VN Ren'Py Completed Picture Perfect [v1.0] [SuperWriter]

[Ali ibn Hassan]

If his plan to voice up to the latest chapter then im off the train this aint the new content im looking for

Looks like you fell asleep on the night bus and missed your stop

 

[imbatshit452]

is there an incest patch?
is this just pt 7 or the whole game?

 

[trent]

So a small criticism. Dunno if this just started with chapter 7 or if it was in the voiced chapter 6 as well. But it kinda feels like the script for the VAs where they have to talk around the player variables was accidentally (or purposefully) used in the game itself. Lots of he/him/guy instead of player_name/player_nik. And while it's not an issue most of the time, it does occasionally make for awkward dialogue like using he/him in scenes when the player isn't there and hasn't even been talked about yet.

And if it was a conscious design decision so that there's less of a disconnect between the voice acting and the text, I get it, but I'm not really a fan.

Yep, it's killing some passion. Good for voice acting maybe, but when they don't say anything in previous updates, just told something without addressing MC, it was better.

 

[self.generate_output()]

so im not getting the Sasha & Paris scene either :-/

 

[darth_hiruma]

I started a new game and finished ch7 a moment ago. I'm pretty sure I'm not getting Paris&Sasha scene in ch7.
SuperWriter what is the scene about? sex scene or just a scene talk about pregnant?

 

[Deleted member 894997]

No offense, but have you ever had a girlfriend or wife who gets dressed up to go out? It doesn't seem like it because I think you're overrating a little lol

No offense, but have you ever met a real person? It doesn't seem like it because i think your writing made no sense what so ever lol.

It was a super unnatural character development from a girl stuttering every other sentence, to this "FUCK MY SLUTTY PUSSY" person with so much makeup you cant even recognize her character model under it.
Back to stuttering in the literal first sentence she says after sex.
Its like you put in a whole new character in, with a whole new personality, named her Miracle and then brought the old one back the next second.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

No offense, but have you ever met a real person? It doesn't seem like it because i think your writing made no sense what so ever lol.

It was a super unnatural character development from a girl stuttering every other sentence, to this "FUCK MY SLUTTY PUSSY" person with so much makeup you cant even recognize her character model under it.
Back to stuttering in the literal first sentence she says after sex.
Its like you put in a whole new character in, with a whole new personality, named her Miracle and then brought the old one back the next second.

Since the very first chapter, Miracle has been a sexual person (she opened her legs to show the MC her underwear when he peeked) And her sexual curiosity has only been growing. For example, asking to kiss her sisters and then asking the MC to teach her how to masturbate, etc. People are complex, we all have different sides to us.

For Miracle, she becomes very sexual in sexual situations and more confident, especially since she trusts the MC so much. Hopefully that clears up some things for you

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

so im not getting the Sasha & Paris scene either :-/

I started a new game and finished ch7 a moment ago. I'm pretty sure I'm not getting Paris&Sasha scene in ch7.
SuperWriter what is the scene about? sex scene or just a scene talk about pregnant?

Sorry about the confusions guy. The scenes are Paris revealing she might be pregnant and fingering Sasha!

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Very nice update and new look for Miracle. They may have to change the cover of the game for next update.
Also I see no point in starting from the beginning if they are gonna add animation for that last scene just to see that lesbian scene between Paris and Sasha.
I might as well wait for the next update so I don't start from scratch and don't forget to update the Mod for chapter 8. It makes reaching the end faster.
The game could also use some proofreading, not in too many places and they all looked simple to fix.
If you need help in that area, I have time now that I finished helping a couple of GD (Game Developers).....peace.

 

[the66]

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[Deleted member 1412183]

Very nice update and new look for Miracle. They may have to change the cover of the game for next update.
Also I see no point in starting from the beginning if they are gonna add animation for that last scene just to see that lesbian scene between Paris and Sasha.
I might as well wait for the next update so I don't start from scratch and don't forget to update the Mod for chapter 8. It makes reaching the end faster.
The game could also use some proofreading, not in too many places and they all looked simple to fix.
If you need help in that area, I have time now that I finished helping a couple of GD (Game Developers).....peace.

Thanks but the scenes are not lesbian. You're missing a lot of content

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

Thanks but the scenes are not lesbian. You're missing a lot of content

Sorry, I didn't know what that meant so I might as well try and turn it into a lesbian scene which would have been a better idea. If you meant a 3some between Sasha, Paris and the MC, that's just as good. If you meant a 1 by 1 casual sex, that would have been my last guess.....peace.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Sorry, I didn't know what that meant so I might as well try and turn it into a lesbian scene which would have been a better idea. If you meant a 3some between Sasha, Paris and the MC, that's just as good. If you meant a 1 by 1 casual sex, that would have been my last guess.....peace.

It is a scene where Paris said she might be pregnant and fingering Sasha

 

[LordVile]

Is it just me or are the words him he and so on censored from the voice-lines when referring to the PC, seems like an odd thing to have not in from my perspective

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

Is it just me or are the words him he and so on censored from the voice-lines when referring to the PC, seems like an odd thing to have not in from my perspective

It is so there are no awkward pauses from the voice actors, like "What is [player_name] doing right now?"

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

It is a scene where Paris said she might be pregnant and fingering Sasha

I really don'r like pregnancy paths. It takes time away from the story waiting for them to give birth. As long as 9 months go by quickly, I guess it won't be so bad. I hope that's optional and avoidable. To me it's just an annoying path cause she ends up busy taking care of the baby and so on and so on and so on. It's just an annoying path. But the thing that I have never seen from a game developer is a continuation. Let's say the MC dies of old age or whatever so the baby grows up into the new MC. That is something I have never seen before in any game whatsoever. Not that I recall. Now that is a game continuation I would love to see....peace.

 

[Deleted member 1412183]

I really don'r like pregnancy paths. It takes time away from the story waiting for them to give birth. As long as 9 months go by quickly, I guess it won't be so bad. I hope that's optional and avoidable. To me it's just an annoying path cause she ends up busy taking care of the baby and so on and so on and so on. It's just an annoying path. But the thing that I have never seen from a game developer is a continuation. Let's say the MC dies of old age or whatever so the baby grows up into the new MC. That is something I have never seen before in any game whatsoever. Not that I recall. Now that is a game continuation I would love to see....peace.

It's totally avoidable =]

 

[tsunku]

I really don'r like pregnancy paths. It takes time away from the story waiting for them to give birth. As long as 9 months go by quickly, I guess it won't be so bad. I hope that's optional and avoidable. To me it's just an annoying path cause she ends up busy taking care of the baby and so on and so on and so on. It's just an annoying path. But the thing that I have never seen from a game developer is a continuation. Let's say the MC dies of old age or whatever so the baby grows up into the new MC. That is something I have never seen before in any game whatsoever. Not that I recall. Now that is a game continuation I would love to see....peace.

heh i loved the pregnancy in summertime saga, it's like 2 weeks, god if only that was reality.....

 

[LordVile]

It is so there are no awkward pauses from the voice actors, like "What is [player_name] doing right now?"

Mhmm, I can understand what was being aimed for then, but in from my perspective seems like you've traded one awkward pause for another, oh well, keep up the good work I assume planning this kind of thing is a hassle in itself

 

[ProofreadingRUS]

heh i loved the pregnancy in summertime saga, it's like 2 weeks, god if only that was reality.....

I thought it was 3 weeks, unless they changed that to a less annoying waiting path which is still annoying,