If the dev keeps going like this, the “MC” (male protagonist) will meet his daughter too late, and she will be a nymphomaniacal slut, pregnant with her second neighbor’s child, and in a romantic relationship with her mother.
Honestly, not where I thought the sequel would go. I expected more of a struggle for Nadia to keep Ellie on the straight path, to avoid becoming a single mother like her.
The fact the Nadia will fuck anything with a pulse after having a child to take care of and raise is getting bit old.
I mean she is a hooker/call girl/escort and they can afford to pay their rent and stuff? Which makes Ellie start fucking the ugly ass neighbor to help out with bills. All that after she sees him perving on her mother.
It is just starting to not make a lot of sense.
I would guess the dude knows he has a child by Nadia ( I can't remember I need to reply the first one ), yet he's in no hurry to get to her or find them?
This has become a story of a mother and daughter who will fuck anything and everything with out much question. Oh I didn't expect your friend, but it's ok I'll fuck you both. Oh, my neighbor wants a fuck sure no problem.
Ellie fucks to get paid to help with rent/bills, later he just says, thought we could just have sex, 'Ok, sure why not.' 'I'm thinking of how you would look pregnant.' 'Cool cum in me...'. So, now she doesn't even need paid... Oh thanks for coming over this is my brother fuck us both! Yeah sounds fun, wait here is my old ass father fuck him too, Ok... Really?
It's a story that should just show them both on their backs with a line of people at their door.
A lot of the control you have had over the the story is just gone, used to be able to say no and such, now it's just forced scene after forced scene. More like a Kenetic novel...
I figured the second part would be about reconnection once he got out and about Nadia struggling to clean up her act while protecting Ellie. Nadia doesn't even hide her shit from her daughter by not doing it in the house or anything.
Anyway I'll keep following it in the hopes the story start to turn a corner, but I doubt it will based on what's going on right now in it. Honestly I would like more options to stop Ellie and Nadia, it's just starting to feel like every other VN out there.
