Ren'Py - Completed - Personal Trainer [v1.1.2] [Domiek]

I came here for the trap content (yeah I'm one of those guys), but there's basically just one scene on that front & it's just alright. With that said it didn't bother me because the rest of the game was phenomenal.

There are several great characters such as the cousin, Jenna, & the dorm girls (fingers crossed Daisy gets more content) among others.
There were also a couple of girls that weren't my cup of tea (brunette bodybuilder & the obese girl), but their inclusion is a huge plus for me as it's really boring when every girl is a uniform 10. I also appreciate the fact that those body types got some love here, even if they're not my favorite.

I'd love to see more of the futa girl, the nameless blond, Daisy, the boss, & the cousin (but tbf she has a TON of content already). I'd also love pregnancy to get implemented (I might be a degenerate), but even if the game's development ended today, it is still a gem.
An easy 5/5. If you like it, please donate to the creator if you can because this is some great content & it should be rewarded.

Game is fucking awesone! There is a few bugs, but loving it so far. The game brings back memories of when I used to personal train. Jenna is my favorite of all the girls. can't get enough of that beastly bitch! lol

I absolutely loathe open world VNs like this but this one actually does a pretty good job. Granted, I would prefer if I didn't have to click around to get scenes but this game has an integrated walkthrough/hints section which really makes it much easier. Combined with the +1 / +6 hr skip time makes it not too difficult to progress the game.

The girls all have somewhat interesting personalities which are fun to get to know, some of the scenes have goofy but funny moments, including some references to other games, and events which are sort of silly to see. The MC seems to be a legitimate person and has meaningful dialogue which is always a huge plus, the girls all look fantastic in their own ways.. There even is light romance with a few characters.

I am excited for more content to see where some of the relationships go because some have really good potential. All around this game does really well and like I said, this is coming from someone who would much rather just read/play a VN than having to deal with open world.

I'm pretty confident that most people would enjoy this game, it's got a girl for everyone and was a good time. Definitely recommended.

4.5 / 5

It's a very nice game, the game play is intuitive, it doesn't require much grinding but you progress at a good speed. The renders and animations of the game are nice. It has a pretty decent storyline as well.

Closer to RL sex than you'll get with many of the games on this site, wonderful writing, captures the thought processes of the MC believably.
The graphics are good, the selection of characters varied.
But really, the writing is better than 90% of the games I've played. All the little ideosyncrasies and tidbits really add to the immersion. Here's hoping this will become a classic.

This is one of the most difficult reviews that I'll probably write. There are some really great parts of this game and then, at times, it feels empty.

The game tries to be too realistic in some areas (different body types) and then over the top unbelievable in others (I'm just here for you to fuck me, please do so NOW). It feels awkward. Either make it an ultra realistic VN or an over the top unbelievable one, but not both at the same time. Trying to be funny seems to trump everything though.

Good

• Good renders
• Detailed character models
• Good variety of characters
• A good range of personality types
• Great writing
• Humorous
• Good hint system - no walkthrough required - rare in most games

Bad

• Too many repetitive events. The same events keep playing over and over again to do what exactly? Pass time, there are better ways by far. At least have three or four variations of the same event if they are going to be repetitive. Greying out the option would even be better if there are no repetitive scene variations.
• Too many thick and unattractive girls. I much prefer fantasy over realism in this area (my opinion of course)!
• Game is too realistic at times and unbelievable at others - lack of consistency isn't good here (makes the game feel awkward)
• Humor trumps everything; even if it breaks the story or is too far fetched
• Need more things to do with the open world system - feels bare bones aside from the gym events
• Time passes inconsistently. For example, going to the Cafe in the morning and talking with anyone advances the time till late afternoon? In the gym, you can do lots of events with only a small passage of time. Never met anyone who took 6 hours to drink their coffee
• Needs more dialog choices and options. In too many instances I thought to myself, "I would really like to do or say this..."
• Got to have that incest tag or it isn't a game right? Dare to be different instead of following the incest crowd

I've read most of the reviews. I'm sorry, but I can't see how anyone can give this game 5 stars. I base this off of my experience with lots of other Ren'Py visual novels on this site. I guess my standards are much higher than most of the players handing out 5 star reviews like candy. No offense intended.

Do I recommend this game? I'm not really sure to be honest.

It is a good start for the author but isn't a perfect game by any means. My two cents worth, enjoy!

4,5 stars to this VN from me. It's not perfect but very fun to play.
Female models are detailed, vary from eachother - there are no obvious clones and everyone will surely find something to like (there is a plethora of various types of girls and women - from young to old, from fit to chubby, big cup, small cup, saggy, perky and so on).
This game has rid of all economic things and focuses only on action. Each girl has her daily schedule and player's job is to find time and place to discover new events. I like it this way cause it saves a lot of time (I hate grinding).
Personal Trainer has many kinks and lots of humor (kudos to the author of the texts - you made me laugh my ass off plenty of times).
Great game, I definitely recommend it!

Perfect game and thanks to random dude that recommended me this game ,i dont regret it playing and you will not also and if you like this game, dont forget to support Domiek on Patreon.

Pros
+Great renders
+Good writing
+Lovable characters
+Hint system is done very well ,you will not be stucked in any part of this game
+Asian chick ,but she is lesbian ,so i dont know ,if there will be more content with her ,who knows maybe she is bisexual.
+Free roam well done
+Muscular woman ,most of the players won't probably like it ,but it is something new for me and i'm not against it ,it's kinda hot actually mby i'm just weird nvm

Neutral
-none

Cons
-none

Amazing game. The content is comical and keeps you entertained as you progress through the development of the characters and the ladies are incredibly sexy. Has some cookie cutter elements to the game but the script is hilarious and is just a very well developed game, Domdiek has crushed it on this game so far!

This is the type of game that I dread. I dread it because I genuinely want more! Sometimes my playtimes take longer because I refuse to play, in fear, that I would not be able to progress. Fearing that I would see the words, "There are no more events in this version."

Honestly love the variety of woman, although I tend to stray towards, Sophie, the lovable cousin of the PC. Try this game.

There are a few visual hiccups that I have noticed, but it's the story that Domiek made that makes this game one of my favorites.

-Edit-

I'm appalled to see that the game was abruptly ended. I have read and understood that it was for "practice," even still I can't help but wish for some closure with my favorite characters. R.I.P to a very promising game

Pros

• Nice renders
• Some good looking models
• Surprisingly good dialouge
• Some actually realistic characters
• Wide variety of body types and personalities

Cons

• Open world setting doesn't really work as intended, mainly leads to a lot of repetition and searching for the right time and place in order to trigger a certain interaction, leading to loss of immersion and almost a feeling of grind.
• Suffers from too many in game contradictions. I'll try to explain what I mean below:

The dev doesn't seem to be able to decide what kind of game it is he/she is creating. Many times the plot is ludicrously unrealistic and the sex and interactions are silly. At other times, it's quite serious and realistic, even dark. Some characters are stereotypes turned into flesh. Others feel genuine and believable. None of it is bad unto itself (both silly and realistic games can be good), but it doesn't mix well and you get the worst of both worlds. Ie a game that doesn't feel realistic or believable, but where a lot of both characters and sex still are on the dumpy range of the attractiveness scale.

Also, a pet peeve of mine: If you're going to create a dominant male MC who likes to gag women with his cock and fuck them pain-anal style, don't give him a pencil dick. It makes it sad, rather than arousing.

Game version 0.40

Although this game is linear not many branch or don't have it but the story in this game makes it more interesting interaction between MC and other character. Example like how MC and Sophie their interactions is unique funny and hilarious plus sophie making funny face that's hilarious. We can also see that renders become better after the update. Example you can see is from Dani is not interesting from early version but it now it has become better. Got blue balls from this version from Dani but it's understandable as we can see more background story about Dani why she's very serious during her work. The dick girl is the funniest part for me hahahaha. This is my opinion on this game. If you guys like this game consider to support @Domiek on his patreon or you can leave a like on this game.

Aside from all the renders and girls (Which are great) the thing that really makes this game great is the dialogue and how the relationships with certain characters are built up.

Strongly recommend this one

I can't recommend this game simply because it suffers from two major flaws.

The first is the repetition. The game lets you roam freely around various locations and all the woman are on a needlessly complicated schedule as to where they'll be at certain times of the day.

The problem here is the same scene will play over and over even if you are following the schedule for a particular woman. It makes literally zero sense story wise having the same conversation with your cousin at breakfast over and over day after day, or her in her room watching the same show every night on a laptop regurgitating the same lines.

The same can be said with your boss telling you she's working on financial reports practically all day every day and can't chat. Also, the woman pretending to be caught under a table you can have sex with. You get the same scene every time. It would be better to just not have these people available at these times, but then it would mess with the schedule system I guess. Note: these are just a few of many examples of this.

The second flaw is that the sex scenes are pretty short and uninspiring. All that clicking around seeing repeatable dialogue and scenes for it to not even pay off is frustrating.

On the positive side the game has good renders, a good variety of characters (not all characters will suite everyone) and a pretty good setting and setup for the story.

I ran into only one glitch in my playtime.

You had me at "No Grind"..... Honestly, I love this game. This review is for the .4 version, so I MAY need to update as the story progresses, but I definitely love the no grind aspect. The characters are diverse in size, ethnicity and general personality. The story is "simple" but interesting and keeps me coming back for more. The "newer" renders really show a development of talent and/or adapting style and that's cool to see.
I like how this developer updates. Several hundred renders and there are multiple "events" to witness. Contrast that to other games wherein you might get a claim of 1200 renders and most of them are just an arm moving 3 inches or switching angles of this and that and not really story progression. (Not calling anyone out there. Just saying, this game is different. Every render seems important and relevant.)

Keep it up!

Finally a free roam game well done (only man of the house and Cure my A. comes to my mind if u guys know anything else enlighten me plz!)

+no grind
+proper quest info (absolutley must have for a free roam game imo)
+humor and the renders with that humor are fucking awesome
+very diverse set of girls and alot of kinks
+beautiful renders
+Story quite good for the girls that have a story atm (give us more Jenny!)
+extremer kinks like the trans scene could be skipped and were adressed in a way that it was not shoved in ur face (personally give us more of that blond)

-Jennys questinfo could need some touch ups
-story progression is sometimes a little rough because of the free roam character

(like amy not wanting to fuck u while yoga because of her guilty despite u fucking her dozens of times already, or ur cousin being prude despite running around naked all day or telling jenny that daisey sucked u off eventho that did not yet happen yet)

Amazing game, plz keep it up u have something great going here and I all I can hope for is more story, more kinks and more of that blond chick with a little extra.

I didnt expect much out of this game but i actually ended up liking it.I tried v0.29 and i gotta say that there's plenty of content already.Its not grindy as promised and the story is fine in my book.My only complain is the animations but you can see as you get to the newest update content that those improve.
I'd recommend this game,def try it

A great 'Harem' game with erotic situations and great sexe scene. The story is not here the focus point, instead it's more than you meet a lot of different girls, from different ages, siez, etc. and not only 'perfect' and boring bimbos. Amy, for exemple, is so hot, a frustrated milf with so many sexual energy in her !

This game surprised me with it's funny scenes and great dialogue between MC and women. The Sex scenes themselves could use improvement visually and having sound wouldn't hurt but the writing is amazing which in most cases the reverse. I do love the variety of body types. With it's unique setting and role the MC plays makes it one of the more interesting games available.

this game has good graphics with amazing mechanism.
most of the freeroam games needs the schedule of this game.
it has well written. it does not know from anywhere, you are learning from characters.
i hope we will see more of it.
ps: not a native speaker.