VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[TabooDad50]

Absolutely love the game so far, sadly didn't need any lube yet. The changes made to Paris model are great and i love all the renders and characters.
Great Start and Good luck with this game.
Will keep watch on this project and look forward to more content.
My ONE request is a weekend alone with Miracle, a copy of fifty shades for her to read and A LOT of Water, this old guy needs to stay Hydrated.

 

[a1fox3]

I have to say even though the oldest sister looks way older than before she actually looks like one of the sisters now.

 

[Cooling Prob]

Really like it! The MC is ...I'm being very very picky here....a bit drab. The girls are wonderful though. I'll be waiting for each update and I'm sure things will get very interresting

 

[botc76]

Good first official post-demo version. Sabrina as the newbie really scored some points with me.
Very cute.

I think I might actually support this one, considering I dropped two other games this month for various reasons. And Superwriter DID say every dollar helps.

 

[BobJenkins]

SuperWriter Just played version 0.1. I had already played through the demo twice, so after seeing the new Paris model for the first time, I started skipping ahead through the demo content of the story. If you rewrote a significant amount of it I'd be happy to go back and play through what I skipped.

I really liked the new stuff. Natural dialogue and humor, and I am genuinely looking forward to reading more of the story. I think Sasha is my favorite character so far, though Miracle is a close second. Sabrina is very interesting.

Why does Miracle still have the vampire fangs? Is that a running gag?

Can't say I'm feeling the new Paris model. She looks good in some screens, not as good in others.

The original model looks better by comparison, at least in my opinion. Better facial expressions at times. I'm guessing I'm in the minority there, that's cool.

The facial expression both models make when upset is off putting.

Blue hair doesn't seem to work as well with the newer model. I wasn't much of a fan of it with the original Paris at first, but looking back at screens now, it did work better with that model.

If you're going to stay with this newer version, please consider changing her hair color. Maybe to black? I don't think red would fit her character, just wouldn't seem right. Blonde definitely wouldn't work.

Once again, really looking forward to the next update. Please don't take my criticisms of Paris too harshly. I do hope you can rework her or at least change her hair color, but if you and Ptolemy decide not to, I'm still looking forward to playing through the game.

 

[Skrim72]

I'm a fan of PTOLEMY's other works, so giving this a try even though it's super early. (v0.1) I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

 

[Penfold Mole]

Damn, I liked the Paris from the demo. Her looks matched her character - cheeky, mischevious, unpredictable. Unusual, yet beautiful.
Congrats to you guys who complained about it, you just got yourself another boring dollface.

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

SuperWriter Just played version 0.1. I had already played through the demo twice, so after seeing the new Paris model for the first time, I started skipping ahead through the demo content of the story. If you rewrote a significant amount of it I'd be happy to go back and play through what I skipped.

There are quite a lot of changes to the dialogue in this version leading up to the new stuff. You should definitely give it a try.

 

[tuviejalamugrienta]

Thank you, now the MC doesn't look like Leatherface. And the oldest daughter is not a long-neck alien. Good!

 

[Baharomont]

Booooooooooooooooooring...

 

[ZoZo0311]

This is my first time playing this. I really like the models and the story line, can't wait for the next update.

 

[beefy1977]

I remember when I was a kid on a road trip with my family. It was night time, quiet in the car. I pushed out the loudest fart possible trying to be funny. Only thing was, it wasnt just a fart. Pic #5 is pretty much what I remember most after my dad pulled over...

 

[Visago]

Aw shit. Not one, not two, but three daughters to lewd!

In all seriousness though, I am liking the new Sasha. She looks like the diva the writing is portraying her as. Speaking of the writing, it's much more fluid than the first release, in my opinion. Also, it's good to see Jenny from Triangle again. Looking forward to next update.

 

[Miðgarðsormr]

Three daughters and one daddy to rule them all...... count me in.

 

[HandofVecna]

This wonderful! Keep it up!

 

[Deleted member 997153]

The fact that this game starts off with an embarrassing, self-aggrandizing treatise on the quality of porn VNs and declaration that this game will be so much better is doing the developers no favors, in my opinion. At best, it sets very high expectations that the devs now have to deliver on and, at worst, it's opening them up to mockery for being so full of themselves if they fail. Under promise and over deliver, in all things.

Better to make the best game to one's ability and then let the audience decide how good it is. That sort of narcissistic ego-stroking will make the audience much more likely to nitpick it to death to tear down what may be seen as an undeserved attitude.

 

[botc76]

The fact that this game starts off with an embarrassing, self-aggrandizing treatise on the quality of porn VNs and declaration that this game will be so much better is doing the developers no favors, in my opinion. At best, it sets very high expectations that the devs now have to deliver on and, at worst, it's opening them up to mockery for being so full of themselves if they fail. Under promise and over deliver, in all things.

Better to make the best game to one's ability and then let the audience decide how good it is. That sort of narcissistic ego-stroking will make the audience much more likely to nitpick it to death to tear down what may be seen as an undeserved attitude.

On one hand yes, on the other hand basically all of Ptolemy's games are indeed better than most AVNs and let's be completely honest, just look under the incest tags for ren'py and unity games and a lot of them are just embarrassingly bad.
The same 3-5 daz models, horrible Engrish, the same constantly recycled "story." The same 2-3 annoying MC daz models, almost always with a horse cock...

For me, I just decided to see it as a sign of self-confidence.
But it is true that both Ptolemy and Superwriter absolutely need to deliver quality, after setting their work on a pedestal from the start, not arguing that. I do have faith in them to deliver though.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Hmmm that's true I guess I may check in an update or two later but the first release can tell you a lot about how a game will develop, if in this release you have no choice but to start interacting with all the girls no matter the choice of the player, if even though the player has no interest in a girl but you are say forced to perv on her or the mc in someway starts interacting with her sexually it doesn't really give the impression that there will be much player agency later down the line. I much prefer games of this style where the girls paths are entirely separate, where you can get to the end of one girls path whilst entirely avoiding another.

There will be option to skip in future!

Absolutely love the game so far, sadly didn't need any lube yet. The changes made to Paris model are great and i love all the renders and characters.
Great Start and Good luck with this game.
Will keep watch on this project and look forward to more content.
My ONE request is a weekend alone with Miracle, a copy of fifty shades for her to read and A LOT of Water, this old guy needs to stay Hydrated.

Haha, i'm glad you liked the game. And you may get your wish

Good first official post-demo version. Sabrina as the newbie really scored some points with me.
Very cute.

I think I might actually support this one, considering I dropped two other games this month for various reasons. And Superwriter DID say every dollar helps.

Haha, every dollar DOES help. Thank you so much for the support!

SuperWriter Just played version 0.1. I had already played through the demo twice, so after seeing the new Paris model for the first time, I started skipping ahead through the demo content of the story. If you rewrote a significant amount of it I'd be happy to go back and play through what I skipped.

I really liked the new stuff. Natural dialogue and humor, and I am genuinely looking forward to reading more of the story. I think Sasha is my favorite character so far, though Miracle is a close second. Sabrina is very interesting.

Why does Miracle still have the vampire fangs? Is that a running gag?

Can't say I'm feeling the new Paris model. She looks good in some screens, not as good in others.

The original model looks better by comparison, at least in my opinion. Better facial expressions at times. I'm guessing I'm in the minority there, that's cool.

The facial expression both models make when upset is off putting.

Blue hair doesn't seem to work as well with the newer model. I wasn't much of a fan of it with the original Paris at first, but looking back at screens now, it did work better with that model.

If you're going to stay with this newer version, please consider changing her hair color. Maybe to black? I don't think red would fit her character, just wouldn't seem right. Blonde definitely wouldn't work.

Once again, really looking forward to the next update. Please don't take my criticisms of Paris too harshly. I do hope you can rework her or at least change her hair color, but if you and Ptolemy decide not to, I'm still looking forward to playing through the game.

I appreciate all the comments!

I'm a fan of PTOLEMY's other works, so giving this a try even though it's super early. (v0.1) I'll be keeping an eye on this one.

Thank you!

The fact that this game starts off with an embarrassing, self-aggrandizing treatise on the quality of porn VNs and declaration that this game will be so much better is doing the developers no favors, in my opinion. At best, it sets very high expectations that the devs now have to deliver on and, at worst, it's opening them up to mockery for being so full of themselves if they fail. Under promise and over deliver, in all things.

Better to make the best game to one's ability and then let the audience decide how good it is. That sort of narcissistic ego-stroking will make the audience much more likely to nitpick it to death to tear down what may be seen as an undeserved attitude.

Up to the challenge =]

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

On one hand yes, on the other hand basically all of Ptolemy's games are indeed better than most AVNs and let's be completely honest, just look under the incest tags for ren'py and unity games and a lot of them are just embarrassingly bad.
The same 3-5 daz models, horrible Engrish, the same constantly recycled "story." The same 2-3 annoying MC daz models, almost always with a horse cock...

For me, I just decided to see it as a sign of self-confidence.
But it is true that both Ptolemy and Superwriter absolutely need to deliver quality, after setting their work on a pedestal from the start, not arguing that. I do have faith in them to deliver though.

Thanks again for the support BOTC76! The message at the beginning of the VN wasn't cockiness or bravado. It's to show that we take our art seriously and we WANT people to hold us to the highest possible standard. It's the same reason I call myself SuperWriter. We have A LOT planned for this game.

 

[Deleted member 997153]

On one hand yes, on the other hand basically all of Ptolemy's games are indeed better than most AVNs and let's be completely honest, just look under the incest tags for ren'py and unity games and a lot of them are just embarrassingly bad.
The same 3-5 daz models, horrible Engrish, the same constantly recycled "story." The same 2-3 annoying MC daz models, almost always with a horse cock...

For me, I just decided to see it as a sign of self-confidence.
But it is true that both Ptolemy and Superwriter absolutely need to deliver quality, after setting their work on a pedestal from the start, not arguing that. I do have faith in them to deliver though.

Fair enough. You and I are typically in agreement about the low quality of some of the games that have been released lately, so I'm certainly not disputing the fact those are present in abundance. However, in my experience, insecurity announces itself while confidence shows itself. I wish Ptomely and SuperWriter luck in delivering on the high expectations they've created for themselves. Higher quality porn games certainly won't be a bad thing.