Ren'Py Completed Personal Trainer [v1.1.2] [Domiek]

[kino2]

why is there pregnancy tag? who got pregnant?

 

[hablat]

I have mixed feelings about it. Everything was left open-ended. I think the game being finished this way was intended, not rushed. But it feels like a rush job because there's no bow to tie it all up. It just sort of... runs out of content. A lot of the girls feel left to the wayside and have less of an 'ending' than others. Sophie definitely had the most complete story.

It's too bad. I liked some of the characters (mostly Sophie and her relationship with the MC tbh) and would have liked to see a more traditional ending, but it's whatever. I'm sure even with endings I, or someone else, would be dissatisfied in some way.

Still good and worth a play for anyone new. Maybe with an asterisk that the game peters out rather than outright ending.

Regardless, I'll definitely keep an eye out for the next project. This was one of my favourites up to this point.

 

[Malcowitz]

So, it's the mediocre non-ending then? What a damn shame for something this good to end like that. On the other hand, I can understand simply wanting to finish something off that's no longer enjoyable, but still, a damn shame.

why is there pregnancy tag? who got pregnant?

Redhead tells you that you impregnated her at some point

 

[vultron]

I'm not a patron who who cares what I think but not only was that really lackluster but multiple other characters don't even seem like they got conclusions they just got left hanging this game in no way seems complete but I didn't pay for it so oh well.

 

[Germanfragger]

OUCH nice way to burn bridges! i hope that u next game(s) fare better!

 

[Bublee]

I like dani but it's already completed or abanded. Android plss

 

[ogr blanc]

not gonna lie, this "ending" felt very "i give up, peace!" kind of thing. pretty disaponted(not that it counts for much). i think it needed a couple of updates to wrap things up. most characters already had their progression, all it needed was finish the last few characters, and an ending.

 

[oulala93]

hi, what is the file name of save under window? I did a search on the site, but I couldn't find the answer. Thx

 

[Exokip]

The lack of Mayan content is so disappointing, I played this update 24 hours ago and I'm still upset about it. She was the perfect "broken" type of girl that you never really see in games.

 

[Joshua Tree]

Meh. The Sophie final event is what I'll categorize as the ending.

I guess. What a fucking waste.
If you aren't even going to have an end to your story, why even write a fucking plot? You could have just done artwork with the models and fucked off.

There was an end, a conclusion if you want. But if you where missing a big "THE END" on the screen, then no, obviously.

Was there room to extend the story? Yeah, sure. But that is a creative decision. You flash a game dev tag. You should know something about that.. Creative decision, that is. Should be careful with throw down on a creator, when you a creator yourself. You kinda "elevate" yourself doing that putting your own content under closer scrutiny. That people upset, crying, wanting more content, that is more a sign of success of the creator rather than a failure. He did something good, and people want more of it.

What end are you missing? What would you like to see? What would EVERYONE like to see? People wanted different things from the ending. As with all these kind of games there is always people that end up disappointed over the outcome. fck sake, majority of these games end up with an abandoned tag and not complete at all.

 

[steelsmiter]

We should have a controversial tag as many people got their panties in a wad over this.

 

[RandomGeneratedName]

i dont understand by people saying there was no ending you got to make all the girls happy in the ending fixing there problems and making them better people in the end and with Sophie you finally got to have the forbidden relationship you were slowly working towards the whole game

appreciate what the dev did with this game and the time put into this and the hate/flack hes getting for this doesn't sit right with me. Unless you were a patreon supporter you cant really have any complaints since you got this game totally free of charge so just enjoy the game for what it is and move on to the next game. We should be lucky this game got even finished ive seen plenty of good games go abandoned so just take this as a blessing we got to see this game to the very end.

And to people say that they wasted there time with this game didnt you enjoy the sex scenes/ the models/ or anything inbetween if you jerked off to this game i hardly see that as wasting your time on this game since you did get enjoyment out of this game.

 

[user74518]

Personal Trainer v1.0 save

 

[bushwood]

Personal Trainer v1.0 save

How do i install this file?

 

[Cesco]

Kinda did Amy dirty there. But at the end of the day, I can't really complain about free content.

 

[Dyhart]

Yeah as it stands, I don't even want to download this update. Meh.

 

[Hysni]

Well You guys maybe are satisfied with scenes ...But Endings are Last spice that Makes Completed and your Loved Game
Example 1.Redhair woman -I know its game but i pity her she is pregnant Is Mc's Baby (when we play we put emotions in games to)
2.Sophie -Mc realy loves her it should be ended with Pregnancy etc- I realy loved Love Scenes (incest makes hoter )= LOVEOn Games only
3.Blonde Girl=Well she said dont cuminside she is not on pill -But I creampied her hahah She is HOT realy Beatifull (one more Baby wont cause problems
4.Japanese Girl =Her Ending is So Short sadly
5.Muscly Laddy =Her Ending is Sad to (she has no proper room)
6.Office laddy =Same Short ending
Sorry i did not put their real names but everyone who played knows them Yeah looks abandoned for me to

 

[sillyrobot]

Yeah as it stands, I don't even want to download this update. Meh.

Yeah, me too. Though it's not necessarily the lack of endings that's holding me off; it's the reports that the MC suddenly becomes uncontrollably mean. Calling Hikomi retarded while fucking her? Committing sexual assault? I don't think so. Not the MC as I controlled him.

It's like taking nearly a year off from writing the characters caused the dev to lose the 'voice' of the MC. I'd have preferred an abandoned tag a year ago to this.

The not-endings ending are just more reason to skip this and treat it as abandoned. The dev learned how to make pretty women and animations. Pity he didn't succeed in learning to make a good game.

 

[Jeevant]

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[Holy Bacchus]

His learning and experimentation is completed to his own satisfaction. PT was never meant to be a fully fleshed out VN, but a learning platform with feedback from the community to further learn the best practices, kink preferences of potential players/customers/consumers, the use of the various software for rendering, animation, etc, etc. These are things that Domiek said, in detail, multiple times.

Be patient and watch for an announcement of what the first TRUE project is, like many of us.

I know he was using this as a "practice project", but honestly, who cares if it was practice or not because even if that's the case, it shouldn't just end when the dev feels they've had enough and are ready to move on to their main passion project; that's what leads to games either having deliberately rushed endings or games that feel like they have rushed endings as this game does.

Even as a practice project, a dev, in this case Domiek, should have at least planned a proper beginning, middle, and end for the characters in this game and for the overall story of the game. It's not just about learning the technical aspects like DAZ development, animations, coding, game design, etc, that a dev needs to master, it's story writing as well, knowing how to develop a story with multiple characters and conclude it in a satisfactory way, and sadly Domiek has failed at the conclusion part. Telling people multiple times that this game is just for practice doesn't excuse the disappointing and open-ended nature of its so-called "completion", it should just have been to alert people to the fact that it might vary a bit in quality as their skills improve during production.

You can't really call this game "complete" when there are so many things left open:

1. Where does the MC and Dani's relationship go from here?
2. Where does the MC and Jenna's relationship go from here?
3. Where does the MC and Amy's relationship go from here?
4. Where does the MC and Sophie's relationship go from here?
5. What happens if the MC cums inside Daisy?
6. What happens with Hikari after her Dad finds out she's a stripper?
7. The MC and Mayan were getting closer, what would have happened there?
8. Would we ever see more of Karen?
9. How would the MC resolve being in relationships with all these different women?