I liked this update.
We finally get MC having sex with a main girl and humor was on point.
The only thing that distracted me was seeing the flashbacks reading the notes.
I play with NTR turned off so having to see Hunter go at it with his old crusty ass was as unexpected as it was gross. Maybe for the final version have the flashback scene turned off for the non NTR players? You still read about what happened (so you don't miss the Lucia plot point) but don't have to see it unless you have NTR on, feels like a good compromise.
The last event of each chapter always throws me though.
I liked Breanna smacking the shit outta Hunter at the end, just wish we had a way to get out from under him completely.
With NTR turned off, he isnt really apart of the story (thank gods). So you play along this wonderful game, enjoying events as you get closer to the girls, and having to navigate their feelings in these different events and then someone slams on the breaks like "Oh, ho ho, don't forget about the fucking Crypt Keeper!" It rankles me that MC goes from very self assured, loving/protective of the girls to being willing to couch Hunter through banging one of his girls? Its so fucking jarring for the non NTR players in an otherwise hilarious and fun game. I just kinda wish we could put him down like Ole yeller in the non NTR vision (for this and a myriad of other reasons).
Aside from that, fantastic update. Love progress with Breanna and Amber, meet amber's mom and TIff, both of which look to be interesting characters and as always Catherine v Mallory is hilarious!