Ren'Py Completed Pine Falls [Part 2 v0.5] [Daniels K]

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ZTex

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Is the walkthrough wrong for anyone else ?

Specifically the last panel. I'm not seeing that sequence despite doing what it said to do.
 
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interesting ending to this update ,, did i ever tell you that i hate cliffhangers ?? huh ... did i !!!! argghhhhh
 
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Avaron1974 said:
Imagine that, a story based game not resolving it's story in one update thus rendering itself pointless to any further updates....

Not wanting to be harsh hun but that was a silly comment.
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I'm just tired of Daniel making every update ending in some massive cliffhanger. It's getting tiresome.
 
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GreyJim

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RoadWulf said:
This game has a really annoying habit of not resolving plot points in an update.

End of last update "Why is the fog acting weird?"
This update: "Fog is still acting weird, no resolution about it, seeya next time"
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Yep! Then add in: "I'm going to man up, face this fog and find out what's really going on!" "No, I can't face it! Run away!!"
The MC is supposed to be a best selling author? Of what? Teenage vampire romance novels? He's too thick to be a credible adult fiction author.

This is the biggest problem I'm having with the game right now.
Is it just meant to be a lowest common denominator porn fuckathon with a supernatural setting? Or is it meant to be a romantic thriller mystery? The dev appears to be trying for the latter, but only achieving the former.

If you're going to try for Stephen King style supernatural mystery, even if it's to be a vehicle for lots of sex scenes (I've got no problems with that), you need to at least put a decent level of intelligence into the writing. So far the writing for this story has had very little intelligence put into it.
Is it actually an autobiography written by the dimwitted MC?
 
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GreyJim said:
Yep! Then add in: "I'm going to man up, face this fog and find out what's really going on!" "No, I can't face it! Run away!!"
The MC is supposed to be a best selling author? Of what? Teenage vampire romance novels? He's too thick to be a credible adult fiction author.

This is the biggest problem I'm having with the game right now.
Is it just meant to be a lowest common denominator porn fuckathon with a supernatural setting? Or is it meant to be a romantic thriller mystery? The dev appears to be trying for the latter, but only achieving the former.

If you're going to try for Stephen King style supernatural mystery, even if it's to be a vehicle for lots of sex scenes (I've got no problems with that), you need to at least put a decent level of intelligence into the writing. So far the writing for this story has had very little intelligence put into it.
Is it actually an autobiography written by the dimwitted MC?
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DanielsK is actually notorious for writing himself into a corner and not being able to come up with decent endings to his games.
 
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I agree the underwhelming feeling keeps growing. At this stage I almost wonder if the author would be allowed to play their own game it's so childish.

A shame as Grace is one of my favorite of all games I played here. And Lily is very nice too. I hope I'll get to see them in games from other devs. If anyone knows of any already existing actually I'd love to hear it.

As for this update because of the Grace ending it made it worth it for me (the pregnant model was odd though) but I'm not sure I'll be able to power on until Lili's ending.
 
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lionarslan

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ZTex said:
Is the walkthrough wrong for anyone else ?

Specifically the last panel. I'm not seeing that sequence despite doing what it said to do.
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Same thing, update ends when scared MC runs for his house. No cliffhanger, no last screen from walkthrough. So you're not alone in this.
 
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Kinda wish the story went on a bit longer but at least we have the replay-ability to go on the journey again. Solid ending for my favorite character in the game.
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lionarslan

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ZTex said:
So the trigger for that is wrong then.
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No, it's not wrong, you can see that scene only when you got the ending in this update,
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. I don't know why it was included in walkthrough, it's only confusing. And there's a cliffhanger in that scene. Only one question to the dev stays: why we see cliffhanger only with the ending and not the way cliffhander is usually using?
 
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weasgap

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It feels like so many devs do this thing where they don't let you have sex with a character for so many updates to build anticipation to the point it's annoying, but then just give you an underwhelming scene in the end.
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I just looked at the image folder to see what other paths looked like. You actually have more sex in this game on the non 3-way path. That's a little sad. From what I can see you have 2 scenes and an ending with Grace and one scene with Alice as well.
 
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