Glad you (might?) like it.
If you have suggestions or things you would see improved, do let me know.
Hey m8, had time to try it out yesterday
First, there is not much content, so theres little to do in the free roam mode, but the possibilitys you have to make it nice and immersive made me exited
I like the minimalistic maping, not saying u cant improve on the art side of maps and scenes and characters, but the way how its easier for me to find what a want using the token system, its nice and i liked it, i have a good imagination (and gullible) so i dont need amazing complex maps and realistic ways of traveling to feel immersed, and games that take too long to understand where to go are not my thing, my work doesnt give me much spare time, so its a plus for me
I felt a little disapointed at the begining cuz it looked like you were copying the story word by word, well its an amazing story so i understand why u would do that. But then on the R3 part i started seing a little more of your personality in the writing which i liked, still I think u can add other events or characters with full story lines (if u feel confortable with it), after you add more of the main story obviously (i dont think you should start adding random content without having more content from the original story to play with)
After i played it i can say i am as or even more exited as i was when i first saw this thread, i find myself imagining u might actually make a strategy game out of this, u know, build your armys, defend, attack and conquer. Random drops, random encounters when free roaming outside our great tomb. Chances to use all of your many and very OP skills, Yggdrasil seems like that super complex mmorpg we all would have liked to play, from base building, NPC creation, magic and item warfare. But even if you decide to take the visual novel kinda route i would still be happy, i am a very enthusiastic when it comes to this anime
And last thing, for the art, amazing job in being able to make models for such complex characters btw, i like it when during a chat their 3D model is there, it makes me think of the writing as more than a normal book (i like books so it just adds points), but personally, and thats just my personal taste, maybe 2D art for the scenes would make it seem less clunky? i mean, naked Albedo didnt do much for my arousal, and the scene with Shalltear, nice writing, funny and in context with the immersive world, but i will just say i wouldnt be playing it for the H part of the game (sorry), yet.
There is a lot of very nice fan art out there, i know artist charge too much money for little personal projects (like this one seems to be) so if you could find enthusiastic volunteers willing to do it for free, even if u end up with a mesh of many diferent art styles, i would still dig it (i know that its a very hard and probably not feasible thing to do, its very easy to sugest when its not you who gotta do the work) i would volunteer myself if i could draw, but honestly the only thing i know how to do is to cut and shape steel in dozens of diferent ways.
Thank you so much for reading all of this crap some nerd vented out
I apologise, english is not my first tongue and i havent praticed it much lately, so i am sure its full of mistakes
I would be extremely happy to help in anything i could, sugestions, brainstorming, u name it
I hope i didnt sound too much like an hypocrite with all my criticism
I will be checking out your other game (workers of kartedhir) next, good luck with your projects m8, i am considering becoming a patron for the first time in my life, i know it helps making you feel more enthusiasm about working on your games
Dunno if this should go to the review section, but to be honest i dont even know how to make a review in this forum, sry
Edit: I had something kinda relevant to add but i forgot it again, useless edit i will add it once i remember again (i usually have a few brain farts, i blame it on the weed i smoked on my teens)
Edit2: Haa i remembered, i saw many ppl saying that ezz to access scenes are not as good and anticipated as hard to get to, i agree, but as the whoremonger i like to think i am, i think some characters adult storyline could be a simple meat toilet
More like, when i see Victim or the death knight, whom, first, are made to be raped and murdered, or, second, made by you and complitly under your control, i dont think making a hard to get to scene makes sense in the story, i think there are better characters to build certain types of storylines with, and even though that may depend on a person's preference, i would not cut out the ezz to get to, meattoilete style of charater entirely. I like ezz fucks and i like hard fucks, both have a diferent taste and i dont know why we have to stick to one.
In the end, its your game and your story, i wouldnt take it personal if you completly disregard my opinion as i have been surprised many times by many ppl who are way more creative and experient than me
That would be funny.
