VN Ren'Py Abandoned PizzaBoy [v1.3] [Dream Hot Games]

[Canto Forte]

tHERE IS NO STORY .. THAT WOULD REQUIRE A BLOCK OF TEXT BEING ACTUALLY WORKED ON AND NOT THROWN HAPHAZARDLY INTO CODE
G.A.M.E ... O.N ... F.EA.R.LES.S.LY ... NONE THE LESS!

 

[ILCjr]

tHE TEST RUNS END UP IN NO PAY FOR THE NAUGHTY / STUBBORN / INFATUATED / BLOATED
PATRONS OF THEM FAILING BARS!

True that. He still doesn't like being 'All in".

 

[Deleted member 1304718]

Renders nice,
Translate ok just he-she,his-her etc(I missed words I dn know because I'm not read just hide to admiring that bootys lol) that only bad..

 

[ice2019]

godmother right?
fuck patreon LOL

 

[morpheusahrms]

I just hope the soundtrack features sleazy 70s waaahwahh tunes, as would be appropriate

 

[Mormont]

godmother right?
fuck patreon LOL

Makes a change from Landlady

 

[esoom]

So this game is not about the Pizza boy rolling the Pizza up and fapping with it then delivering it?

 

[Darkmetal]

I am going to take a wild guess here that Canto Forte really doesn't like this game

PS: I trust you dude, saves me a download

 

[Mormont]

Those are not for sale ... jon taafeer is rescuing their bar so every drink is on the house!

He has just heard the news


I like the idea of this but it needs a lot of work I guess the dev is not an English speaker? the shop window had an advertisement in Spanish

 

[Rico Caramba]

I am going to take a wild guess here that Canto Forte really doesn't like this game

PS: I trust you dude, saves me a download

Either that or his facepalm-button is stuck.

 

[Canto Forte]

Yup ... definitely stuck ... my fore head is a jumbo jet and my face is red and swoll en ...

 

[Rico Caramba]

Good, I see you found it. Must be a relief .

 

[youcancooktwo]

This game has less of a storyline than Big Sausage Pizza. Probably the same writers as braziers. waste of a good opportunity.

 

[voyeurkind]

* Switched to English, but being asked for my name in Spanish.

* Translator definitely needed.

* Going to be a lot of calls fr a patch for this one.

* Not sure it's a great idea to have a long section where there are no characters shown.

Eh...I might like this better if it gets translated properly, but as it is now it's not that great.

 

[WildBillKatt]

The models look good and I love the concept. How are we for content so far?

 

[ThunderRob]

i am a big yes on sexy AF latinas..they are beauties...but the dialogue and engrish hurts my pancreas and gives me numbness in my feet

 

[Mormont]

The models look good and I love the concept. How are we for content so far?

Well as it's a V0.1 not much yet probably about 10 mins worth.

 

[Walter Victor]

OH MY!!!

"True my godmother told me that most glasses off to sleep in summer because the sensation of heat is intense at night."

The English version of this game is going to need just a little bit of work.

 

[Canto Forte]

That mangled out of sensory convoluted cringe inducing morsel of incomprehensible blabber...

Just a suggestion .. ofer up some cure .. don't just stand there right next to that ... T.H.A.T .. abomination

Cure administered with ... zero tolerance :
"My babe told me all about the deep sensations of summer in the sack ... intense heat under the sealed glass sealing".

 

[Walter Victor]

Then there is this little gem of a text sequence:

hm1 "Good morning [p] I hope not to bother you, but I need you to lend me your PC I need to do a job"
p "But what happened to your Lap?"
hm1 "It's broken, my mom told me she would buy me another one at the end of the month"

Someone needs to call Child Protective Services immediately. That poor girl shouldn't have to suffer through the end of the month with a broken lap.