian and Lena give their approval.
Don't care about the Cindy and Axel drama.
What I didn't like:
Marcel. He got kinda wasted here, personality-wise. I wanted to see more of him, but hoped he'd be more than Bubba 2.0.
A guy with more depth. Maybe circumventing expectations by making him a romantic softy at heart, who likes to read books in his free time (and a potential LI for a pure/not fully corrupted Holly later on). Wasted opportunity.
Jack. Felt like a completely redundant cameo so far. I understand Eva not wanting to bring in Tyrone (bbc overload) but maybe Hugo would have been a better choice in regard to GGGB endings.
Ian/Lena pathing. In my original playthrough, I'm pushing for them to be in a stag & vixen relationship, where Ian likes seeing Lena fucked but is not humiliated or denied. Some teasing is good (especially if it goes both ways with Ian also sleeping around) but right now it's railroading into Sub or Dom with no middle ground or switch. Previous scenes where executed a bit better in that regard.
I hope that it doesn't end with full Cuck-Ian, because that would also feel disconnected from his other scenes if he fucks Allison, Emma, etc.