Yea the game is called favorite son not favorite niece. Plus sorry but the redoing things that dont need to be redone (didnt get any better). As far as i know there already was enough choices that aloud you to skip whatever you wanted. The narrator should just be removed as well pointless and just pops in to point out the obvious. Im more on the lines of tom then any others but i also came to the conclusion that the mom is a nympho. She just will do anything the story really hasnt gotten any better.
I set out to make this a two part kinetic story. In the original story outline, Tim was going to steal his mom away from Tom in the end. Now, the player can choose who gets the main milf and it doesn't have to be just one. I actually considered changing the name to 'Playing Favorites'.
A big part of this initial project is for me to not only improve in Renpy and Daz but to streamline a methodology that I can use on future projects. Things like the narrator mode are mostly experimentation. I made it optional for those who want it. I assume most won't use it. Was it worth my time? Yes, because it helped me learn some skills in renpy programming that I can use on future projects. It also gave me a reason to bring in my clowns character into the game, which was just me having fun.
As for the mom being a nympho, as of now that is a player choice. You can go through the whole game, and short of her getting drunk and making out with Tom in the backseat, she remains a faithful wife.
I do appreciate your feedback.