After playing for a while I have to admit, I can not stand the dialogue. It doesnt seem too weird at first, but after spending some time you realize that the dialog was written by someone who has more experience talking to other people via instant messaging rather than in person. Every single conversation is drawn out, everyone constantly quips, everyone acts like an asshole to everyone around them... This is incredibly grating and annoying.
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Oh yeah, and those stupid, pointless, annoying dream sequences. I go to bed, hoping for some morning scenes, but instead Im treated to a super fucking long, multi-scene story involving people I dont know or care about, with their terribly written dialogue. I suspect this is to set something up in the future, but falls flat on it's face on account of being boring, annoying and out of place, as well as dragged out to the point where Im just skipping text because I cant be bothered to pretend I care. Once that was finally over, I saw the guy who comes to pick money, so Im thinking, 'Okay, just gonna click through the dialogue... WAIT WHY THE FUCK ARE WE IN A FUCKING CAR NOW?!'
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Also, who the fuck says 'fufu'?