VN Ren'Py Our Red String [Ch. 12 Full] [Eva Kiss]

[dontcarewhateverno]

I don't think I have any objections to Axel's stats, but I absolutely see what you mean by "bedazzled by her own creation". And the way he's so clearly created to fit into that idea of a male ideal, without any noticeable flaws when it comes to looks or confidence, also makes him a bit boring, in a way.

To be fair, it's probably harder to showcase the characters' charisma than their lust/wits/athletics, and also more difficult than in most other story formats. In a movie it's obviously easy, and in a novel you have a lot more space to build complicated characters. In that sense I think it's understandable that someone's charisma in a porn game is simplified to traits like "extremely handsome", "dominating personality" or "very confident in approaching women".

Yeah. It's like two or three completely different stats put into the same category: confidence, getslaideasywithwhoevertheywant and actual charisma.

 

[dundun]

It depends on how obvious Axel and Lena were with their relationship in public, or more precisely, how Cherry perceived it if she wasn't told straight-up that they were together.

They were living together

Maybe Axel told Cherry that he and Lena were in an open relationship, or that they were just casually sleeping together?

That is actually a great idea.

But maybe I'm just grasping at straws; hoping for some depth to the situation and that Lena isn't painted as the innocent, angelic one who can do no wrong, and that Cherry and Axel were just the stereotypical cheaters who knew and didn't care. That would be boring. I'd love to see the good and bad, and most of all human, in every character in the equation.

I don't think we are grasping at straws. Cherry broke up with Axel so she clearly has a conscience. So Axel (and possibly someone else) must have misled her. Cherry has conspicously avoided any details about what happened. And even if she knowingly cheated with Axel, is that really beyond redemption (cough)Mike(cough)? Don't forget that it looks like Lena can forgive Axel.

But then, we now know that her number is 6666. So maybe she is the actual devil. Maybe she seduced poor Axel and then made sure that Lena would be hurt at most by sleeping with her, too. Maybe she is now slowly clawing into Ian, fooling everyone with her false sweetness. I mean it is quite a coincidence she is fucking the one guy Lena is interrested in. Now that would be interesting

 

[Tierra_Azul]

I don't like Axel for two reasons, charisma aside
He's one of those entitled guys who never had a problem getting what he wanted.
He's also got a face like a puckered and bleached bunghole.
The entitlement is character depth so I understand it, and because it's written that way, it's supposed to be polarizing. Some like him, other's don't. I don't.
Also, I'm weird I guess because I don't really give a shit about Ian X Lena relationship. I try to make Lena completely promiscuous and then I make Ian chase after Cindy. Lena fucks everyone except Robert and Axel (Robert is kinda pathetic and Axel for the afforementioned reasons.

Anyway, I know I should use the search function, but I don't feel like it and since I'm already typing, anyone have any update information?

Wait, wait, wait.. So you have:

- Ian fuck his bestfriends girlfriend
- Does Ian fuck his married boss(Minerva)?
- Lena fuck Mike, who she knows is in a relationship
- Lena cheat with Jeremy, who's supposed to be Louises boyfriend
- Since you said everyone except Axel and Robert, I guess she's also hunting the old married guy from the cafe?

But Axel is a entitled asshole?

 

[WatsonJohn]

Wait, wait, wait.. So you have:

- Ian fuck his bestfriends girlfriend
- Does Ian fuck his married boss(Minerva)?
- Lena fuck Mike, who she knows is in a relationship
- Lena cheat with Jeremy, who's supposed to be Louises boyfriend
- Since you said everyone except Axel and Robert, I guess she's also hunting the old married guy from the cafe?

But Axel is a entitled asshole?

Yeah Cherry or Axel can use the fact that Lena cheated with Jeremy and Mike to point out her hypocrisy if the path goes that way.

 

[Ninja of Death]

Wait, wait, wait.. So you have:

- Ian fuck his bestfriends girlfriend
- Does Ian fuck his married boss(Minerva)?
- Lena fuck Mike, who she knows is in a relationship
- Lena cheat with Jeremy, who's supposed to be Louises boyfriend
- Since you said everyone except Axel and Robert, I guess she's also hunting the old married guy from the cafe?

But Axel is a entitled asshole?

Those don't happen in all plays. I don't have Lena fuck any of them, never have Ian fuck Minerva, she's gross. Only 1 out of 4 saves he fucks Cindy. 2 he goes for Holly rather than Lena and 1 he helps Wade rather than Cindy and lets him crash on the sofa.

 

[Ninja of Death]

If Lena fucks Jeremy, didn't Louise already kick him to the curb?

 

[Tierra_Azul]

If my memory serves me correct, Louise has to be in a relationship with Jeremy for the bj/sex scene to occur. Lena has to agree to the HJ during the drinking game, else Louise goes inta a full drunk jealousy rage. Then Lena sneaks into Louises bedroom to cheat with him.

 

[Reasoon]

If Lena fucks Jeremy, didn't Louise already kick him to the curb?

I actually think it's the other Way around. Jeremy and Louise have to be still in a Relationship for LenaxJeremy to happen. At least for the one Scene we have until now. Hope I'm not wrong

 

[godoff95]

Wait, wait, wait.. So you have:

- Ian fuck his bestfriends girlfriend
- Does Ian fuck his married boss(Minerva)?
- Lena fuck Mike, who she knows is in a relationship
- Lena cheat with Jeremy, who's supposed to be Louises boyfriend
- Since you said everyone except Axel and Robert, I guess she's also hunting the old married guy from the cafe?

But Axel is a entitled asshole?

Actually we are because we allow it to happen.

 

[Rickster82]

My wishes for new scenes/couples:

Ian - Ivy
Ian - Jessica
Perry - Ivy
Axel - Cindy

 

[HaremGamesHater]

My wishes for new scenes/couples:

Lena - Stan
Lena - Stan
Lena - Stan
Lena - Stan
Lena - Stan

 

[Rickster82]

My wishes for new scenes/couples:

Lena - Stan
Lena - Stan
Lena - Stan
Lena - Stan
Lena - Stan

I honestly have to admit that I am just as interested in Lena as if a sack of rice falls over in China, namely not at all.
In my first Playthorugh, I perceived her more as a "drama queen". She likes to pose as a "victim".
To play as Holly would kind of excite me more. Unfortunately, you can't skip the Lena chapters.

 

[Priappus]

My wishes for new scenes/couples:

Ian - Ivy
Ian - Jessica
Perry - Ivy
Axel - Cindy

To me, my wishes for couples are!!!

Perry-Ivy
Axel-Cinty
Jeremy-Ian
Seymour-Lena
Stan-Louise
I put the males first.I believe they are the ideal couples.

 

[Psycroptic]

My wishes for new scenes/couples:

Ian - Ivy
Ian - Jessica
Perry - Ivy
Axel - Cindy

I would add Ian - Louise to that list for me personally.

 

[Moryaka26]

For me Ian and Cindy

 

[Zedire]

[Lena and Axel] were living together

I know, but it never specifies that Cherry knows that, or that she visited Axel's home back then (as far as I'm aware?). If Axel was trying to hide the fact that he was cheating on Lena it may well be that he never invited Cherry home, and made some excuse to go to hers, or somewhere else, instead. That and him possibly having Lena agree not to talk about their relationship or living circumstances publicly. Even the threesome could have been done somewhere else to avoid discovery of what he'd been doing behind both their backs (if both women were innocent in the situation).

Again, maybe that's far-fetched - no doubt it would be hard to hide without causing some suspicion. However, if Axel really is that good at manipulating women (and maybe wouldn't have had to tried so hard for two women who loved him, and possibly considered themselves lucky to be 'the one' among all the girls he attracted), then he could have gotten away with it.

For all Axel's being 'on top of the game', he sure made a dumb decision in getting into a relationship with two women just to have his poly-amorous fantasy. Would have been so much easier to let Lena know he was into it early on and suggest some other random hot girl from his throng of female fans join them - or a new one each week - and make Lena feel like she had some power over the situation. Then he could have had his sexual worship power fantasy and still kept Lena, But I guess it would have taken the thrill out of it if he wasn't seeing someone behind her back. That, and Lena would have started the story with a much more kinky/open mindset. Oh well.

 

[HaremGamesHater]

I honestly have to admit that I am just as interested in Lena as if a sack of rice falls over in China, namely not at all.
In my first Playthorugh, I perceived her more as a "drama queen". She likes to pose as a "victim".
To play as Holly would kind of excite me more. Unfortunately, you can't skip the Lena chapters.

I prefer games with female protagonists and I really like Lena, but I'm not interested in Holly at all.

 

[Zedire]

I just want Ian/Cindy content - doesn't need to be a sex scene, and I'd prefer it wasn't if it was forced or too soon for the situation - I just want to see the sexual tension unfold. I want a satisfying, well-written story, not a quick fuck scene to appease demand.

Also can't wait for the Ian/Allison weekend away. I love Allison... and I love the dom/sub content it's started between Ian/Allison. Yes please.

Ian/Minerva would be nice. I don't mind if it's a tentative 'Minerva trying to be nice' to Ian (if you chose the option where Ian can suggest that to her), but I find this relationship fun to witness. I wouldn't mind more sex between them too, although I don't really expect it this chapter.

Ian/Emma. Just cos it's so delicious getting it on with sexy Emma behind Perry's back.

Ian/Holly. I wish there was an option for Ian to train Holly on how to please him sexually more. In a loving way is fine, but I think it would be nice to have the option for those of us who aren't into the lesbian content and would rather have Ian teach her a thing or two.

Lena/Axel. I want to know more about Axel and their story, and see where this goes.

Axel/Ian friendship. As much as I wish it could develop into more (lol), I just want to see how a friendship could develop between these two, and maybe flesh out Axel beyond 'hot flirtatious stud' and show a bit of his true character underneath - the good and the bad.

 

[JamieSadistic]

Wait, wait, wait.. So you have:

- Ian fuck his bestfriends girlfriend
- Does Ian fuck his married boss(Minerva)?
- Lena fuck Mike, who she knows is in a relationship
- Lena cheat with Jeremy, who's supposed to be Louises boyfriend
- Since you said everyone except Axel and Robert, I guess she's also hunting the old married guy from the cafe?

But Axel is a entitled asshole?

While Axel is an entitled asshole, My version of Ian is a charming, grimey dude. I even fucked Cherry and the other wild chick that Perry is into just so Perry can't. Yes, Ian also fucks Minerva. The only one I haven't had Ian have sex with is Holly....something about her innocence.. I can't do her like that lol.
Lena on the other hand... Lena doesn't have sex with Robert. She fucks Mike, but she completely avoids Axel and that one rich dude, I can't remember his name.
Upcoming events...
I'm making Ian gain points with Louise and the white haired girl. (My bad, I'm horrible with remembering names)
Lena is gonna fuck her coffee shop male boss, she's gonna fuck the nerdy flatmate, she'll fuck Perry if possible.
I'm just curious to see how much I can make Lena and Ian ruin each others lives.

Once I'm finished with that playthrough, I'll do the faithful Lena/Ian one.

 

[BlandChili]

I prefer games with female protagonists and I really like Lena, but I'm not interested in Holly at all.

I prefer games with female protagonists and I really like Lena and am also interested in Holly. Best ship!