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I think thie
I think they meant that the text being said uses Miracles name but it is also labeled as being spoken BY Miracle. I doubt she is talking to herself that way.
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Fun Romp, pretty well done.. Grats, waiting for more now!
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My Incest patch, just replace ep.rpy in PP-demo-pc/game and start the game (I know you can chose the relation but some people asked for this because i a little confuse)
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Just keep in mind that this doesn't seem to be ptolemy writing, but this superwriter dude.
I hope with a name that confident, he will actually deliver something worthy of the moniker.
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is really good by now and with the help of ptolemy is really promisingJust keep in mind that this doesn't seem to be ptolemy writing, but this superwriter dude.
I hope with a name that confident, he will actually deliver something worthy of the moniker.
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SuperWriter Nice start so far, but you guys should take another look at naming and relationship customizer at the start of the game, I think it will be better to input a specific role (daughter) for each girl at the start instead of one for all three at once (daughters) since it fucks with the script.
Example 1:
Example 2:
Example 3 (Double S):
Also it might be a good idea to implement how the girls should adress you (Dad) while other characters use your MC's name. Guess this one needs to be fixed too:
And this one made me lol:
Also, Sasha has a creepy black line on her face within her dialogue render:
Example 1:
Example 2:
Example 3 (Double S):
Also it might be a good idea to implement how the girls should adress you (Dad) while other characters use your MC's name. Guess this one needs to be fixed too:
And this one made me lol:
Also, Sasha has a creepy black line on her face within her dialogue render:
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Right.
Here are my thoughts.
For a VN third person is always troublesome. Most of us players want to be able to identify at least partially with the MC, that is made a lot harder if it is written in third person, not first.
Sunny-side up eggs and bacon IS NOT a healthy breakfast. Pictures and text are at odds and it just seems silly.
The English is a bit awkward at times, a few times it seems just plain wrong, though it seems to get better during the course of the demo.
As is to be expected from Ptolemy's involvement, the girls are beautiful, but even in that point, the renders don't seem quite as sharp as I expect from Ptolemy. Still gorgeous girls though.
After playing through it a second time having replaced the "daughters" with "daughter" it really does make a difference and I have to say this is already pretty good.
The only thing weird is how all three girls seem to already be interested in the D sexually, just when he realizes he reacts that way to their bodies and teasing.
Here are my thoughts.
For a VN third person is always troublesome. Most of us players want to be able to identify at least partially with the MC, that is made a lot harder if it is written in third person, not first.
Sunny-side up eggs and bacon IS NOT a healthy breakfast. Pictures and text are at odds and it just seems silly.
The English is a bit awkward at times, a few times it seems just plain wrong, though it seems to get better during the course of the demo.
As is to be expected from Ptolemy's involvement, the girls are beautiful, but even in that point, the renders don't seem quite as sharp as I expect from Ptolemy. Still gorgeous girls though.
After playing through it a second time having replaced the "daughters" with "daughter" it really does make a difference and I have to say this is already pretty good.
The only thing weird is how all three girls seem to already be interested in the D sexually, just when he realizes he reacts that way to their bodies and teasing.
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Great demo! I cant wait to see where this goes. But does this demo abruptly end in the car or is it just me?
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Here are two signatures for everyone to use if you would like one (Yeah, Sasha is waifu material):
SuperWriter , could you add these in the OP post so people can find them easier?
SuperWriter , could you add these in the OP post so people can find them easier?
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Looks good,A good intro into the story..solid characters..interested to see what more will come
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SuperWriter
Just fyi, you don't have to do
This will also increment a variable
or to decrement
Just fyi, you don't have to do
Python:
$ miraclepts = miraclepts + 1
Python:
$ miraclepts += 1
Python:
$ miraclepts -= 4
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folks..we may be looking at P-Teams biggest triumph ever..this was splendid....Sasha is true goddess form..the writing was good it was just..damn good..everyone and their brother should play this..its long for a demo..has choices...Miracle is adorable AF...ya..play..be happy..go to sleep with a smile.
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Did ... did this guy really just nut in his pants and then just went on to rehearse for another hour?
Dude, eww.
Dude, eww.
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A strong start, but there did seem to be quite a high number of errors from two such practiced people.
Obviously asking the relationship of the girls (plural) to the MC suggests giving a plural relationship, and at the minimum a short bit of code should be checking if the last letter is an 's' and tokenizing the plural and singular variants from that. It still wouldn't be perfect, but it would work for all of the most likely and most common expected values.
Several textual errors surprised me more, as somehow I'd just assumed you'd certainly have proofreading well and truly sorted at this stage in your respective careers.
However, huge and massive props for this ...
That image along with the mention of her age and B-cups is just pure, pure win for all the petite fans. That one screen is a whole story all in itself.
Obviously asking the relationship of the girls (plural) to the MC suggests giving a plural relationship, and at the minimum a short bit of code should be checking if the last letter is an 's' and tokenizing the plural and singular variants from that. It still wouldn't be perfect, but it would work for all of the most likely and most common expected values.
Several textual errors surprised me more, as somehow I'd just assumed you'd certainly have proofreading well and truly sorted at this stage in your respective careers.
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However, huge and massive props for this ...
That image along with the mention of her age and B-cups is just pure, pure win for all the petite fans. That one screen is a whole story all in itself.