I appreciate the feedback. Had the story been the focus here, I would have stuck with this being a two part kinetic novel. Tim would have won the day over his brother and would have become the favorite son. The end.
Since the beginning, this project's main purpose is for me to learn the mechanics of what goes into making a game. While I continue to learn the specifics of Daz, Renpy, Python, and Photoshop, I have been developing a system / methodology for future games moving forward.
FYI - My inspiration for this project, as far as storytelling, are those old 70's and 80's 'classics' that I grew up on. Movies like 'Debbie Does Dallas', 'The Devil in Miss Jones', or my all-time favorite, the original 'Taboo' with Kay Parker. (Porn with some plot thrown in)