- Sep 12, 2018
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i used to think it would be gay-still do depending on things-but the issue with that comes when you add trans males.Hot damn !
The proselytism is strong in this one. Half of the line sound like it comes from a cult leaflet or something, certainly not from the characters as they all speak the same way.
I'm not weirded out by what they say but how they say it.
All the kind of "trivia" like "you know its normal in some countries to kiss your children" also feel weird because of the context.
They are already fucking all around the house yet they are still talking like they are trying to convince themselves of something.
And that leave only persons to be convinced are behind the forth wall (well I guess that the game creator could be more in the backstage, but you get what I mean).
When it is not that it's the character going length on how for example "the father should be the one taking his daughters virginity". Do they really need to be talking like that ?
I could almost see it since the goal half of the harem route is to convince Emily to go with it.
But it is so blatant that Emily could well be a sad looking plank of wood with boobs with "oh, okay ..." written on it.
"she is saying that because she is trying to resist", No, that's not the reaction of someone resisting to an idea they are getting convinced by.
That is just stating something as a fact seems like a clutch to the lack of character psychology.
She is living though an intense chain of life shattering revelations. Then indulge in something she should (considering her starting point) feel ashamed of. And it doesn't seem like anything.
But what about the Jenna Ex Machina. Well the thing is that a deus ex machina is a plot device, not a character development device.
Here all the story unfold because of a character talking an other character into something they are deeply against in the backstage. Well I assume it is that way since how little reaction Emily has when she witness any event.
Quite daring to go for almost a huis-clos and have checklist character development.
I have nothing against fuck fest type. Just that if you are gearing up for character based plot it would be nice to give it as much attention than to the sex scenes.