VN Ren'Py Abandoned Perverted Hotel [Day 2 Late Afternoon] [ManicMinxy]

[ManicMinxy]

Errr.... actually, I tend to agree with him. Maybe not "holy hell ugly", but something about her looks is "off". At least to me.
People have different tastes and most comments here are about how much they like that model. So I thought that maybe I'm the only one here who finds her to be creepy and not as good looking as all the other models in this game.
There is something about her looks that I don't like and makes her creepy. I'm just not sure what it is and that is why I haven't mentioned it.
Maybe it's something about her proportions (head to body or something like that), I don't know. I haven't measured them. These things usually tend to creep me out more or less - head too big or too small, legs or arms too long or too short - all the general human proportions, you know. Tits and butts included.
For cartoons it's usually OK to have something out of proportions, but 3D renders are just too realistic and for me all the off the scale proportional errors drop them into the uncanny valley.

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I wish I could point out what it is about her that is off, but right now I just can't. Sorry.
Makes my posting useless, I know. Sorry again.

AWw that's all good ! I can't seem to find what's wrong with her at all! It's just sometimes when I animate her to smile her teeth are different... I can see how she looks a bit like a shark but, that makes me like her even more

 

[ManicMinxy]

BJ is the most you can get from a family member

What's incest?

 

[mario1994]

Well, I think the Mom thing that's weird is all the shading around the nose and eyes. It makes her look like she's swollen from nose surgery or suffering from permanent allergies and nose-blowing. It even makes her eyes appear off. Body-wise, though, she's as hot as (if not hotter than) the girls.

Although, Eliza has to be my fave. Freckles!

In my opinion Mother looks a lot like Yennefer from The Witcher, but in more curvy body and ashen hairs not raven black.

 

[ManicMinxy]

Someone please update the OP to say that we have to start from the beginning.
Or write a tutorial on how to make the old version work because I can't figure it out.
I hate having to start games from the beginning with every update. That's the only reason I dropped Summertime Saga. If this happens in the next update too, I'll drop this game as well.

Reload from a save that is before the Shower Scene with Eliza

 

[Ignatz]

Since you asked, I just did a speed run at one scene that confused me. When the girls and MC are having breakfast and are explaining the hotel to him, there's the line "Plus it's not really holiday season..."

It's attributed to the MC in the game, but I think it should be Brooke who is saying it based on the images and the pacing.

 

[ManicMinxy]

lets get one thing straight i have corruption as my number 2 porn game for the reason that i love the concept of corrupting an entire town and their isnt that many porn games that you can brain wash an entire town to be your personal cum dump the other reason why i love that game is because it has over 70 saves worth of porn content the amount of porn content is ridiculous

Personally my favorite porn game is roller-coaster tycoon. There is nothing like landscaping, or corporate capitalism

 

[ManicMinxy]

Well, I think the Mom thing that's weird is all the shading around the nose and eyes. It makes her look like she's swollen from nose surgery or suffering from permanent allergies and nose-blowing. It even makes her eyes appear off. Body-wise, though, she's as hot as (if not hotter than) the girls.

Although, Eliza has to be my fave. Freckles!

Ahh maybe ! I have a new version of Maddision that has her wearing "Less make-up"... Maybe it will fix the shading!

 

[ManicMinxy]

Since you asked, I just did a speed run at one scene that confused me. When the girls and MC are having breakfast and are explaining the hotel to him, there's the line "Plus it's not really holiday season..."

It's attributed to the MC in the game, but I think it should be Brooke who is saying it based on the images and the pacing.

Ahh that's a mistake! Thank youu

 

[Ignatz]

Personally my favorite porn game is roller-coaster tycoon. There is nothing like landscaping, or corporate capitalism

Heh. And here I thought you were going to go with Pong. We know what the REAL subtext of getting that little thing behind the other players paddle really meant.

 

[ManicMinxy]

Heh. And here I thought you were going to go with Pong. We know what the REAL subtext of getting that little thing behind the other players paddle really meant.

I can't believe I forgot about Pong! It's just one of the porn games that you don't even have to mention . It has everything: balls, two sticks

 

[Ignatz]

Think of all those poor, unaware Moms who thought their kids were just having some wholesome fun. Little did they know!

 

[mario1994]

If I had known in what engine, program you are making your art. I would gladly help with renders, placement or any other graphic. I'm no proffessional, yet I feel the need to help you in any way possible for this game to come out sooner and with more content. It is a first of its kind game which has so erotic scenes in it, especially with Illusion models. Many games use male models which look creepy, ugly or the like. Most of their dicks do not look lifelike at all, yet here we have a meaty dick which looks natural even.. couse most of them look like colored sticks with rounded end.. all models look hot, mimic of their faces in every render is great to look at. I feel that there is still room for improvement, especially background is lacking in some places. Beach especially, looks empty and without life in it. Characters are the opposite of that, they are full of life and emotions which is especially pleasant to the eye. So far.. the only problem with this game which hurts its fans the most is how much content we get for each update. Thats why I would gladly recommend you to open a recruitment for helper or additional developer. Lets say a match or audition or the like for best renders in program you use. Or best erotic scene or the like. Couse we get it, you are lone developer with great potential but little time on your hands.

 

[ninja_robot]

As for the "i'll drop this game as well",. you aint important enough to make threats like that. It doesn't matter if you drop it or not.

The absolute fucking state of this site...

I haven't finished this version yet, but so far I had to give values to a couple of variables that didn't exist in the previous versions and in this version they are being incremented by some events that already existed in the previous versions. For example, now there are "Showerpoints" that you'll collect during the first shower scene with Eliza and the events of the new shower scene depend on the score you have collected from there.

Yeah, the game broke for me one the shower scene and changing codes to play this little game is too much effort. I'd rather just skip through stuff to get to that point again.

Reload from a save that is before the Shower Scene with Eliza

Thanks, but I already skipped through everything to get to the end of Day 1 again. Though if you have permission to edit the OP, please put tips like that there too. Or, you know, make a patch/new version.

 

[King Monkey Mon]

Personally my favorite porn game is roller-coaster tycoon. There is nothing like landscaping, or corporate capitalism

must have been a good mod i mean this a mod for everything nowadays you probably played a mod that had the rides had some horse play or public cum dumps as some ride mods XD example

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That concept of qonquering, corrupting entire town is enticing on its own. I know it couse it interested me at first too, with time and repetited actions for x-th time I must say.. almost all interactions with characters in that game have no depth to it. You go, give them potion x-th time and you have risen their lvl of corruption. If we had erotic artician like author of Perverted Hotel working with author of Corruption.. Then I would call it a masterpiece worth of every penny. Corruption has it, that characters change their appearence with each lvl of corruption. In some cases they look so ridiculous that it becomes revolting to look at them. I would gladly have them as slaves or what not, but not looking like cheap hooker on drugs.. They are getting more and more brain dead with each lvl of corruption. Which in my case takes excitement from me for accomplishing something great. I would gladly qonquer whole town but at the same time do not take brains out from my slaves.. Corruption is a game which in cheap way makes a harem king out of nobody. There is no joy in it for me to take from it

you know what they say one mans trash is another mans treasure

 

[ManicMinxy]

must have been a good mod i mean this a mod for everything nowadays you probably played a mod that had the rides had some horse play or public cum dumps as some ride mods XD example

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you know what they say one mans trash is another mans treasure

I actually no joke love Oideyo! Mizuryu Kei land... The art and stories are pristine

 

[King Monkey Mon]

I actually no joke love Oideyo! Mizuryu Kei land... The art and stories are pristine

glad to hear you are a fan have you seen those sailor moon stories?

 

[ManicMinxy]

The absolute fucking state of this site...

Yeah, the game broke for me one the shower scene and changing codes to play this little game is too much effort. I'd rather just skip through stuff to get to that point again.

Thanks, but I already skipped through everything to get to the end of Day 1 again. Though if you have permission to edit the OP, please put tips like that there too. Or, you know, make a patch/new version.

Yeah I ended up putting in a tip! But I'm not very happy with how fast it got pirated. I don't like my game being pirated.

 

[King Monkey Mon]

Yeah I ended up putting in a tip! But I'm not very happy with how fast it got pirated. I don't like my game being pirated.

the internet sure can be a bitch sometimes

 

[ManicMinxy]

glad to hear you are a fan have you seen those sailor moon stories?

Oh yeah I have! The artist also made a game/VN I believe but it's in Japanese There is also an entire hentai

 

[ManicMinxy]

the internet sure can be a bitch sometimes

Yeah... I just wish I can have more money to hire someone to help me with music, VO, sound, programming, art, writing, and development...