Curious...
I've read a few pages, but still want to ask: Is this a forced harem game? I don't see a harem tag, but regardless of what I do, there is no picking or choosing who I want to spend time with. I guess another way of putting it is this: the game presents the illusion of choice, but the choices really don't matter much...at least not yet.
You have a lot of positives with this game and I encourage you to make the game you want (in response to earlier comments about writing your story--storyboarding is what I would recommend). However, as I tend to play these things in third person, I get bored with choices that don't have consequences.
Thanks for the effort.