VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[2pervy4u]

Might not be worth much, but I really like your game dude.
Let them haters do what they do best, game is getting better & better.
Keep it up, can't wait for more!

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Hmm voice acting is ok but sounds a bit too cutesy in places, especially miracle. Fair play for trying it though & nice to see someone doing something different. From playing some of the big budget telltale games i know it isn't an easy thing to do right as even then it often sounds like people are just reading lines rather than actually speaking naturally like you would in a conversation, This feels the same & isn't helped by only having the 3 girls speak. It's a bit weird & feels like it needs to be an all or nothing thing really and when some of the incedental characters like guy at mall, shop assistant, acting teacher etc don't have voices it just seems strange. Is there a way to hide/remove the text boxes if you have the voices on? Maybe this would help

Thanks a lot for the feedback and I'll definitely consider all of this! Trying to get the voice acting thing right, still figuring out some stuff

Liking the voice acting but for some reason its volume was tied to sound volume rather than the voice slider. Took me awhile to figure out why Miracle was so quiet.

Haha, that happened to me too. Let me know if you have any more trouble!

SuperWriter Good on you for expanding the game as you see fit, VA doesnt work for me since i play without sound but HELL YEAH for the animations, cant wait for the weekend now! Thanks, keep up the good work and ignore the Haters and Trolls man.

Haha, thanks for the kind words. The animations won't be in the weekend update because I have to go back and render them all, but I'll update the game in a week or 2 with everything animated, barring no trouble. Just learned how to put animations in the game and everything, but they are done

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Might not be worth much, but I really like your game dude.
Let them haters do what they do best, game is getting better & better.
Keep it up, can't wait for more!

Of course it's worth a lot, man. I make this game for people like you to enjoy, so it motivates me to hear you want more. And I know you're absolutely going to love this update. it turned out really well and you get to have first time sex with one of the girls (Already had sex with Paris)

 

[Ayhsel]

May the 4th may be affecting me but after yesterday Star Wars setting discussion.. I really, really want to see that!! It would be both hilarious and awesome.

 

[Voidstep]

WOW what a gem. Lovely game superwriter, all girls are amazing and story is great. keep up the good work.

 

[lkta]

Thanks a lot for the feedback and I'll definitely consider all of this! Trying to get the voice acting thing right, still figuring out some stuff

No worries, This is one of the better games on here so nice to have a reason to play through it again. The voices are not too bad for the most part and it's definitely a bit different playing through with them on but it sounds a bit like they are trying to put on "sexy porn type" cutesy voices, This is fair enough in some of the sex/more erotic scenes i guess but doesn't really fit so well if they are talking about what to have for dinner

 

[mandc]

Absolutely fantastic game with gorgeous girls and a great story. Keep up the good work SuperWriter.

This game is brilliant and I look forward to future updates.

I love the way you give Sabrina that British accent just in the words she uses. You don't have to have audio to know she is British. Excellent work

I must admit I play all games on mute.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

WOW what a gem. Lovely game superwriter, all girls are amazing and story is great. keep up the good work.

Absolutely fantastic game with gorgeous girls and a great story. Keep up the good work SuperWriter.

This game is brilliant and I look forward to future updates.

I love the way you give Sabrina that British accent just in the words she uses. You don't have to have audio to know she is British. Excellent work

I must admit I play all games on mute.

Really glad you guys are enjoying the game! Update isn't too far away

 

[SumTingWong0420]

I usually play games muted also but for Me its bc all my stuff is on my phone, it would be horrendous if I forgot somewhere like DMV & sex sounds & kinky dialogue started blaring out of my phone.

When the sounds are good ill find somewhere to play while listening >;D

 

[KoGa3]

May the 4th may be affecting me but after yesterday Star Wars setting discussion.. I really, really want to see that!! It would be both hilarious and awesome.

 

[Alex Lem]

Is update will be out today or tomorrow?

 

[I'm Not Thea Lundgren!]

Is update will be out today or tomorrow?

Probably at the weekend.

 

[Holoas]

Any tipp which assets were used for Sasha?

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Any tipp which assets were used for Sasha?

Can I ask why you want to know?

 

[Holoas]

Can I ask why you want to know?

to be honest... I really like her look and wanted to do some private render. Unfortunatly I think I don't know if I found the right one and/or you are better in setting her up as I just fail to get it on point.

 

[The Rogue Hero]

Is there any way to get the voices to say, daddy or dad? I know some VN's have away to do that, so I was just wondering.

 

[Ayhsel]

Is there any way to get the voices to say, daddy or dad? I know some VN's have away to do that, so I was just wondering.

Really? They actually say a word that is inputted by the player? Can you please refer me to those VN? Cause, I have never seem such an advance system.

 

[dbp5ca]

Really? They actually say a word that is inputted by the player? Can you please refer me to those VN? Cause, I have never seem such an advance system.

We may have to wait to the year 3000

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[The Rogue Hero]

Really? They actually say a word that is inputted by the player? Can you please refer me to those VN? Cause, I have never seem such an advance system.

We may have to wait to the year 3000

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sorry, I should have been more precise, it's not that it says any word input by the player, but it specifically says, dad or daddy when incest content is enabled and/or people's relationship is set right. Saying anything the player inputs would be cool, but yea i think we are a few 1000 years off from that lol.

 

[Ayhsel]

sorry, I should have been more precise, it's not that it says any word input by the player, but it specifically says, dad or daddy when incest content is enabled and/or people's relationship is set right. Saying anything the player inputs would be cool, but yea i think we are a few 1000 years off from that lol.

Still I would welcome if you could refer me to said novel. I would like to see it.