VN Unity Out of Touch! [v3.28] [Story Anon]

[Story Anon]

I think this game seriously needs a 'no sexual content' tag at the current state. Hell even 'no sexual content' tagged games has kissings, makeouts and 'active romance' going on. This game has nearly none of this. You almost don't even kiss the girls even tho 15 chapters passed. There is only 2 scene that's sexual and one of them is borderline r... and the other one is a dream. If you remove those 2 scene and couple of images, it's not even an adult game tbh. Also before you say 'this is a story focused game not a quick fap game', I get it. I love that kind of slow burn games. I like 'romance' a lot. But I would at least expect some kisses, confessions, dates... even if there is no sex or anything like that. The game is tagged as harem for the love of god. Lessons in Love is somehow similar to this game (although I can admit much better in quality wise currently) it's heavily story focused game as well. But lessons in love also has plenty of romance and sexual content in it as well. I hope this game will reach at that balanced stage about the content at some point. I just want to see some romantic actions between the girls and CJ that's all

hey thanks for reading!

don’t worry, Vol. 2 is where the other girls routes really start and you’ll have the first opportunity for h-scenes.
The game definitely shouldn’t feel complete, since we’re only on chapter 15 out of 100.

If you want a little preview of the first h-scene, go back one or two pages in this thread. I posted the initial scene layout for how that’s going to go down.

I totally get the no sexual content tag, it’s been a struggle since f95 says to tag for the “Complete” game. But rest assured that won’t be a problem for much longer.

that being said Im actually putting in an optional, honest to God mutual lovey dubby kiss into the end of chapter 7 that you can unlock with Victoria.

it’s just a crumb but it’s a start.

Yeah I deleted my comment after I played it. I think most of the things you said are correct except that the part CJ will be the only one having sex. As I read the dev confirmed that the girls will have sex eachother and will be in love with each other. It seems the game is not ' love interests are exclusive to mc' harem game. I don't really like this much since I like when all the love interests only in love with mc in harem games. I don't mind girls in the harem fooling around with each other. But if a love interest is in love with another character ( even that character is part of the harem) other than mc is a turn off for me. But everybody has different tastes I guess

I can probably alleviate your worry here a bit with a spoiler and just say that’s in reference to Vic and Leah being lesbians if you don’t romance either, just being friends if you only romance one and being poly with you if you romance both. The specific details are sketchy atm but it shouldn’t ever feel like you are being left out.
Sarah also loves any girl you (CJ) love, but that’s due to her unique situation.

 

[preskerd]

hey thanks for reading!

don’t worry, Vol. 2 is where the other girls routes really start and you’ll have the first opportunity for h-scenes.
The game definitely shouldn’t feel complete, since we’re only on chapter 15 out of 100.

If you want a little preview of the first h-scene, go back one or two pages in this thread. I posted the initial scene layout for how that’s going to go down.

I totally get the no sexual content tag, it’s been a struggle since f95 says to tag for the “Complete” game. But rest assured that won’t be a problem for much longer.

that being said Im actually putting in an optional, honest to God mutual lovey dubby kiss into the end of chapter 7 that you can unlock with Victoria.

it’s just a crumb but it’s a start.





I can probably alleviate your worry here a bit with a spoiler and just say that’s in reference to Vic and Leah being lesbians if you don’t romance either, just being friends if you only romance one and being poly with you if you romance both. The specific details are sketchy atm but it shouldn’t ever feel like you are being left out.
Sarah also loves any girl you (CJ) love, but that’s due to her unique situation.

I really liked your detailed response. Thanks so much! I'm really happy about that Victoria kiss at chapter 7 stuff you planned to add . Honestly my frustrution mostly came from that girl as well. I literally screamed ' KISS HER AND SAY THAT YOU LOVE HER ALREADY CJ YOU DUMB IDIOT!' at some point.


Also I'm really glad you will add choices when it comes to that situation with Vic and Leah . Otherwise it would be a big turn off. Thanks for giving us the choice


I wouldn't type anything and simply ignore the game but I really liked the the game especially the story and the characters. It just came from passion sorry If I was being disrespectful or anything like that in my comments

 

[Story Anon]

I really liked your detailed response. Thank so much! I'm really happy about that Victoria kiss at chapter 7 stuff you planned to add . Honestly my frustrution mostly came from that girl as well. I literally screamed ' KISS HER AND SAY THAT YOU LOVE HER ALREADY CJ YOU DUMB IDIOT!' at some point.


Also I'm really glad you will add choices when it comes to that situation with Vic and Leah . Otherwise it would be a big turn off. Thanks for givi ng us the choice


Thanks again for the response. I wouldn't type anything and simply ignore the game but I really liked the the game especially the story and the characters. It just came from passion sorry If I was being disrespectful or anything like that in my comments

No worries! If someone’s spent hours reading my stuff the least I can do is type a few paragraphs

yeah I completely get it with Vic, the biggest reason why it’s 100% tension with her in Vol. 1 is really due to two things:

1) I wanted you to be able to start any of the girls side routes/romances at the same time.
While Vic route could have started as early as Ch3 (theyre alone in a room together for hours ffs) I didn’t want this game to feel like “Vic and her side girls”, especially with how important some other girls are (Like Sarah and Jamie). So I wanted there to be an opportunity for the other girls to shine a bit without having to necessarily compete with Vics giant boobies in h-scenes.


2)Another part of it was the series transitioning from a comic to a KN (when I wrote Ch9) to a VN (when I went nuts with Ch15, I haven’t even implemented the biggest gameplay segment of Ch15 yet). Originally there just weren’t any choices at all due to the format, so choosing exactly when each girls got romanced was a big deal.

Ch15 had the first multiple choice question menu in the entire game originally, which is why I’m spending so much time going back and redoing Vol. 1 to be at a similar standard.
Now that everything is being designed for a VN from the ground up, this is much easier and I can throw the reins to the player with how/who they want to romance.

 

[Faptime]

No worries! If someone’s spent hours reading my stuff the least I can do is type a few paragraphs

yeah I completely get it with Vic, the biggest reason why it’s 100% tension with her in Vol. 1 is really due to two things:

1) I wanted you to be able to start any of the girls side routes/romances at the same time.
While Vic route could have started as early as Ch3 (theyre alone in a room together for hours ffs) I didn’t want this game to feel like “Vic and her side girls”, especially with how important some other girls are (Like Sarah and Jamie). So I wanted there to be an opportunity for the other girls to shine a bit without having to necessarily compete with Vics giant boobies in h-scenes.


2)Another part of it was the series transitioning from a comic to a KN (when I wrote Ch9) to a VN (when I went nuts with Ch15, I haven’t even implemented the biggest gameplay segment of Ch15 yet). Originally there just weren’t any choices at all due to the format, so choosing exactly when each girls got romanced was a big deal.

Ch15 had the first multiple choice question menu in the entire game originally, which is why I’m spending so much time going back and redoing Vol. 1 to be at a similar standard.
Now that everything is being designed for a VN from the ground up, this is much easier and I can throw the reins to the player with how/who they want to romance.

Awesome response! With regards to choosing who to romance, will it be very clear which choices will result in the closing of a potential relationship?

Some other games have hints such as

"Ignore her feelings (*this will close off the romantic route for this character*)"

And some games make it simple by having the top choice always be the one to pick if you want to add a character as a LI.

Will you be doing something similar? Because I'm going full pokemon on this shit. Gotta catch em all.

 

[Story Anon]

Awesome response! With regards to choosing who to romance, will it be very clear which choices will result in the closing of a potential relationship?

Some other games have hints such as



And some games make it simple by having the top choice always be the one to pick if you want to add a character as a LI.

Will you be doing something similar? Because I'm going full pokemon on this shit. Gotta catch em all.

As of right now, there are two planned avenues for romantic events:

A) romantic events tied to the main story that unlock if your relationship meter (or whatever) is at a certain threshold. At that stage you basically get a yes/no option whether you want to do it or not. Victorias kiss in ch7 will be exactly like this


and

B) side romance events/routes. These also unlock as your relationship develops with a girl but they’re way more down to earth and normal than the main plot events. Day to day lovey dubby stuff, dates, hangouts, etc. These will be available in the main map hub and will be treated like side stories you can go do any time after you unlock them...or not. Totally up to you. They will give more relationship status and will probably be required if you want to max out a girls love meter, but they’re ultimately optional.

the reason I’m calling these side stories rather than the girls route is that really, each girls route is part of the main story already.

Just due to the nature of the story, I don’t think you as CJ can fuck up any relationship and lock yourself out of any girls romance, though you can miss those main plot romance events if your relationship isn’t high enough at that point in the story.

Unlike other games, there’s nothing but reward for going full harem. If anything, it’s the true route and will unlock important stuff way later down the line.

 

[preskerd]

Unlike other games, there’s nothing but reward for going full harem. If anything, it’s the true route and will unlock important stuff way later down the line.

I'll most likely go full harem since I like all the girls so far, but I don't understand this one. if we don't like a girl and don't want to romance her, we will be on the alternate route and we won't get true ending? Will we get alternate ending or something?

 

[Story Anon]

I'll most likely go full harem since I like all the girls so far, but I don't understand this one. if we don't like a girl and don't want to romance her, we will be on the alternate route and we won't get true ending? Will we get alternate ending or something?

nothing’s set in stone but Post credits stuff and when more gameplay finally arrives, advancing each girls relationship will improve both her and CJs stats and abilities.

 

[preskerd]

nothing’s set in stone but Post credits stuff and when more gameplay finally arrives, advancing each girls relationship will improve both her and CJs stats and abilities.

Oh you plan to add lots of stuff. I really like it. It seems I jumped to the gun way too early When the lovey dubby stuff comes and h-scenes will be added into this amazingly written story and characters, I think game will be only better and better. I really have high hopes for this game now that you explained many things I was worried about crystal clear. I also really like how you communicate with the community unlike some other devs. Keep up the good work!

 

[Story Anon]

Oh you plan to add lots of stuff. I really like it. It seems I jumped to the gun way too early When the lovey dubby stuff comes and h-scenes will be added into this amazingly written story and characters, I think game will be only better and better. I really have high hopes for this game now that you explained many things I was worried about crystal clear. I also really like how you communicate with the community unlike some other devs. Keep up the good work!

happy to help! Fan engagement is a big deal to me, so any time you’ve got a question feel free to ask!

 

[Shaknash]

Just played all of 0.9.3. This was maybe the most entertaining game I've found on this site. The enjoyable dialogue with a well written, yet crazy story are super intriguing. Also the music cues have been perfect for me. Sexy sax coming in at the best times and the over-the-top hero music thrown in for both humor and badass entrances really makes this game. Keep up the good work OP. I look forward to future chapters.

 

[Unsafe]

Yeah I deleted my comment after I played it. I think most of the things you said are correct except that the part CJ will be the only one having sex. As I read the dev confirmed that the girls will have sex eachother and will be in love with each other. It seems the game is not ' love interests are exclusive to mc' harem game. I don't really like this much since I like when all the love interests only in love with mc in harem games. I don't mind girls in the harem fooling around with each other. But if a love interest is in love with another character ( even that character is part of the harem) other than mc is a turn off for me. But everybody has different tastes I guess

Dude I am almost exactly like you in this aspect. I like where this dude is going though and want to enjoy the ride. I get it though, I'm very selfish and dont really like it if I'm not the only

 

[BountyBoy]

The new content is only in Ch1-3, so feel free to just skip to there if you want to see it. Nothing else major added from v0.9.0 besides the Ch15 animations.

I just felt weird leaving a whole bunch of ready to go work sit around on my computer while I went on my trip, so I decided to just put it out there for you guys.
And I’m always down to talk music and take suggestions, hit me up on discord.

I gotchu for the music. I'll see what I can do about that. Also, merry christmas to you my guy.

 

[Siphon]

Well, that was pretty nice. Good renders, interesting story, and all the girls are actually tolerable. Wondering if the side chicks will be available later on (stalker girl is cute), or if he's just gonna be limited to the 5. Either or is fine for me, though I was half expecting him to get another ring at the end to represent Sarah.

 

[Story Anon]

Well, that was pretty nice. Good renders, interesting story, and all the girls are actually tolerable. Wondering if the side chicks will be available later on (stalker girl is cute), or if he's just gonna be limited to the 5. Either or is fine for me, though I was half expecting him to get another ring at the end to represent Sarah.

thanks for reading! Glad you enjoyed it.

On the topic of other girls:

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[Duergh]

heh, shame i didn't notice b4 dl it it's multiple protagonist game -.- bad suprice on act 1 i had, pitty cous game starts rly nice.

 

[Pudthumper]

What fun this was! In spite of the fact that I have once again been bush-whacked and side-tracked in my porn game search.... When can we expect volume 2?

 

[Pudthumper]

Btw, any chance of redoing Leah's hairstyle? Those derpy bangs with a gap just weird me out.

 

[Bucketbot89]

I completely disagree Leah's hair is fine as is.

 

[Siphon]

On the topic of other girls:

rip stalker/teacher dreams. But seriously that is a pretty solid lineup, had a feeling Kieran would still be playing a significant role