So my review of chapter 12 (spoilers) :
First of all, the good : This game is better than any other I've ever played from this site. The writing is good, the humor is near perfect, it's a good balance of fetish/fantasy and believability, the renders are great, the amount of content is satisfaying. The vanilla path was the best part of this update, the game started as a slow burn and now it's time for the pay off. And this one is pretty satisfaying, the numerous threesome, Sterling being a much more skilled seducer made it for great hot content.
On the downside, the NTR part of chapter 12 were less satisfaying here for me. You see, Hunter, Drew or Kevin having sex with Brenna Ophelia and Catherine is only a part of the NTR appeal, it's the fact that they are being taken away from Sterling that's part of the charm of the game. And here :
1. The kevin NTR is devoid of any Cucking of Sterling, the MC is barely present at all. Yes we can technically imagine him off screen but if we have to imagine, it takes away from the pleasure of havingthe game bringing it to us. So while his scene is not bad, it's lacking in that aspects.
2. It's the same thing for Drew NTR, Sterling having Lucia and Keira taken away from him is too minimal. It only happens in the beginning and there is nothing sexual yet.
3. Now the Hunter NTR is the "best" in that aspects for this chapter BUT it's a bit too similar to the one we had in chapter 11, Sterling was genderbended and had a chip to make him mind controlled. Here he is stuck in an AI and help Hunter seduce his girls but the thing is we don't see his suffering, it's only hinted at the end.
We don't have enough time to see and experience Sterling seeing his loved ones being taken away from him.
So WWG, if you ever see my review, just know that you've made amazing works with this update and I am still eager to see the sequel to it. I am trying to be as constructive as I can be in my criticism.
If you want I have a few ideas that I can share and you are free to take them or ignore them as it pleases you.