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Gratulations @paperwork for finally reaching the 500$ level on patreon!
I seriously think tho it should have 1 more Zero in it <3
I seriously think tho it should have 1 more Zero in it <3
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Thank you @Xpl0it
I am really happy to reach another milestone. I am grateful to my patrons. I have to change those milestones, though. I am already doing what I've promised for the next milestone One more zero! Ha ha! That would mean me quitting my day job...working on the game during day and night...Yeah!
- Aug 6, 2017
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Love the game so far. I REALLY like that she is slim. The "kardashian" look of most games is a turn off for me. I don't get who would want someone that heavy but to each their own. I would drop her down to a "B" or "C" cup if I were making it but it's your game so...Just keep up the expansions please.
- Feb 7, 2018
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I don't like big boobs too, but here on this godess it looks just right, very nice exception!
Everything about her is HOT, so I obediently accept her "big P-body"
Everything about her is HOT, so I obediently accept her "big P-body"
- Feb 27, 2018
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- May 12, 2017
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You get a nice choice
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I really love all kinds of exhibitionistic stuff, revealing clothes on a confident protagonist, so I always chose the cheeky option. I am amazed about the variety of outcomes possible, but actually always search for the carefree or most revealing part but at the same time I take care of her. She has to be comfortable with everything I do. Well, maybe I failed on the blackmail part, but I guess deep inside she wanted to experience it all the way.
- May 12, 2017
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That's great, I want her to stay single and just be open and go with the flow. So many guys, so little time. I think with a body like hers and her personality she would really enjoy guys and girls masturbating at her sight, virginity and its loss does not interest me at all, but I don't mind her having fun with jerk off encouragement, maybe handjobs and all that stuff without penetration. And I totally agree that she should only have sex (vaginal / anal penetration) without being forced. That's why I am totally happy with the game so far.No, I'll give you options. I know there are people who like NTR and who don't like it. She will have a chance to break up before or just after she has sex with someone. NTR is an option I'll be giving. It won't be forced. Her vanilla personality wouldn't let her cheat her boyfriend. If the player changes her personality via choices I give them, I am not responsible for that
I had to start a new game, so I did not get to new content yet, but it is great to play it all over again. I found some slight new paths and I am amazed by the variety. Too bad I don't want to play the reluctant paths, they must be great just at well, but it is just not my thing (why avoid being peeped on at the beach for example - no way!!!!)
Thanks a lot, paperwork!
- May 1, 2017
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I agree with this part....I would drop her down to a "B" or "C" cup if I were making it but it's your game so...Just keep up the expansions please.
- Nov 16, 2017
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Alright... It's been a year since I last tried this project out, when it was just in it's initial stages of production... And at first, I was actually pleasantly surprised by some of it's improvements and so on... But a couple hours in, you began to see some patterns that felt like either the story elements were being abandoned, or just used to tease folks into staying, but never really meaning much to what goes on... Choices you think mattered at first, really meant nothing as you get deeper into the VN/Game... It seems as only the pro-perv choices make any difference in the long run... You begin to feel very sorry for the female protagonist, because just when anything starts to go her way, more crap happens to her... She can't catch a break, and she goes from this smart athletic woman to a rather oblivious horny young girl who has every male in the world perving on her... So many fetishes keep getting introduced and re-introduced, it begins to feel a bit diluted... What began as something better then what I previously experienced, became more like it was before, which became a bit tedious and un-inspiring... Sure, there were some text improvements and some additional visual elements... In the end, what might be considered on par with VN/Games like Good Girl Gone Bad, instead just ends up being more of a perv filled porn fest, with no real direction... I went ahead and updated my review...
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Thank you for the review @Zippity . Maybe you may want to check back in a few months to see the plot advance
- Jan 28, 2018
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You compare a VN which will be finished in the mid of this year with one more at its beginning story-wise? And about the choices, GGGB is the queen of choices, but ProjectSAGE is definitely the princess, at least for me compared to all the RGPM and VNs I know. The choices lead to many different scenes, much more than GGGB, but it's more "lusting" for the MC okay, I am very fine with it. And one thing I like better than GGGB, there is more teasing in it but not too slow.
Its a good review which I can agree with your point of view. The thing is " being a horny woman + all the men in the world perving " is the curse of all Female protag games is it not? GGGB certainly has that vibe , Ashley is always horny , all the man wants to fuck her (well maybe not dave at beginning) and she has fucked all the males and females who has appeared in the game. You could say some is by player's choice but the choices in PS definitely matter as well in choose who you want to perve or advance in sexual stuff. Even AWAM, the highest standard of erotic game content with no sex have almost all the men and junior dicks lusting for Sophia. The only thing stopping their dicks is the god of hand from L&P.
As for Fetishes , lol . Again really its the curse of Female protag. Corruption, incest, blackmail - Practically the 3 godfather tags of all adult games. If however, you are after a pure vanilla love story. Okay you are right but GGGB certainly didnt't shy away from those tags.
Humm, its been a year since you last tried PS, that has to be the discontinued version where she was indeed slut fuck fest mode. This version is way way better than before in terms of pacing. So it is interesting you still find the new version perv filled porn fest.
Lastly GGGB is a masterpiece. No one will deny that but if PS can get this far with just $500 patreon pledges, imagine what Paperwork can do if he had GGGB pledge volume.
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There are actually scenes that are quite missable. For example a few days ago I played through the game once again and found yet another (to me) new scene on the beach.I really got the feeling that i'm missing scenes
It's really crazy how much content this game actually has and that you can see new scenes still after dozens of playthroughs just by mixing up your choices sometimes.
Can't say enough how much I love this game
Edit: meant missable not miserable lmao
I do not understand how anyone can say the MC has a good body.... I really like the choice and consequences in this game but the MCs body proportions are almost comical bordering on alien... It is what a 13 year old, whom never seen a naked women before, idea of a hot woman would look like. I do not blame the dev as this might be an issue with honey select models but in any case I would advise the dev to look at the body proportions of Victoria secret models (bella and giga hadad, emily ratajkowski etc) and try to mimic that instead of this blow up doll proportions.
Yes, lets ruin this unique and to the majority hot and gorgeous character model by replacing it with garbage default IRL womans that have modelling as career. Sounds great.
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- Nov 16, 2017
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This version is better then the original that I played, and I did feel the urge to give it a higher score early on in this play through... But it began to feel like some of the good things, such as choice, such as making a difference in the over all story, some of the deeper plot points, choices making a real difference in the main characters personality changes (depending on the choices you made) outside of sexual ones, etc, they seemed to become less prevalent/important and the story elements began to suffer... They either felt like they were being abandoned, and/or choices no longer played as much a role in the protagonists development, but instead were just to change the degree of perving you want to experience (in that moment) without making a real difference over the long haul of the story...Its a good review which I can agree with your point of view. The thing is " being a horny woman + all the men in the world perving " is the curse of all Female protag games is it not? GGGB certainly has that vibe , Ashley is always horny , all the man wants to fuck her (well maybe not dave at beginning) and she has fucked all the males and females who has appeared in the game. You could say some is by player's choice but the choices in PS definitely matter as well in choose who you want to perve or advance in sexual stuff. Even AWAM, the highest standard of erotic game content with no sex have almost all the men and junior dicks lusting for Sophia. The only thing stopping their dicks is the god of hand from L&P.
As for Fetishes , lol . Again really its the curse of Female protag. Corruption, incest, blackmail - Practically the 3 godfather tags of all adult games. If however, you are after a pure vanilla love story. Okay you are right but GGGB certainly didnt't shy away from those tags.
Humm, its been a year since you last tried PS, that has to be the discontinued version where she was indeed slut fuck fest mode. This version is way way better than before in terms of pacing. So it is interesting you still find the new version perv filled porn fest.
Lastly GGGB is a masterpiece. No one will deny that but if PS can get this far with just $500 patreon pledges, imagine what Paperwork can do if he had GGGB pledge volume.
As to the comparison I was making with my reference to Good Girl Gone Bad, it was just to point out they were in a similar category... I made no one to one comparisons between the two... Both are female protagonist corruption stories with some choices that were just about erotic or no erotic influence, etc...
It was only shortly after the 2nd half of my play through of this VN/Game that I felt that the story was stagnating or just being teased now and then rather then going anywhere... And very few choices made in the first half seemed to matter as much in the 2nd half... In some cases, in earlier content, you could chose to avoid a situation, and it succeeded, where as in later choices, it more so effected the degree to what you would see, but played no real role in effecting the overall outcome... Such as the blackmail... You can avoid it early on, but it just resurfaces as though your earlier choice never really mattered, and it is no longer avoidable in the later choices... It then just becomes to what degree do you allow it to happen... And I am not trying to focus on that particular situation, instead, it's just a more obvious case to point out...
I also began to feel like this young woman was destined by the developers to never catch a break... The world was pretty much out to get her... And the only choices you had were to either allow her to just become corrupted and deviant, or let her just put up with it and struggle that much more... Her destiny seems to be nothing but, her being a victim and/or the focus of every sexual situation the developers could dream up... With 99% of the human race out to get her... It is a story device, used to such a high degree, that I felt it ruins the story overall, at least for me... By focusing primarily on back to back porn like scenarios, it then becomes a pointless porn fest... And less of a meaningful and deep story about the struggles of a young woman, dealing with what life throws her way, while learning more about her own sexuality... Just because there is a lot of dialogue and monologue and lots of pictures to look at, doesn't mean it's full of meaning and deep story telling, with a believable plot and characters you can empathize with... Sure, it has lots of "content," but that doesn't automatically make it top notch material that steps outside the porn box, to present anything but pointless masturbation material with very little in the way of meaningful and deep story to keep you hooked...
Is it better then before, yes, but not by much when viewed as a whole... I raised my scoring to 3 stars instead of my original 2... Why only to 3? Because it's an average overall product in my opinion... Not poor, just average... Being lengthy with lots of text and pictures, doesn't mean it's necessarily content rich or that the content is of the highest quality... It's average for what it achieves and presents, even if it is lengthy in it's overall amount of content... I've played/read much worse, and I've played/read much better... It's alright in my book, but nothing special...
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I agree that the MCs proportions are quite,,, odd. I mentioned early on that her knees were wrong and looked like they might break because of how they were bent.
Over all the game is good and I'm ok with it, when the author gets time after putting in story and fixing any bugs he might find, maybe he'll come back around and do a pass on making the MC look a bit more human.
- Jan 28, 2018
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The MC makes the special appeal of the game. The partly exaggerated parts are wanted, and I would say most of the patreons are very fine with the MC, because of that!
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