SuddenReal

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It wasn't a rewrite, but it's the start of the writing for CH 11 he's doing. he hadn't started on it yet from the way i'm reading his last update.
That would be very late to start writing something, especially since everything else is done. You don't make the renders first and come up with a story for them. The way I read his update was that he wasn't really pleased with the script after he made the renders so he had to re-write parts of it to make it fit better (possibly because he couldn't do the things he wanted to do in Daz originally, or came up with a few spur of the moment things that weren't planned).
 

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That would be very late to start writing something, especially since everything else is done. You don't make the renders first and come up with a story for them. The way I read his update was that he wasn't really pleased with the script after he made the renders so he had to re-write parts of it to make it fit better (possibly because he couldn't do the things he wanted to do in Daz originally, or came up with a few spur of the moment things that weren't planned).
I think WWG might do something similar to Stan Lee's so-called "Marvel Method", i.e. first he writes a general outline of the plot and scenes, then he does the art, and last he finishes the dialogue. It might be easier than focusing on exact lines and jokes first.
 
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That would be very late to start writing something, especially since everything else is done. You don't make the renders first and come up with a story for them. The way I read his update was that he wasn't really pleased with the script after he made the renders so he had to re-write parts of it to make it fit better (possibly because he couldn't do the things he wanted to do in Daz originally, or came up with a few spur of the moment things that weren't planned).
Like Fayn said, i think he has a general idea first, but he said so himself a while back that he renders first then writes.

As to the re-writing thing, he is calling back to a previous chapter where he scrapped the script and did it over. it's pretty clear from this paragraph that he is (almost) done with renders and it's just writing left.
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of course my example doesn't mean others do it, but when i did, i did renders first and wrote the story after it was done.
 

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Either way, the bottom line is, he probably had a set number of previews ready but hadn't finished writing yet when that fixed number of previews was posted.
 
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The gallery unlocks after you finish a chapter, and to finish a chapter you have to watch every scene. So yes, that is all* the scenes.

Each thumbnail image in the gallery is for a sequence of scenes, related to a particular plotline in the story. To see a specific scene, you may need to skip ahead in a particular sequence.

*The only scenes missing are repeatable events (e.g. breakfast, chores), NTR endings (if you have NTR turned off), and end-of-chapter scenes (usually Hunter visiting Sterling).
THANK YOU VERY MUCH !!! sorry I don't know english.:) (y) :love:I use a translator.:cautious:
 

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No, it's based on the fact that we're about to go to chapter 11 after we've stopped Hunter ten times and he hasn't shown signs of stopping yet (even despite bodily harm).

If you call in reinforcments, you haven't accepted defeat.

While that may have been true at the start, it's a bit of a hard sell now. After all, Hunter no longer has to "set up scenario's" to get Sterling's dick wet (especially since some of those "scenario's" caused him harm), but he still tries get get Sterling out of the picture to fuck the women himself.

Because he's arrogant and certain that Sterling can't stop him. It's a show of dominance. It's the villain monologueing because they're positive they're victorious.
Well, Hunter isn't exactly a threat right now, I mean, he's not even home anymore, and if you think about it, Hunter set up Ophelia and Aliza, the wine was delivered on behalf of the MC, and Lucia said Drew stayed in the room. all night, and after the MC stops Hunter a few times, he might tell Ophelia that he wants the MC to find him a job to help him or something, there are a lot of excuses to be alone with the girls.
 

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I got worried after not hearing from him in a while so i pm'd him. He says he's fine and that "Teaser updates tend to skip weeks leading up to an update". So no need to worry. He's probably busy finishing up the game and just doesn't have anything worth sharing right now.
 

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Greetings my friends. With permission from What? Why? Games, I have been working on a FANMADE "What If?" which will be a mini Visual Novel called Ophelia's Date Night. This mini VN was developed solely by me and is NOT CANON OR OFFICIAL in anyway. Think of it as FANART on steroids. It's in the final stages of development and the beta testers will be getting the beta-build tomorrow. I had originally planned to release it on the 1st of January but depending on the feedback from the beta testers, I might delay it by a few days so they can test more thoroughly.

The premise of this VN is an alternate universe where Hunter was not around to prevent Ophelia from going on a date with Erik. Yes, it is NTR and poor Sterling is in over his head. Please if you have any questions about it do not pester WWG, contact me directly or just join my server by clicking on my profile and using my . I will drop the release links on my discord server, here (If WWG is cool with it) and here on F95. I'd like to thank WWG again for giving me the permission and opportunity to do this. I really appreciate it.

p.s. Why am I doing this? Well, like a friend of mine said, "You've gotta do cover songs, before you write your first single".

Here's a peek at the Home screen along with some teasers.

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Any update on this Sumatra? I've been really looking forward to it.
 
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Greetings my friends. With permission from What? Why? Games, I have been working on a FANMADE "What If?" which will be a mini Visual Novel called Ophelia's Date Night. This mini VN was developed solely by me and is NOT CANON OR OFFICIAL in anyway. Think of it as FANART on steroids. It's in the final stages of development and the beta testers will be getting the beta-build tomorrow. I had originally planned to release it on the 1st of January but depending on the feedback from the beta testers, I might delay it by a few days so they can test more thoroughly.

The premise of this VN is an alternate universe where Hunter was not around to prevent Ophelia from going on a date with Erik. Yes, it is NTR and poor Sterling is in over his head. Please if you have any questions about it do not pester WWG, contact me directly or just join my server by clicking on my profile and using my . I will drop the release links on my discord server, here (If WWG is cool with it) and here on F95. I'd like to thank WWG again for giving me the permission and opportunity to do this. I really appreciate it.

p.s. Why am I doing this? Well, like a friend of mine said, "You've gotta do cover songs, before you write your first single".

Here's a peek at the Home screen along with some teasers.

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Is this available to play?
 
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