I love your visual novel, the designs, the quality of your renderings, but I have a constructive criticism, you should focus more on your two leads protagonists, I played your novel for a couple of hours, and I was only with the male protagonist, just over 15 minutes, and the female protagonist a little in the intro and then disappears for a long time, both characters have a lot of potential, and I think I speak for more people, when I say, that I personally would like to be able to use them more, and have more decisions, for example the scene of the thief in the store, that was great, and give the option in the future that both protagonists interact with each other more, cheers!