Ren'Py Abandoned Playing with My Family [v0.0.5] [Sr.Bacon]

[Mrs Delington]

WOW !!! Simply wow !!!
I have to confess that I really liked this first part (March 2nd 2019).
These characters are really hot, beautiful proportions (maybe the little sister could have very small tits, but in fact as she is very petite and short, she is insanely hot !). Mom have big tits, as usual (and this is perfect) but a perfect big size ass. I really liked some scenes, like when Mom use her finger to say ''no no no'' ! Story will seem to be fun (and it is actually fun !) in the future. Cannot wait for more. And mom have perfect wide brown nipples ! I really think about giving some money contribution to this creator. Don't give up !

Spoiler: I really like her !!!

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Spoiler: Mom's tits !!!! Sooooo perfect !!!

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[Mrs Delington]

Any content worth playing?

Yes, it's was interesting (in my opinion). Enough scenes for a first release.

 

[Huldrafolk]

Great. Amazing models of mom and big sis. I wish little sis have little contents on future updates

 

[Mrs Delington]

WOW !!! Simply wow !!!
I have to confess that I really liked this first part (March 2nd 2019).
These characters are really hot, beautiful proportions (maybe the little sister could have very small tits, but in fact as she is very petite and short, she is insanely hot !). Mom have big tits, as usual (and this is perfect) but a perfect big size ass. I really liked some scenes, like when Mom use her finger to say ''no no no'' ! Story will seem to be fun (and it is actually fun !) in the future. Cannot wait for more. And mom have perfect wide brown nipples ! I really think about giving some money contribution to this creator. Don't give up !

Spoiler: I really like her !!!

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Spoiler: Mom's tits !!!! Sooooo perfect !!!

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And I forgot to say that Mom has delicious big fat lips that I would like to kiss ! Oh my .... cannot wait to see these lips on a cock !

 

[Jackson555]

I just rewrote the text in the game so it has proper english. But he puts all the assets such as the script file into an rpa archive so you have to extract that first and then delete the archive and then place the script file in for it to work.

Instuctions
1. Extract the "rpaExtract.rar" file I have attached which will give you a "rpaExtract.exe" file.
2. Place "rpaExtract.exe" into the "game" folder inside the game.
3. Drag the "archiva.rpa" file in there onto the "rpaExract.exe" file. This will extract the archive. Then you should delete the "archive.rpa" file in the "game" folder.
4. When you download the "script.rpy" file I have attached here, it's name is changed to "269518_script.rpy". You have to rename it back to "script.rpy". Then place that "script.rpy" file into the "game" folder. Replacing when necessary.

Pics for comparison are attached.

Also I love the game. Great bodies and sexy story.

 

[Mrs Delington]

Young sister = Inflatable doll Erk...
The recent games of late are becoming annoying for most of them...
Another game avoided...
2 Patreon just OMG... Two teenagers?

It is official for me, I am now a patron of his game... And I am not a teenager. And since your comments, 2 others patrons... so.... good start !

 

[Zenithtb]

I just rewrote the text in the game so it has proper English

Nice to see another person caring about the torturing of the English language and helping defend against it

 

[Deximay]

The "engrish" is strong with this one, total bone killer. Good renders though, except for the 'lil sis.

 

[Mrs Delington]

It is sad that people bitch about the english in his game. As I already said in the past, english is not the language that is the most spoken in the world, as many can think. It is not my first language. But how many of english people can speak my language, or other languages ? So at least we try, and not bitching when english people try to speak in german, italian, japanese, french or whatever. I speak many languages, but I am not perfect. So what ?
He could have made his game in spanish, but no, he tried in english. Yes, it is not perfect. But why bitching about that ? He already said on his Patreon Page : ''Note: I'm sorry if the spelling is bad, I'm still at the basic level of English. ''

Thanks to :
Jackson555
That have put his contribution to rewrote the script with a patch. Personally I will not use, but maybe it will help for some people. This is a great move, instead of bitching.

 

[Zenithtb]

It is sad that people bitch about the english in his game. As I already said in the past, english is not the language that is the most spoken in the world, as many can think. It is not my first language. But how many of english people can speak my language, or other languages ? So at least we try, and not bitching when english people try to speak in german, italian, japanese, french or whatever. I speak many languages, but I am not perfect. So what ?
He could have made his game in spanish, but no, he tried in english. Yes, it is not perfect. But why bitching about that ? He already said on his Patreon Page : ''Note: I'm sorry if the spelling is bad, I'm still at the basic level of English. ''

Thanks to :
Jackson555
That have put his contribution to rewrote the script with a patch. Personally I will not use, but maybe it will help for some people. This is a great move, instead of bitching.

It's a great sentiment, but when you're writing a Visual Novel, both the Visual, and the Novel parts have to hold up.

As others have pointed out, the visuals are fine, good and in parts great. This does not help if you want to gouge your eyes out trying to read the text (when you're not trying to work out what was meant in the first place).

Sure, English might not be the most-spoken language in the world, but it is

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as a first or second language, yes, even beating Mandarin Chinese (and for third place, it's not even a close race measured in hundreds of millions). It's also number one by being an

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(second place is again not even close).

The author did not make this game in English due to courtesy, they did it as it would hit the largest Patreon market, and I think people holding the level of writing in a VN up for inspection have a validity. It is a product being 'sold', and its quality is up for debate.

So yeah, they *could* release it in Spanish, Italian or any other language of their desire, but in any of those languages, its ease of reading and quality of translation should also be up for comment.

Kind regards

 

[rspkers]

It is sad that people bitch about the english in his game. As I already said in the past, english is not the language that is the most spoken in the world, as many can think. It is not my first language. But how many of english people can speak my language, or other languages ? So at least we try, and not bitching when english people try to speak in german, italian, japanese, french or whatever. I speak many languages, but I am not perfect. So what ?
He could have made his game in spanish, but no, he tried in english. Yes, it is not perfect. But why bitching about that ? He already said on his Patreon Page : ''Note: I'm sorry if the spelling is bad, I'm still at the basic level of English. ''

Thanks to :
Jackson555
That have put his contribution to rewrote the script with a patch. Personally I will not use, but maybe it will help for some people. This is a great move, instead of bitching.

Not this excuse again... Look, here's the problem. This game isn't being released in his mother tongue as the primary venue. It's being released in English. How many languages you speak, or how many he speaks means absolutely nothing in this scenario. It's not important. Essentially, if you want to release something in English, so English speakers can enjoy them, then make sure the English isn't terrible, or find an editor who can. If it is terrible, then expect people to point this out, because the language in a VN is extremely important and can make or break a users experience. If this game was intended to be released primarily in Spanish, for example, and the author decided to make a quick English patch for people to enjoy, then that's understandable. But if the author is willingly making it a primarily English release, then he assumes the responsbility of making it acceptable to read to English speakers. Congratulations on knowing more than English. I applaud you, as I also know more than one language, but it really doesn't matter, and is besides the point. Please note I'm not criticizing the developer of this game, just your argument, and arguments like it. You do not need to be a chef to state that the food tastes bad. You do not need to know another language to state that the language the game is released in is bad either.

 

[Ataios]

I can tolerate the language problems, after all, it's a porn game and not supposed to be a masterpiece of literature. I'm also fine with incest games, but why, in the nine hells, do they all have to be more or less the same? Why is it always this thin loser boy as a protagonist? Why always mom and two sisters? And why is it always a contemporary setting? This is not just a problem of this particular game, but of porn games in general. Why can't the protagonist of a mom-son game be a soldier in a post-apocalyptic world or a business man in a cyberpunk setting? The captain of a gang of space pirates in a sci-fi universe? Just something different.

 

[Deximay]

It is sad that people bitch about the english in his game. As I already said in the past, english is not the language that is the most spoken in the world, as many can think. It is not my first language. But how many of english people can speak my language, or other languages ? So at least we try, and not bitching when english people try to speak in german, italian, japanese, french or whatever. I speak many languages, but I am not perfect. So what ?
He could have made his game in spanish, but no, he tried in english. Yes, it is not perfect. But why bitching about that ? He already said on his Patreon Page : ''Note: I'm sorry if the spelling is bad, I'm still at the basic level of English. ''

Thanks to :
Jackson555
That have put his contribution to rewrote the script with a patch. Personally I will not use, but maybe it will help for some people. This is a great move, instead of bitching.

english is not the most spoken language in the world? ahm... lol ok... how about nope? English is the number one language in the world. FYI, I'm not american, I'm Brazillian, we don't adopt the english language, but smart people knows english is a MUST.

 

[Mrs Delington]

english is not the most spoken language in the world? ahm... lol ok... how about nope? English is the number one language in the world. FYI, I'm not american, I'm Brazillian, we don't adopt the english language, but smart people knows english is a MUST.

So....probably than Brazilians are not smart people at all....because millions of them doesn't speak english at all. I don't think they are dumb personally because they don't speak english.
I spent time too in Japan...and approx. 10% of people there speak english...and speaking of smart people, I think Japaneses doesn't have to prove anything about that. Nintendo was not created in english you know...
And we can continue the list. Anyway, you can believe anything you want.

 

[Zenithtb]

So....probably than Brazilians are not smart people at all....because millions of them doesn't speak english at all. I don't think they are dumb personally because they don't speak english.
I spent time too in Japan...and approx. 10% of people there speak english...and speaking of smart people, I think Japaneses doesn't have to prove anything about that. Nintendo was not created in english you know...
And we can continue the list. Anyway, you can believe anything you want.

Not to stand on DexysNPC's fingers, but I don't see where they said 'not speaking English makes you dumb'...? (My paraphrase, not theirs).

Writing, releasing and asking people for money for an English VN 'not in English'... Now that's another question altogether.

 

[ChumBukkit]

Not going to lie. I saw that image header and got hype for a female protagonist game. Oh well.

 

[Jack-ish]

Yikes...

 

[Zenithtb]

Yikes...

2sexi4u?

 

[OldMoonSong]

Instead of joining the terrified screeching in response to the sister's face, I'll add some constructive criticism which should offer some specific points on why she looks strange, and maybe keeping these details in mind will help other people who create characters.

For the blonde, the head shape/scaling isn't an issue, but the scaling of certain features is definitely off-putting. For starters, the eyes. They are too big (in terms of pure scale) and the height-width proportion is too big. Basically, the eyes SHOULD be narrow rectangles in dimensions, but her eyes are more squarish. The eyes are also too far apart, which leads to this huge, flat, open space in the middle of her face above her nose. Her nose is very wide and short as well, and looks flat. The gap between her nose and mouth might also be a little big.

Making the eyes closer together and narrower would probably be enough to make her look normal, but adjusting the nose might also remove some of the "doll" factor too.

It's easy to be harsh on creators but I respect anyone who puts the effort in to create something. These games don't grow on trees, and even being able to release a "beta"/preview requires a lot of work--particularly story-driven ones as opposed to mindless porn-comics.

 

[Larry Kubiac]

It is official for me, I am now a patron of his game... And I am not a teenager. And since your comments, 2 others patrons... so.... good start !

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Anyway, have fun with the inflatable doll (or Golum for the purist)...