cool game, nice work.
2 things upset me though, obviously the dog, i did a silent NOOOOOOOOOO! at that point. And Melanie's friend Kayla (I think), really rubbed me the wrong way, pardon the pun. I didn't really like her from the first meeting so I was pretty unhappy I couldn't shut her down when she was getting handsy with me, I figure she's kinda hard coded into Melanie's story so I'm probably stuck with her for now.
having said that, there's plenty to like. I really hope nerdy chemist girl gets some love at some stage. It seems like an ambitious amount of girls for just two parts to the game, is that set in stone or is there possibility the game may extend beyond that?