VN Unity Out of Touch! [v3.28] [Story Anon]

[Story Anon]

What fun this was! In spite of the fact that I have once again been bush-whacked and side-tracked in my porn game search.... When can we expect volume 2?

glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!

new chapters will be out late January at this rate, Vol. 1 still needs a few features finished up.

Exactly how people want knew chapters is something I need to make a poll for (whether they want chapters released as they’re done or as a volume with gameplay, etc)

Btw, any chance of redoing Leah's hairstyle? Those derpy bangs with a gap just weird me out.

Edit: oops dont know where this part went. Leah has a few alternate hairstyles but they mostly change the back, not the front. She also has the loudest fanbase and I would likely get shot if I changed her much.

rip stalker/teacher dreams. But seriously that is a pretty solid lineup, had a feeling Kieran would still be playing a significant role

Kieran and Cro’dhearg both play a major role in the party, and sooner rather than later.

 

[Story Anon]

Last little Christmas gift: v0.9.3 Android version is up in the OP

 

[Pudthumper]

also

Ah well, I suppose that one man's derp is another man's wet dream.

glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!

new chapters will be out late January at this rate, Vol. 1 still needs a few features finished up.

Exactly how people want knew chapters is something I need to make a poll for (whether they want chapters released as they’re done or as a volume with gameplay, etc)




Edit: oops dont know where this part went. Leah has a few alternate hairstyles but they mostly change the back, not the front. She also has the loudest fanbase and I would likely get shot if I changed her much.


Ah well, I suppose that one man's derp is another man's wet dream.

As for new releases

glad you enjoyed it, thanks for reading!

new chapters will be out late January at this rate, Vol. 1 still needs a few features finished up.

Exactly how people want knew chapters is something I need to make a poll for (whether they want chapters released as they’re done or as a volume with gameplay, etc)




Edit: oops dont know where this part went. Leah has a few alternate hairstyles but they mostly change the back, not the front. She also has the loudest fanbase and I would likely get shot if I changed her much.

Ah well, I suppose that one man's derp is another man's wet dream.

As for new releases, I generally favor waiting for a longer period of time to get a bigger chunk of play to constant updates that progress the story very little. But I will take it how I can get it. Can't wait to see some lewds, that would be the frosting on this delicious cake.

 

[Unsafe]

Dude I love the attention your giving to this forum too. It really feels like you love making this and the energy is contagious. Dude where ever your story goes, I'm there for the ride. There will be things that others and I want, but even if it doesnt happen I think I can say that most of us are still liking this. I think I'll become a patron next month

I prefer bigger updates with more content

 

[Story Anon]

Dude I love the attention your giving to this forum too. It really feels like you love making this and the energy is contagious. Dude where ever your story goes, I'm there for the ride. There will be things that others and I want, but even if it doesnt happen I think I can say that most of us are still liking this. I think I'll become a patron next month

I prefer bigger updates with more content

Thank you! To be honest, you guys make it very easy to be involved.
I really do love working on this project, it’s genuinely what gets me up in the morning.
So seeing anyone else give a shit about it (even if it made them mad!) is a great feeling, how could I not answer questions and stuff? It’s the least I could do.
I’d love to see you on patreon, I’ll be running at least two polls soon on which girls should get their side content/gravure first!

 

[alutarox]

So seeing anyone else give a shit about it (even if it made them mad!) is a great feeling

Glad you said that, replayed after 0.93 came out: noticed a lot of extraneous apostrophes. Makes me physically recoil whenever I see one, might want to proofread a few chapters when you're adding the more VN-y stuff see if you can't root some of them out.

 

[Story Anon]

Glad you said that, replayed after 0.93 came out: noticed a lot of extraneous apostrophes. Makes me physically recoil whenever I see one, might want to proofread a few chapters when you're adding the more VN-y stuff see if you can't root some of them out.

Oof.

Yeah those have always been my bane. If you see one, you can always DM me or hmu on discord and I’ll get it sorted.

 

[alutarox]

Oof.

Yeah those have always been my bane. If you see one, you can always DM me or hmu on discord and I’ll get it sorted.

I'll let you know when I replay next (probably on next release)

 

[The ArcKnight]

Just finally got around to playing this.....
AND I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!

Like, seriously, I want to smack past me for not playing sooner. The humor is fantastic but still grounded enough to not be TOO utterly ridiculous. I really enjoy seeing the different characters introducing their POV's on events though I want more time as CJ, he's the MC after all. Music if wonderful! I had "We belong together" stuck in my head at work all day from playing ch3 before heading out.

I adore Victoria, she is main waifu atm due to my love of goth girls in stockings but gods damn is Leah not a big contender with her being cute and those pantyhose...
Speaking of contenders, just got to ch4... I FUCKING LOVE ASHLEY! "He's MY Senpai!" I love the cute little possessiveness she has over CJ. I cannot wait to get more into the game but I had to jump over here to say Thank you for an amazing game so far.

Honorable mentions: Jamie, is cute, I just want to cuddle her, I cannot wait for CJ to FINALLY realize she's a girl.

Okay, enough gushing, back to playing!

 

[Story Anon]

Just finally got around to playing this.....
AND I FUCKING LOVE IT!!!!

Like, seriously, I want to smack past me for not playing sooner. The humor is fantastic but still grounded enough to not be TOO utterly ridiculous. I really enjoy seeing the different characters introducing their POV's on events though I want more time as CJ, he's the MC after all. Music if wonderful! I had "We belong together" stuck in my head at work all day from playing ch3 before heading out.

I adore Victoria, she is main waifu atm due to my love of goth girls in stockings but gods damn is Leah not a big contender with her being cute and those pantyhose...
Speaking of contenders, just got to ch4... I FUCKING LOVE ASHLEY! "He's MY Senpai!" I love the cute little possessiveness she has over CJ. I cannot wait to get more into the game but I had to jump over here to say Thank you for an amazing game so far.

Honorable mentions: Jamie, is cute, I just want to cuddle her, I cannot wait for CJ to FINALLY realize she's a girl.

Okay, enough gushing, back to playing!

Thanks for reading, glad you're enjoying it!

Let me know what you think of the rest of Vol. 1 when you finish!

 

[The ArcKnight]

I just finished Chapter 15....
I am floored, I never thought I'd enjoy a game that much with so little actual sex!

I am fucking bought into this story though, I know its fucking ridiculous at times, the thundercock of it all, but gods damned do you know how to write a fucking story! Oh gods, I, I legitimately cannot pic a favorite girl.... That has NEVER happened to me in a game. Like, if CJ doesn't make every one of his waifus happy i'm going to fucking lose it! Also, he needs a 6th ring. Maybe 7th, we have to see how Keiran turns out after being freed.

There was no actual H content in this game, and I aint even mad. Do I want to fuck Victoria, Leah, Jamie, Ashley, Teresa, and Sarah? FUCK YES I DO! Am I wanting it rushed? No, its proceeding on pace with the story and I'm okay with that.
Hell, I fucking love alot of the secondary characters too, like Lindsey, our poor little abused stalker, I just want CJ to hug the stuffing out of her. Even Keiran, I desperately want to see her after all this that happened and see how she is now, and her sisters! I haven't forgotten about the new side characters! They are adorbs and I want to see more.

And I know I mentioned it earlier but your use of music is just fucking fantastic! Good job using covers, I had to listen to the Maniac cover a bunch of times after Keiran was introduced .

Yeah, when I have time, i'll write a proper review but man. I will be watching your career with GREAT interest.

OH! Speaking of no H content, the scene with Ashley sitting on the MC's desk in her bra wasnt in the game. COCKTEASE!

 

[ElukiaTV]

I am floored, I never thought I'd enjoy a game that much with so little actual sex!

Perfect way to describe the feelings of this game.

 

[Story Anon]

I just finished Chapter 15....
I am floored, I never thought I'd enjoy a game that much with so little actual sex!

I am fucking bought into this story though, I know its fucking ridiculous at times, the thundercock of it all, but gods damned do you know how to write a fucking story! Oh gods, I, I legitimately cannot pic a favorite girl.... That has NEVER happened to me in a game. Like, if CJ doesn't make every one of his waifus happy i'm going to fucking lose it! Also, he needs a 6th ring. Maybe 7th, we have to see how Keiran turns out after being freed.

There was no actual H content in this game, and I aint even mad. Do I want to fuck Victoria, Leah, Jamie, Ashley, Teresa, and Sarah? FUCK YES I DO! Am I wanting it rushed? No, its proceeding on pace with the story and I'm okay with that.
Hell, I fucking love alot of the secondary characters too, like Lindsey, our poor little abused stalker, I just want CJ to hug the stuffing out of her. Even Keiran, I desperately want to see her after all this that happened and see how she is now, and her sisters! I haven't forgotten about the new side characters! They are adorbs and I want to see more.

And I know I mentioned it earlier but your use of music is just fucking fantastic! Good job using covers, I had to listen to the Maniac cover a bunch of times after Keiran was introduced .

Yeah, when I have time, i'll write a proper review but man. I will be watching your career with GREAT interest.

OH! Speaking of no H content, the scene with Ashley sitting on the MC's desk in her bra wasnt in the game. COCKTEASE!

Hah, glad you enjoyed it!

Don't worry, you'll be seeing plenty more of Kieran in Vol. 2, she's integral. I'm happy someone finally shares my taste of loving all the girls though

And as far as actual h-content goes...

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Don't worry, that pic of Ashley is a sneak peak of Vol. 2. It may be a cock tease but it's not blue balls I swear!


If you want to follow all the latest updates for the series, feel free to hop on my discord server or sub on patreon and see all the nitty gritty detail stuff I subject my poor patrons to.

 

[Bryon Smothers]

Great game, I left my full comment on your patreon as mods here have a habit of deleting every other post I make.

 

[The ArcKnight]

Gah, I went back just to play back through some of the character introductions because that music is just so perfect! Especially the Maniac cover by Carpenter Brut, so effing good!

Also, for some reason, when "Say So" came on, my mind immediately went to this:

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xD

So yeah, figured if this wormed its way into my head due to how damn good the story and music hits, I need to at least toss a few bucks at your patreon. Lookin forward to more updates, Happy New Year!

 

[Story Anon]

Gah, I went back just to play back through some of the character introductions because that music is just so perfect! Especially the Maniac cover by Carpenter Brut, so effing good!

Also, for some reason, when "Say So" came on, my mind immediately went to this:

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xD

So yeah, figured if this wormed its way into my head due to how damn good the story and music hits, I need to at least toss a few bucks at your patreon. Lookin forward to more updates, Happy New Year!

Funny you mention that, I always thought Nyanners with a slightly more serious tone would be a perfect VA for Leah.

 

[Drakhen]

man i am crying at the father(CHAD) moments, so heartfelt, so loving.(dying of laughter)

 

[polakko]

Story Anon.
I was expecting a different "kind" of game, but i really enjoyned what i found.
Yes, i would have preferred more with the "H's" (ex the scene in the Tea Ceremony Club Room) but is ok for now (of course, i hope for more)
One thing i really appreciated is the traklist, the songs and the timing in the scenes are perfect.
Some of them are covers, if you don't mind, can you share the artist?
A very good job, well done.
P.S.
Sorry for my bad english, i'm italian.

 

[Story Anon]

Story Anon.
I was expecting a different "kind" of game, but i really enjoyned what i found.
Yes, i would have preferred more with the "H's" (ex the scene in the Tea Ceremony Club Room) but is ok for now (of course, i hope for more)
One thing i really appreciated is the traklist, the songs and the timing in the scenes are perfect.
Some of them are covers, if you don't mind, can you share the artist?
A very good job, well done.
P.S.
Sorry for my bad english, i'm italian.

Glad you liked it, thank you for reading!

yes, here’s a YouTube playlist I made with most of the music used so far.

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[BadmanBaxter]

Glad you liked it, thank you for reading!

yes, here’s a YouTube playlist I made with most of the music used so far.

You must be registered to see the links

I love the tracklist. From the tags I assumed I was playing a guy trying to stop his friends from being taken advantage of by dudes due to the rape tag but I liked it. The game isn't exactly censored but CJ has seen things that I haven't like Vicks boobs in the tea and the rape scene and it doesn't make sense not to see that in a porn game. Another thing is in the few times CJ has potentially had sex I can't be sure as I haven't scene any sore of penetration in the art. I do like it and will certainly follow it for a while but I struggle to see how you can include actual decent sex scenes.