This chapter is mostly dialogues, and even Tarantino, that is a genius writing dialogues, don´t make his movies only with dialogues. It´s the first time playing this game that I wanted to say to the characters "Stop blabbering and get to the point already!", and even skipped scenes (the explanations of Legacy, such an unpleasant character...).
There is no need in "catching breath" in the script of a game. At least, not a complete update of it. Things should happen, plot should advance. If not, it´s boring. For example, where is the need of seeing the characters talking about the best way of burning the body of the mutant, if they should camp where they are or not, or things like that? I know that that kind of conversations would exist in real life, but in real life they would stop to pee from time to time, and you don´t show that. You should cut the uninteresting parts of the script if are not necessary for the plot. I think this update could have been 2/3 shorted, and merged with the following update.