VN Ren'Py Pale Carnations [Ch. 4 Up 4 Public] [Mutt & Jeff]

[Turret]

What we have now: Kathleen mad at him because blackmail/him talking back/being closer to an "ian" at work than an "Edwin", Kathleen needing people to conduct underground human expierments with van doren/Sophia (sorry turret), The club not being an "offical" place and being one that employees people that would not be "missed" as much or as quickly (He hadnt talked to his mom/family in a long ass time, the house girl was a house girl at an illegal brothel.....), and downright confrimation that someone (female?) is down in a secret part of the club and is beggng to be free'd (or whatever they were screaming about its been a minute). IMO it makes sense for kathleen to get rid of him and she has a way too do it that doesnt invovle leaving the club, and that benifits her other ventures (the drug). Even more so if the person we heard was a feamle since youd want a male just for more data points.

No problem! But I doubt that Darius is down in the cellar. Kat wants Abel and Sophia´s help to topple the current leadership in the club. Being blackmailed makes her look weak, I doubt she told anyone beyond Warren and maybe August (since he has some interesting news on his bureau board).
In addition we know that Abel and Sophia have their own secret labs to test stuff, it is total bogus they are at the club for testing. They have different goals and I doubt there is more than one person in that cellar to show they "are testing".

 

[Idontplay]

[Cut]
On the other hand, and to play devil's advocate for a moment, we get these Chekhov's Clips, so to speak, on August's board:

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The one about the skull is dated June 7th. I doubt they're accidental.

Two faces and only a skull? A skull of a woman? I think we know what face covered that skull, before her death.

EDIT
Who want bet we will find out that the man in that board is the man Edwin and Ian are searching?

 

[se20299]

Also she could be trying to butter up Victoria to help convince Killian to get himself straightened out since she has more influence with him, like she did with Edwin.

I think this is the case too. Grace is probably getting desperate to get Ian on the straight and narrow, and if my hunch is correct, she doesn't like the fact that Ian loves Vicky more than her. Not to mention the fact that Vicky used to be a poor single mother and Edwin was a delinquent "corrupting" her son.

This may be Grace swallowing her pride and begging Victoria to do something about Ian, who doesn't listen to her at all, and he's becoming an embarrassment to the family.

 

[DarkLords00]

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"Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think you've ever called me that."

Maybe Grace resasoning behind the visit could be more about putting pressure on Killian to listen to her more otherways Victoria might find out more about some of his "misadventures".

After all, I highly doubt a person whose last effort to straighten out her son was trying to make a deal with his best friend behind said son's back is just going to casually meet the woman who she never respected and ask her for help in straighten out his son. Grace seems more the type to scoff at the idea of doing that to me

 

[Takkatakka]

Also she could be trying to butter up Victoria to help convince Killian to get himself straightened out since she has more influence with him, like she did with Edwin.

Probably...yes.

She seems to try to pull whatever strings she has left to steer Killian in a way she wants him to be and/or act.

 

[Phase_01]

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"Correct me if I'm wrong, but I don't think you've ever called me that."

These two in a old recorded gangbang footage when

 

[Flojerazul20]

I have a question, what characters will the upcoming update focus on?

 

[Takkatakka]

I have a question, what characters will the upcoming update focus on?

Rosalind for one, but there seems to be a bigger event with multiple characters towards the end of the update if I understood that correctly.

 

[Fapparition]

I have a question, what characters will the upcoming update focus on?

Should be Felicia considering how heavily Kathleen is plotting against her. But then again when I came back to the AVN after a long break (last scene was end of the date with Hana) Rosalind was on top. But this new content has turned the tables and now Rose is kind of behind other 2 Carnations. So maybe it will be her?

 

[Takkatakka]

Should be Felicia considering how heavily Kathleen is plotting against her. But then again when I came back to the AVN after a long break (last scene was end of the date with Hana) Rosalind was on top. But this new content has turned the tables and now Rose is kind of behind other 2 Carnations. So maybe it will be her?

Nah, her's was the last update. Her next big "oh fuck" moment will likely come with the next event in the club.

 

[Fapparition]

Nah, her's was the last update. Her next big "oh fuck" moment will likely come with the next event in the club.

Well, yeah. Aren't we like half week there? Last update ends at wednesday night but I'm not sure how much content 1 update brings. I thought the next update will have an exhibition in it.

 

[ename144]

I have a question, what characters will the upcoming update focus on?

Rosalind will be the focus of the first part of the update. After that, it sounds like Kathleen will get some attention, but that might only happen if the MC confided in her after the last Exhibition. The final part of the update will involve "the whole kit and kaboodle of girls," though it's not yet clear who might be left out of that kaboodle; presumably it doesn't include every last side girl or we'll be here until 2026.

 

[Jday]

Well, yeah. Aren't we like half week there? Last update ends at wednesday night but I'm not sure how much content 1 update brings. I thought the next update will have an exhibition in it.

Each update covers two days of content. Next one will supposedly end right before the exhibition weekend.

 

[Takkatakka]

Well, yeah. Aren't we like half week there? Last update ends at wednesday night but I'm not sure how much content 1 update brings. I thought the next update will have an exhibition in it.

The last updates only span like one in-game day. I think the next will span 2 and will bring us up to Friday evening or Saturday morning rather and the update after the next one will then have the exhibition.

 

[se20299]

From my understanding, the next update will be more of an interlude rather than dedicated to a single girl. If anything, it seems to be focused on minor characters such as Victoria, as she seems to be at the forefront of the promotional material of the upcoming update. It seems that the major event of this update will be revolving around Kat and her dick juice, possibly a group sex event with the house girls.

 

[Meabe37]

From my understanding, the next update will be more of an interlude rather than dedicated to a single girl. If anything, it seems to be focused on minor characters such as Victoria, as she seems to be at the forefront of the promotional material of the upcoming update. It seems that the major event of this update will be revolving around Kat and her dick juice, possibly a group sex event with the house girls.

Oh . I was expecting something for Rose. It's the only main girl whose love path didn't truly start now... poor cow

 

[dolfe67]

Oh . I was expecting something for Rose. It's the only main girl whose love path didn't truly start now... poor cow

A big part of the update will be about Rose

 

[Takkatakka]

Oh . I was expecting something for Rose. It's the only main girl whose love path didn't truly start now... poor cow

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Dev Diary 78



Hello, TD here.

I'm writing this later than usual, in the midst of spinning my wheels over some dialogue, so I'll keep this quick.

As of July 14th, the current count for Ch4Up5 is 1,345 statics, 41 animations, and 25,661 words.

That works out to 105 statics, 16 animations, and 2,623 words added to the project over the last two weeks.

As you can see, the focus has been on animations. Some really, really juicy animations for a Rosalind branch that has surprised me by becoming one of my favorite h-scenes in both a creative and a lizard brain sense. That's one of the fun things about this hobby, and the boon of collaborating with a wonderful artist like GIL. I know what I like, but sometimes our mish mash of ideas align in a serendipitous way that expands my love for writing smut.
Anyway, I'd say we're about 80% through with the Rosalind stuff. The more "romantic" branch is behind us, and we're currently chipping away at the last one. After that, they'll be some loose ends to tie up and a scene we've got some partial work done on already, but then we'll be on Friday of Week 3.

Boy, we're looking forward to getting to Friday.

As always, thank you for enabling GIL and myself to live our best life. Not a day goes by where either of us takes our good fortune for granted, and we're only able to do what we enjoy doing because of you.

I love you guys.

 

[xslayermkdx]

Mina has Juicy fantasies and looks like she is ready to throw away her "Old Shy Girl Clothes". Will be fun if MC and Felicia introduce her or invite her to watch in the club probably not gonna happen very soon but the story can go that way it will be fun to watch her developing dirty thoughts and desires and becoming naughty bad girl. Or her next naughty desire from her bucket list which she asked MC to help her try them can be Anal!

 

[MoBy28]

Mina has Juicy fantasies and looks like she is ready to throw away her "Old Shy Girl Clothes". Will be fun if MC and Felicia introduce her or invite her to watch in the club probably not gonna happen very soon but the story can go that way it will be fun to watch her developing dirty thoughts and desires and becoming naughty bad girl. Or her next naughty desire from her bucket list which she asked MC to help her try them can be Anal!

Mina has already thrown away her "shy girl clothes" and has started on her list. She is in no way shape or form ready to be introduced to the depravity of the club and competition, would probably scare her with some of the extreme things she would see. Neither Felicia nor the MC have the "authority" to invite anyone to witness anything at the club. Felicia is a contestant in the competition and the MC is Kat's errand boy. Hana on the other hand is a part owner and could possibly invite her but I don't think she would since she sees how innocent and naive Mina still is for now. Seeing what the MC has to do sometimes for his "job" would more than likely alter Mina's opinion of him and not in a good way.