That is why I wrote in an earlier response that there should be three options for the scene with Abel. Polite and nice(with grinding teeths), because Edwin understands how he can benefit from Abel and Sophia´s influence in the medical community. Polite and nice, but telling them clearly that just breaking into other peoples home is far from cool, just showing them enough displeasure about it.The MC knows Abel as a powerful man who could—on a whim—have him fired, ruin his hopes of a medical career, or worse: this seems ample reason for him to be polite. And on the flip side, he knows that Abel’s influence could be enormously beneficial to him. Both carrot and stick align to urge polite respect, despite the annoying circumstances of Abel’s visit. That the MC was rude instead felt very much out of place to me.
Still, I hope that TD can create a route that aligns with your viewpoint. Perhaps the next time the MC visits the club he can spit in Warrens face—no reason to be polite to a low-life murderer, after all—and see where that takes him.
And as the third option the scene as it is right now.
And since we already have some of it in the current update, e.g. Sophia leaving wordless or telling the MC a meant goodbye, depending on how we treated her before, an option how to treat Sophia in general. Trying to get closer to her, being nice and professional, being neutral and disliking and treating her accordingly.