VN Ren'Py Abandoned Perverted Hotel [Day 2 Late Afternoon] [ManicMinxy]

[ManicMinxy]

Hi everybody. First thing is that i want to say big Thank You to ManicMinxy for creating this game. I liked this game from the first release and now i like it even more The hot as hell characters and story is just awesome. Oh and extra kudos for creating so beautiful models with Illusion and not with over used Daz(i like them too) but it is the one thing that makes this game special. And thats why i support this game on patreon too. I would like to say more things but my english writing is not the best just keep up the the good work ManicMinxy and i hope you will get more support as the time goes on

Thank you so much for your support! I wanted some variety in the game characters that are out there and figured HS is the best solution for that!

 

[ManicMinxy]

Look here for android and iOS Support :

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Oh don't get me back on this train. I tried to develop the game for android and it took a long time and got me no where... I'm happy if someone else does it? I know one person did make it for android for the last version!

 

[ManicMinxy]

wow what a family. :O
The only thing i find a bit weird is MC's hands, they are really feminine. ( yeah i know, shouldnt be the only thing, but HEEY)

HAhaha I had to use a female model to substitute for a male model. In HS I think the male models look really crap

 

[Squib2187]

I'm digging this game (although good thing for the beej, if I got blueballed again I'd put my fist through my monitor) Feel bad about pirating but i'm scraping by while playing ren'py games on my 8-year-old potato. anyway quality product.

 

[ManicMinxy]

Minxy, I know now exactly what makes her creepy.

I looked through all of the CG of the game and now I'm dead sure that the problem is exactly what I thought earlier. Her head/body ratio is way off. I couldn't find any good images with her standing up in full length to compare her body length with the size of her head, but it's clearly visible on many images that while her head is about the same size of her daughters, her body is much-much larger - both taller and wider.
Since on most pictures you can see only her upper body, only her shoulder width and head size ratio looks weird, because compared to the size of her head her shoulders are too wide for a female and she looks like umm... a tranny. Or a cross dresser. Basically, a man in female clothing.
On the pictures where she is standing next to her girls, the girls are only reaching up to her shoulders - she is much taller than her daughters, while her head is about the same size or even smaller.
I guess, she's been visiting a head shrinker for way too many times or something

And considering the age of her kids, she should be about as tall, possibly even shorter than they are.
So, basically, she would look fine as tall as her older daughters are. Or, in case she is a gigantic tank of a woman, larger and taller than her adult kids, then her head should be much larger, too.
Otherwise she looks just alien. Creepy. Wrong.

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Fashion models are drawn a bit taller

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I'm going to get to rebuilding the character just for frame of reference to see if you are right !

 

[ManicMinxy]

Heh, i like that approach. "Shock and awe" in a porn-game. Have us tiptoe around. If you can keep that suspense up for a while, that alone would make this game memorable for a lot of people.


Yeah, that struck me as a bit odd every now and then. The bathroom scene with Alexa, or Brooke's fetch-"quests" ("take another shower, i know how men shower!" - excuse me? How rude! Bitch, i'm a dirty pervert, but i'm a CLEAN dirty pervert!), the MC seemed almost submissive. Fine if you want to have that dynamic (.. will probably gross out a lot of people around here ^^") - but if you want to go a route that feels more like "corrupted pervert meets corrupted girls who out-pervert him by miles" a few inner monlogue-lines could do wonders. Of course, that's entirely up to you and what kind of story you wish to tell. Just my two cents.


It's content, it's fitting the game and the scene, it's already done - why remove it entirely? Some might dislike it, some might like it (personally it was a bit excessive, but amusing nonetheless), so a simple choice seems like the best way to go. You could even make it some kind of easteregg to unlock.
That is, of course, unless you yourself come to dislike it.
Stay true and consistent to what you want to create - judging by what you have so far, you'll find fans anyway.

- Yeah that's the intention ^--^

I wanted the MC to seem innocent? However, I believe he comes across to be an absolute pushover or just... a really passive person... He should have character but I want this character to be determined by the players.

You are right! I actually like the weird blowout gross faces... I'll keep it in perhaps only as an option... We will see !

 

[ManicMinxy]

Some of the blowjob mouth morphs are borderline nightmare fuel. Brooke was always my favorite but I'm afraid I can't un-see her transforming into a horse.

The gagging onamonapias were 10/10 tho.

I was hesitant to include the onomatopoeic gagging but I'm so glad you like them! The character arc of Brooke becomes complete when she turns into a horse.

 

[ManicMinxy]

Since, I think it's been 3 months since the previous update, there's hardly new content in the latest update. Too bad, I really like this game.

I'll include more next time! The issue with this update is incorporating and learning to use the menu system which for a ren'py novice like me was extremely hard. Also, there were a lot of errors and my system broke down.

 

[Pollolicious]

Man, this update was disappointing. Wheres madison manic, why you do this to us after that last scene from 0.2. On the bright side, I can't wait for 0.4 and what you come up with. Any plans on adding smooth animation to your game for future scenes? I think it would elevate the quality of the game two-fold.

 

[Cameage]

I'll include more next time! The issue with this update is incorporating and learning to use the menu system which for a ren'py novice like me was extremely hard. Also, there were a lot of errors and my system broke down.

This is my first time playing through the game. I like it a lot, you are reeeeeeal good at making things sexy through dialog, and the short little animations are great.

Criticism: this might just be me, but I really dislike the parallax effect for the navigation. I don't like having to wait to click a menu item.

Granted, I usually play on an iPad over Chrome Remote Desktop, so UI things like that are a pain in the ass for me, but might not matter to anyone else.

Keep up the good work.

 

[ManicMinxy]

Minxy, I know now exactly what makes her creepy.

I looked through all of the CG of the game and now I'm dead sure that the problem is exactly what I thought earlier. Her head/body ratio is way off. I couldn't find any good images with her standing up in full length to compare her body length with the size of her head, but it's clearly visible on many images that while her head is about the same size of her daughters, her body is much-much larger - both taller and wider.
Since on most pictures you can see only her upper body, only her shoulder width and head size ratio looks weird, because compared to the size of her head her shoulders are too wide for a female and she looks like umm... a tranny. Or a cross dresser. Basically, a man in female clothing.
On the pictures where she is standing next to her girls, the girls are only reaching up to her shoulders - she is much taller than her daughters, while her head is about the same size or even smaller.
I guess, she's been visiting a head shrinker for way too many times or something

And considering the age of her kids, she should be about as tall, possibly even shorter than they are.
So, basically, she would look fine as tall as her older daughters are. Or, in case she is a gigantic tank of a woman, larger and taller than her adult kids, then her head should be much larger, too.
Otherwise she looks just alien. Creepy. Wrong.

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Fashion models are drawn a bit taller

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I think you are exactly right. Her legs are also way too long, but that's an okay to play around with right?

 

[ManicMinxy]

Man, this update was disappointing. Wheres madison manic, why you do this to us after that last scene from 0.2. On the bright side, I can't wait for 0.4 and what you come up with. Any plans on adding smooth animation to your game for future scenes? I think it would elevate the quality of the game two-fold.

Yeah , I tried animation out but it looks grainy for me... Maybe in later updates

 

[WHUML]

I think you are exactly right. Her legs are also way too long, but that's an okay to play around with right?
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PLEASE DO NOT CHANGE HER!!! How she is right now is just perfect. Thank You Very Much.

 

[Led]

I think you are exactly right. Her legs are also way too long, but that's an okay to play around with right?
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Can't say I noticed that, tbh. Somehow I find the mother even hotter than the daughters. Maybe make the head slightly bigger, but I wouldn't make her body shorter. And by the way, I really appreciate all the effort and time you put in the game!

 

[AlexanderGr]

How the hell did you made the HS models look so less asian?
is it in HS Neo?

 

[ratmonas]

To be honest, I prefer the previous updates in term dialogs and events
the last update had lil to non fap material, and not that much of content either
and the new traveling\going-around system ...I kinda don't like it...it just make the game feel empty ...well at least rn

 

[Shutup666]

Any savegame ?

 

[myuhinny]

I noticed one spot when you first meet the 3 sisters Hailey's name tag is set to Brooke's so when Hailey talked she was talking using Brooke's name instead.

When the younger sister drops his underwear and his thing comes out trying to slap her in the face you could almost hear it shouting back back you demon you'll never take me alive.

The whole time she was taking the pictures I was just waiting for it to misfire right there in the middle of her shots. Incoming!!!! PEW!! PEW!! PEW!!

The one bikini the sister tries on doesn't really look black to me it more looks like a dark grey.

The moms expression after she asked her son if he had a girlfriend was the look of you better say no fucker or I'm kicking you in the balls under the table.

If you picked the *I know some of them that prefer someone mature and smart* after she says *I'm surprised that someone like you is single. Then the next 4 or 5 lines she acts like you picked the *you don't look a day over 30 option.

Yeah when you are standing in front of the mirror getting ready to go to the beach the first screenshot you can really tell that the model is female. The legs hands and upperbody just scream female. The 2nd one was male though.

The mother says to put a dab of lotion on your hand and then the next sentence tells him not to be stingy and to use a lot. A dab is a tiny bit if she wanted more she should say use lots.

When you are adding lotion to the mother later after she catches Brooke taking her top off and later the mother says * Oh hailey she's always been the wildest one* It should say Brooke not Hailey.

If you tell on Eliza she gets some depPoints but if you don't tell on her but ask for a favor she gets 2 depPoints and later at the dinner table Brooke will act like you told them that she was sleeping on your bed even though you never did.

I see a lot of proof reading is needed as I see a lot of mistakes.

Well I'll finish the rest of the game tomorrow as it's getting late.

 

[mario1994]

Now the biggest mystery for next update is "Why does all female characters are so eager to please our MC?" Second best is how Brook will use our milk.. will she freeze it in ice cubes and add to drink of all our family members or just one specific individual? Most likely she will give us the job of adding ice cubes to drinks, be it alcoholic or not. She can also add a stick to it and then freeze, fuck. That would be hot if she had that kind of popsicle. Most likely she will play with ice in whichever form just to tease Us and remind Us what the rest of the family have too.. One of the hottest possibilities yet. Better yet, that she will add this to our daily activities, milk Us from our juice and freeze it for later. Couse most likely we will have in the future all kinds of possibilities to choose from.

Masseour for example is responsible for teasing Us, as much as possible. Most likely Brook told her to do what she did. Becouse she needed as much Juice as possible.

Our Hostess for example.. is in similar situation, yet different. She is attracted to MC, at least to his junk and what she said about her job and not doing what we tell her.. is just an excuse not to continue what she started. It would complicate things, yeah but she wanted it to continue.

Mother is yet to be healthy in mind, her mania resurfaced when we appeared in her life. It is clear as day that is the truth. At least for now she is hiding behind her motherly vail, but at some time she will break that dam called incest.. and let loose her own desires. For it to happen, most likely we need to show her love she seeks and do not appear to be perverted in any way. She will break that wall by her own free will with time.

Manipulative little sister.. she is clearly as day beg for attention and affection. Her innocance is but a facade, she is clearly attracted to our MC. In different way, couse most likely all that got close to her were creeped out by her demands and child like appearence as well as her behaviour. Our Mc is different and attractive to her, he accepts her demands. She clearly wants for her demands to be met and wants Mc to be ass submissive as possible, yet clearly wants Us to have our own initiative, like with v-card in toilet.

Hailey or whatever is her name, second twin. Is by far the most normal girl in the family. She seeks in our MC brotherly love and not a perverted guy. Those of, she had too much in her life. Most likely. Thats why in interactions with her, we need to be careful not to be sexual and perverted all covered by brotherly love and care.

Brook on the other hand wants Us to be bold and perverted, like her so she needs to outdo our own perverted imagination. She is competitive and perverted. Most likely she is the one which will make our lives the most exciting in this game.

 

[Synergy_]

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