- Aug 19, 2019
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I've lost track of the number of times the author has mixed up your and you're in this VN alone. And it's "brass tacks", not "brass tax", but clearly proofreading is not something he's got somebody doing very much of, or they're borderline illiterate anyhow. (exception: Maybe they just don't have English as a primary language)I swear there needs to be a PSA to all game writers that "breath" is the noun and "breathe" is the verb. The phrase "I can't breath" appears in 99% of games on the site.