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I understand getting translators is dificult but I can sugest an excelent translator site called DeepL.com it's quite good at translating Russian to English.
 

redfluorine

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May 16, 2018
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If you showed me the banner pic and the rest of the sample pics separately, I would think that they're 2 completely separate games. Hoping the game has actual cyberpunk elements.
 

Kitchentable

Active Member
Aug 13, 2018
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Alot not so favorable comments for this game. Don't think it's called for.

I personally do NOT like pizza hawaii. Ananas does NOT belong on a pizza!
But I don't point that out in every single comment or posting that I write here.
For one because it's not like the world gives a damn about every little human and keeps on turning,
and second 'cause I'd feel stupid about repeating myself over and over again.

No offense folks. Just something to contemplate about. ;)

For a first demo, it's quite good. A hint system right from the start.
Good and crisp looking renders. The UI and menus are absolutely okay.

And for the story... we gotta wait and see. BUT no reuniting with the landlady's family
after years of absence. That's a huge plus, right?

The game has some kinks here and there. The dialog with the shopkeeper wouldn't start
and I got stuck or the loading time when entering the bathroom.

The engrish is quite ok-ish but it seems some russian proverbs habe been
translated to english to the letter and thus making not many sense.

Overall, we've seen worse. A lot worse. No paywall.
Nothing carelessly and cheaply slapped together to milk paytrons.

I'd say it's an honest demo with superb renders and a lot promise.
 

Leobbb

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May 24, 2019
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It's a bad copy of Glamour. You can easily recognize the game structure, the infamous dialogue window, bad rungrish language, cringy story, even the same way TV works with channel switching and random porn pics. However this time the dev discovered face morph sliders in Daz and we have a perfect example of uncanny valley. The models look creepy and disturbing. And you as MC are forced to lie to their face that they are beautiful. Basically the only good looking parts of the game are location's interiors, which have the quality of paid assets from Daz marketplace.
 

e-disfunction

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Jun 1, 2019
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I see someone is optimistic about tech advances in the next five years...
I can understand the possibility of the tech advancing ... but I doubt industry, universities, and the general public will advance fast enough to let the main character live in less-than armed seclusion. :cautious:

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RottenPlum

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Jun 17, 2017
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No option to play in windowed mode whatsoever. That should be first thing to fix by including such option in settings.
 

Aristos

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Looks good but I'm not completely sure.
For the time being I'll just follow the thread hoping for the best.

The 2025 setting was already overly optimistic to say the least. Considering that much scientific investment is bound to go to finding a cure or a vaccine against coronavirus the outlook seems now inconceivable.
 
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Gotlieb029

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Jul 5, 2018
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Well, I just launched the game... And I'm stuck at the first picture.
Ok, the render looks great, but looks like there still are some bugs around !

No mouse movement, click, or hit on any key have any effect.

I'm just giving up now. May be another try later, with another version.
 

RottenPlum

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Jun 17, 2017
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Can't interact with map, go button in the right bottom of the map is greyed out after intro, and hint is to go to restaurant. Also when clicking on sleep in bedroom nothing happens. Anybody have these issues?

As for the game, nice renders and a lot of attention to details, but seeing all those stats, it heavily relies on grinding, so if there are no max stats cheats in the future similar to game man of the house for example, i doubt i'm gonna bother with playing this.
 

ronehjr

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Aug 22, 2018
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I can't find Mark or the University on the city map. If there is another way to get there, it needs to be explained. And the interface is a pain in the ass. Way to much mouse clicking to get anything done.
 

madmit

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It's a bad copy of Glamour. You can easily recognize the game structure, the infamous dialogue window, bad rungrish language, cringy story, even the same way TV works with channel switching and random porn pics. However this time the dev discovered face morph sliders in Daz and we have a perfect example of uncanny valley. The models look creepy and disturbing. And you as MC are forced to lie to their face that they are beautiful. Basically the only good looking parts of the game are location's interiors, which have the quality of paid assets from Daz marketplace.
Glamour is just a boring text descriptions of a renders. Grindy and so on. Here I could see a story. And some writing too
 

Dr. MAD

Atmosphere Dr.
Game Developer
Apr 2, 2018
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Hello!

The first thing I'd like to do is thank everyone without exception! Thank you very much, for the critique. Thank you for the good feedback.

Critique, especially constructive ones, doesn't prevent me from working on the project, but on the contrary makes me do it even more seriously and stronger.

Now, I would like to answer some questions and comments.

I see someone is optimistic about tech advances in the next five years...
I don't think we should jump to conclusions. This game has a huge history, let me surprise you later. There's an update coming out pretty soon that I'm going to reveal some secrets.
So it won't be a harem game then? ^^
I'm in a hurry to disappoint, but I didn't plan a harem.
Wha... what?? o_O:FacePalm:
I've already realized that it was a mistake to try to translate some Russian proverbs and familiar phrases like "Continue to sit on his mother's neck" into English. I've already fixed it in all texts.
The game has some kinks here and there. The dialog with the shopkeeper wouldn't start
and I got stuck or the loading time when entering the bathroom.
Could you write more details if possible, What exactly happens when you try to start conversation with Miranda? Bathroom entrance problem, what does it look like? Thank you in advance.
The engrish is quite ok-ish but it seems some russian proverbs habe been
translated to english to the letter and thus making not many sense.
Thank you for the remark, I have improved my English significantly in the last couple of months while writing this story. Many of the things in the Demo version were written a long time ago, when I was not so knowledgeable.
It's a bad copy of Glamour.
I'm making this game at UNITY because I know this engine and C# very well. Yes, indeed, you can see similarities with the above-mentioned game. But only in the interface. Because we probably use the same assets. Why do we need to do and invent something that has been invented and successfully used for a long time. If you decide to produce bicycles, will you make them on square wheels? Or maybe with square rudder?
No option to play in windowed mode whatsoever.
I heard you. I will definitely add the ability to start the game in window mode.
Well, I just launched the game... And I'm stuck at the first picture.
Could you describe the launch problem in more detail? Which operating system do you use? Thank you in advance.
Can't interact with map
The restaurant is open 24 hours a day, all other locations have their own working hours. This working hours are displayed at the bottom of the centre when the location button is pressed.
Also when clicking on sleep in bedroom nothing happens. Anybody have these issues?
When you press the "Sleep" button again after you come to the bed, do you have the buttons to select the time of sleep?
I can't find Mark or the University on the city map.
You can get to the lab on a weekday from 09-30 a.m.
 
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