Ren'Py Power Vacuum [Ch. 12 Official] [What? Why? Games]

[Snugglepuff]

So my review of chapter 12 (spoilers) :

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[Jackie123]

Is there a compressed version?

 

[Snugglepuff]

Is there a compressed version?

There is, and search works just fine.



All those posts there are the ones from the most recent release (current Beta) that have that word in them.
I'm not repeating that word in the text of this post, because quoting/replying directly to you is enough to have this very post appear in the search results now...

 

[Fayn Arawn]

So my review of chapter 12 (spoilers) :

First of all, the good : This game is better than any other I've ever played from this site. The writing is good, the humor is near perfect, it's a good balance of fetish/fantasy and believability, the renders are great, the amount of content is satisfaying. The vanilla path was the best part of this update, the game started as a slow burn and now it's time for the pay off. And this one is pretty satisfaying, the numerous threesome, Sterling being a much more skilled seducer made it for great hot content.

On the downside, the NTR part of chapter 12 were less satisfaying here for me. You see, Hunter, Drew or Kevin having sex with Brenna Ophelia and Catherine is only a part of the NTR appeal, it's the fact that they are being taken away from Sterling that's part of the charm of the game. And here :

1. The kevin NTR is devoid of any Cucking of Sterling, the MC is barely present at all. Yes we can technically imagine him off screen but if we have to imagine, it takes away from the pleasure of havingthe game bringing it to us. So while his scene is not bad, it's lacking in that aspects.

2. It's the same thing for Drew NTR, Sterling having Lucia and Keira taken away from him is too minimal. It only happens in the beginning and there is nothing sexual yet.

3. Now the Hunter NTR is the "best" in that aspects for this chapter BUT it's a bit too similar to the one we had in chapter 11, Sterling was genderbended and had a chip to make him mind controlled. Here he is stuck in an AI and help Hunter seduce his girls but the thing is we don't see his suffering, it's only hinted at the end.

We don't have enough time to see and experience Sterling seeing his loved ones being taken away from him.


So WWG, if you ever see my review, just know that you've made amazing works with this update and I am still eager to see the sequel to it. I am trying to be as constructive as I can be in my criticism.

If you want I have a few ideas that I can share and you are free to take them or ignore them as it pleases you.

I thought Kevin's ending was well done, but it would've been fun to let it play out just a little more showing Kevin step up as a father to his and Ophelia's child. The icing on the cake would've been seeing Sterling's reaction to Kevin becoming his new dad.

I have mixed feelings about Lucia's ending. I don't think I'd even call it a "bad" ending, it seemed like everyone got to be happy and nothing nefarious occurred. Sterling may have "lost" Lucia, but I'd imagine they'd still be DTF if they visited each other, and I doubt Drew or Keira would've been opposed to it.

 

[Jakers15@]

PLENTY OF scenes with her

Taste it. She only had one scene. The massage scene. And nothing else.

 

[Snugglepuff]

Taste it. She only had one scene. The massage scene. And nothing else.

She had more than one scene... She's a participant in two threesomes, one of which was rather "relevatory" for others in the house.

 

[Jakers15@]

She had more than one scene... She's a participant in two threesomes, one of which was rather "relevatory" for others in the house.

What I mean is that we didn't actually see her having sex. She and Brenna are the most beautiful.

 

[zakjoe123]

anyone have any idea how to add save files on mac have no clue and need some help.

 

[john984]

I've not played chapter 12 yet. But you said that Drew is on our side now. But is it true of is she trying to trick us.

Yes, seems true, at the end she helps Sterling

 

[jamiehmcw91]

Yes, seems true, at the end she helps Sterling

Nice thats shes helping Sterling considering she could have fucked Lucia

 

[panzermaster]

I thought Kevin's ending was well done, but it would've been fun to let it play out just a little more showing Kevin step up as a father to his and Ophelia's child. The icing on the cake would've been seeing Sterling's reaction to Kevin becoming his new dad.

I have mixed feelings about Lucia's ending. I don't think I'd even call it a "bad" ending, it seemed like everyone got to be happy and nothing nefarious occurred. Sterling may have "lost" Lucia, but I'd imagine they'd still be DTF if they visited each other, and I doubt Drew or Keira would've been opposed to it.

Yeah that's precisely what was missing in the kevin ending, the reaction of Sterling seeing his mother taken away from her by a guy who was once considered a joke. It doesn't need to be an overly dark ending, just a humourous one where Kevin cuckold Sterling. Some archknowledgment and visual reaction from the MC to such a thing happening would make for a much better bad ends.

For Drew I agree with you that it's not such a bad ending Lucia and Keira being taken way from Sterling isn't such a depressing bad ends as it's much healthier relationship than with Hunter... BUT it kind of take way from the NTR aspects of this game.

All of that said I don't really care about drew, her scene doesn't change anything for me on a subjective level because I was never a fan of the character.

 

[MAGO-DAG]

Yes, seems true, at the end she helps Sterling

Taking into account the fact that Drew has the so-called “Bad Endings”, he may be playing his game, supposedly supporting Sterling... although of course I’m not against her help, I can’t say for sure yet, I haven’t played chapter 12 yet, maybe I will have a different opinion )))

 

[Mildred_Rain]

I think the reason the Drew ending is bad is not because she ends up with two of the girls, but because without Lucia, Sterling cannot beat Hunter. We saw the ending of chapter 12, so something close to that must happen if Lucia leaves. Although, it would have been nice to have a quick look at the Sterling situation to confirm it.

 

[jamiehmcw91]

Yeah that's precisely what was missing in the kevin ending, the reaction of Sterling seeing his mother taken away from her by a guy who was once considered a joke. It doesn't need to be an overly dark ending, just a humourous one where Kevin cuckold Sterling. Some archknowledgment and visual reaction from the MC to such a thing happening would make for a much better bad ends.

For Drew I agree with you that it's not such a bad ending Lucia and Keira being taken way from Sterling isn't such a depressing bad ends as it's much healthier relationship than with Hunter... BUT it kind of take way from the NTR aspects of this game.

All of that said I don't really care about drew, her scene doesn't change anything for me on a subjective level because I was never a fan of the character.

Who took Lucia and Keira away from Sterling?

 

[john984]

Who took Lucia and Keira away from Sterling?

Sterling finds out Drew is Lucia's father so he goes to tell her, Lucia goes to a dinner with Drew and Keira, and they end going back to their home that's how the bad end starts

 

[john984]

Taking into account the fact that Drew has the so-called “Bad Endings”, he may be playing his game, supposedly supporting Sterling... although of course I’m not against her help, I can’t say for sure yet, I haven’t played chapter 12 yet, maybe I will have a different opinion )))

Yeah, I think it's still possible that Drew tries something on Chapter 13, for now Hunter is "out of the picture", but will definitly come back for his revenge, now that all the family members know

 

[Snugglepuff]

What I mean is that we didn't actually see her having sex. She and Brenna are the most beautiful.

We literally see her having sex in those threesomes... Stop being disingenuous, stop lying.

 

[panzermaster]

Who took Lucia and Keira away from Sterling?

Spoilers for chapter 12

Drew in an ntr bad ends.

 

[Jakers15@]

Nós literalmente a vemos fazendo sexo naqueles ménage à trois... Pare de ser hipócrita, pare de mentir.
[/CITAR]


Prove

 

[Bruhtato]

So my review of chapter 12 (spoilers) :

First of all, the good : This game is better than any other I've ever played from this site. The writing is good, the humor is near perfect, it's a good balance of fetish/fantasy and believability, the renders are great, the amount of content is satisfaying. The vanilla path was the best part of this update, the game started as a slow burn and now it's time for the pay off. And this one is pretty satisfaying, the numerous threesome, Sterling being a much more skilled seducer made it for great hot content.

On the downside, the NTR part of chapter 12 were less satisfaying here for me. You see, Hunter, Drew or Kevin having sex with Brenna Ophelia and Catherine is only a part of the NTR appeal, it's the fact that they are being taken away from Sterling that's part of the charm of the game. And here :

1. The kevin NTR is devoid of any Cucking of Sterling, the MC is barely present at all. Yes we can technically imagine him off screen but if we have to imagine, it takes away from the pleasure of havingthe game bringing it to us. So while his scene is not bad, it's lacking in that aspects.

2. It's the same thing for Drew NTR, Sterling having Lucia and Keira taken away from him is too minimal. It only happens in the beginning and there is nothing sexual yet.

3. Now the Hunter NTR is the "best" in that aspects for this chapter BUT it's a bit too similar to the one we had in chapter 11, Sterling was genderbended and had a chip to make him mind controlled. Here he is stuck in an AI and help Hunter seduce his girls but the thing is we don't see his suffering, it's only hinted at the end.

We don't have enough time to see and experience Sterling seeing his loved ones being taken away from him.


So WWG, if you ever see my review, just know that you've made amazing works with this update and I am still eager to see the sequel to it. I am trying to be as constructive as I can be in my criticism.

If you want I have a few ideas that I can share and you are free to take them or ignore them as it pleases you.

Sad to hear, NTR is always a go to for this. Though that genderbent one was a crazy ass one, had to be the one that hadme iffy