CreepyGhost

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She likes it...them :) And I want her to get ready for anything that comes her way.
Well I imagine she wont be constipated anymore :ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO::ROFLMAO:

It's good so far, even if I don't like that specific stuff. Waiting for the next update, hope it has a LOT of content.
 

Mormont

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Well Hank showed his true colours in this update that's if you reject him of course and I'm kinda glad that I did, think the mc doesn't need to be tied down just yet let her enjoy herself. Dissapointed with how easy she is giving into the blackmail though instead of giving in she should just tease the guy instead, overall pretty good update.
 

BUsybat

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Dissapointed with how easy she is giving into the blackmail though instead of giving in she should just tease the guy instead, overall pretty good update.
Curious question , how is she meant to tease only when he already threatened to make the website public? How would you have done it differently if this was yr plot?
 

Mormont

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Curious question , how is she meant to tease only when he already threatened to make the website public? How would you have done it differently if this was yr plot?
Well there is so many options here I just think she gives into the guy too easily he is clearly desperate and I'm sure a pretty girl could talk the creep into anything. I think the guy that actually took the photos was gonna help her? or she could risk getting her brothers involved.
 

paperwork

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Probably one of the best VN games on this site.

/spoiler mode on

Love it that you can actually avoid dumb dialogue choices. There are already so many other games out there where you have to play a stupid female MC that this one is *particularly* refreshing. Player still has the choice to go with "bad" decisions if desired.

The MC is cute, and one wants to watch over her. NPCs have believable and interesting personalities, reacting to player input and progression of the story. I especially like Matt, who isn't the kind of character that I usually fancy. Him caring about his "sis", not actually raping her while she is sick and sleeping, deciding to man up and to fight against Hank, made him endearing to me. I almost regret now picking Hank and Chris over him, and want to play again to see if he's going to be just another NEET if the MC caves in too soon.

I also enjoyed the movie evening, where earlier choices came up again in the thoughts flow of the MC, wondering if she acted like she did only because she had felt lonely.

Also, some great small touches here and there, like being able to name the plugs. I of course went with the suggestion of the MC to name them small=Matt, big=Chris (her current love interest) ^.^

Speaking of the story, it's a bit too heavy on the shota side if you asked me. What is it with all those "18 physically years old 12 mentally years old" kids in game ? I realize that's a personal preference/dislike, but there are quite a lot of them *everywhere* and never fully exploited : on the beach, teaching, babysitting, at the clothes shop, etc. If they're just meant to be "side-dishes", I wonder how they can "put in their weight" to the story (or even play out eventually) if the MC is already proceeding on a heavy romance path with the other main characters in the near future.

There are some unexplained holes in the story (for example, why hasn't the MC been busted out of college or her part-time jobs after being absent for several days because of sickness), but that's only minor nitpicking for a H-game.

Finally, I don't mind the slow progression as long as I know there will be closure... one day. Actually, as noted above with the shotas, I fear that the game progresses too fast, not giving the player the time to explore all the options that are available in game. What about the teaching/cosplay sessions with the neighbour kid ? What about the modelling sessions with Lorenzo ? What about the maid-ing poker parties at the neighbour house ? What about summer school, Simon, Andre, the head-master ? What about meeting Andrew and crushing his impotent blackmailer balls ? What about the DJ ? What about fully exploring the sex-shop and taking advantage of the promotion for... ahem, leaving a glowing review of some of its articles ? What about Katie, Jose, Joe, Mr Chang, the Cops, not to mention all the possibilities with the family (the uncle, the grand-father, the (over-jealous?) aunt!) ?

I also fear that providing the player with such intimate and very naughty scenes as the Hank balcony date will leave whatever else may follow as quite bland and unsavoury in comparison. The pacing and rationality of the story would just feel wrong if she had outstanding and ultimately satisfying sex with her sweetheart one night, and the day after caved into some easy shota boob/skirt-prank or hobo rape.

The game has been so enjoyable so far that I actually don't want it to finish ^.^ It's such an exceptional game compared to others on this site that I hope we'll get to follow the MC in her adventures for a long while still. Really considering to support it, hopefully next month.

/spoiler mode off

Thank you.
Thank you @ThisIsMe88 . I love long reviews like this and try to reply to them in kind.

I can add a few events from the old game that never showed up here yet to your list :) There is much that can be done. In this game, mentally 12-year old boys showed earlier than the older because they present a safer environment for her at the beginning. Some of them are side-dishes and some of them are not. There are a lot of characters and her relations with all of them will not be meaningful.

The school is going to start on Monday (Mr. Miyagi told so in the previous update). So, she didn't have to let them know. And Hank took care of the cafe job. The MC texted Lorenzo and postponed the modelling job.

Satisfying sex is a turning point for all games here. The game usually turns into a fuck fest after those scenes in every game. Maybe it's more so for female protagonist games. That's why I am working hard to develop personal relationships as well as the not yet revealed -but sometimes hinted- overall plot. I care for the side characters and if the players care for them as I do, the MC having sex with one guy won't matter as much as it would in a game where sex is the ultimate goal. I am not that much concerned about it, because in a sense, it's already done. She was mentally ready to have sex in this release. I am just waiting for the right moment for it to happen. And there is a reason that Hank is the first romantic candidate. I have plans :)

What I try to do is not making player think "Let's get that MC laid?". What I try to do is make players think "what if she gets laid with this one?" or better "What will she do now about that stuff?". I know it's not common and requires a lot of work. But, I love doing it so far and I'll do it as long as players are invested in it as I am.
 

paperwork

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Speaking of sex scenes again, in the past I think you said she'd have sex with a romantic partner only.
However, what for me and probably a lot of others, made the first version of your game really hot, was the fact that it could lead to naughty scenes just anywhere if the player decides.
In the first version we didn't have vaginal sex, but still she'd be able to have anal sex in for example the modeling stage room, or at the beach, or at the backroom of the shop where she promoted wine or something.

While I understand and completly respect that you want sexual content to be meaningful and not just have a fuck fest game (which is actually great since as you said most games will just be that sooner or later), will you eventually add scenes like this again when the time, pacing and story allows it, and would it also be able for her to have vaginal sex in such scenes, without having an actual romantic partner?

Also since you seem to have the general plot & the story progression set, could you tell us a bit more about how many Acts you plan to do (currently) for this game, and an estimation of time (rough guess) when Act 1 comes to an end and starts Act 2? (Obviously I don't want this game to end at all, but I'm still curious to see what the current plans are)
I should make a correction. She'll lose her virginity to a romantic partner only. She can have other kinds of sex with whomever she (you in her part) desires.

And, to be clear, player can make it into a fuck fest when the game advances. I'll give you all the means. But, for anyone that wants a different approach, it will be there (my main aim). After she loses her virginity, she can have vaginal sex with others too. But, she won't lose it to a stranger.

As we have talked about it in the previous post, there is plenty to do in the game already. I have milestones for Act 2 and Act 3. Change of Acts represent dramatic changes in her life. I know after certain events happen, it will lead to Act 2 and eventually Act 3. But, I haven't set how we go there specifically. I have events and ideas, progression for some characters. But, other than that, I want it to have an organic feel. That's why I make polls for events in Patreon. It's as you said, you don't want it to end now. I don't too. Act 2 will happen no matter what and won't feel too different. But, Act 3 will feel like a new game.

I am sorry if I am not revealing much. Just play the game and enjoy it. An estimate for Act 2 would be early 2020. That's not a promise, don't hold me accountable for any changes :) Because I like changing things on the go. I listen to people here and on Patreon.

I want to tell the story of a girl who has sex time to time (or often). We happen to be witnessing to a time in her life where she is adapting to a new life.
 
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The game has over 10000 images right now. I don't share the new versions here myself. But, I've started to release incremental updates at Patreon. It wouldn't be buggy if compressed, just look worse.
oh ok ty, just wondering another updates for the last 3 hour already had compressed but this one been updated since yesterday. I love your game by the way
 

Nelythia

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Is here a chance to choice (bec. of former decisions) or not?
I do remember having 2 choices there, but I don't know how I triggered it.

Btw @paperwork could you share the scenes/pictures that you completed but didn't put into the game (like intercourse blackmail from repairman) in a special in the future?
Maybe once an Act ends, or once you plan to move on from the game & finish it.

Would be interesting to see
 

Xpl0it

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Okay, so i played through this version yesterday and i wanted to share my opinion on some aspects of the game:

First of all, again: Its one of my favorite games in here if not my favorite. The feeling of really liking and admiring the character and also really looking forward for her to finally getting railed is just amazing. There are not many games anymore that give me that special feeling and i almost forgot how awesome it is.

Again as i said earlier, and contrary to many other people, i fucking love this girl. Absolutly perfect body shape. I hope you never change a single bit of her! I read in one of your patreon goals you are looking forward to using 3d renders, dont. The slighty imperfection of honey select characters make them even more awesome and i highly doubt that any 3d renders could live up to that.

Also i think there are way too many games with voluptuous girls (aka fat) and i hate that. So to all those people crying about this girls fit and perfect figure: You have your games! Let me have fun with this one and shut the fuck up!

About the game story and progression, I have to mention some minor criticism:
As i played through the game from my last saving point i tried to replay the whole thing from beginning with some different choices and it feels a little bit linear. But the bigger problem is that it has so many different events that seem unfinished and stuck. e.g. the shower peaking (i liked those images a lot!) there wasnt any new content although it seemed to be a daily activity? or the homeless guy, the beach thing, the pervert kid at the Bar and especially mister miyagi at school. It feels a bit like there are too many of those unfinished side-events and it would be better to stick to some of them.

Coming back to the forgotten feeling i had. The edging of this game is incredible. I also talked about this earlier but i so desperatly want this amazingly beautiful girl to be railed in all 3 holes its making me crazy!
When i played through your update yesterday i needed release so badly after playing it i had to watch some porn. If i didnt do that i probably would have jumped out of the window from sheer desperation for release. (especially after the last truth or dare part!!)
And its not a bad thing at all! Its actually fantastic. But a whole game without even 1 real penetration sex event (besides that dream she had and maybe something else i am forgetting now) is also playing with fire. A good fire, keeping us all on the edge of our seats, and lusting for every new event. But for your own sake dont overdo it!

I actually think a tiny bit of your old games sex drive mixed in would work wonders and make this game even better!

Have a great day and keep working on it, cant wait for the next release!
 

paperwork

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Okay, so i played through this version yesterday and i wanted to share my opinion on some aspects of the game:

First of all, again: Its one of my favorite games in here if not my favorite. The feeling of really liking and admiring the character and also really looking forward for her to finally getting railed is just amazing. There are not many games anymore that give me that special feeling and i almost forgot how awesome it is.

Again as i said earlier, and contrary to many other people, i fucking love this girl. Absolutly perfect body shape. I hope you never change a single bit of her! I read in one of your patreon goals you are looking forward to using 3d renders, dont. The slighty imperfection of honey select characters make them even more awesome and i highly doubt that any 3d renders could live up to that.

Also i think there are way too many games with voluptuous girls (aka fat) and i hate that. So to all those people crying about this girls fit and perfect figure: You have your games! Let me have fun with this one and shut the fuck up!

About the game story and progression, I have to mention some minor criticism:
As i played through the game from my last saving point i tried to replay the whole thing from beginning with some different choices and it feels a little bit linear. But the bigger problem is that it has so many different events that seem unfinished and stuck. e.g. the shower peaking (i liked those images a lot!) there wasnt any new content although it seemed to be a daily activity? or the homeless guy, the beach thing, the pervert kid at the Bar and especially mister miyagi at school. It feels a bit like there are too many of those unfinished side-events and it would be better to stick to some of them.

Coming back to the forgotten feeling i had. The edging of this game is incredible. I also talked about this earlier but i so desperatly want this amazingly beautiful girl to be railed in all 3 holes its making me crazy!
When i played through your update yesterday i needed release so badly after playing it i had to watch some porn. If i didnt do that i probably would have jumped out of the window from sheer desperation for release. (especially after the last truth or dare part!!)
And its not a bad thing at all! Its actually fantastic. But a whole game without even 1 real penetration sex event (besides that dream she had and maybe something else i am forgetting now) is also playing with fire. A good fire, keeping us all on the edge of our seats, and lusting for every new event. But for your own sake dont overdo it!

I actually think a tiny bit of your old games sex drive mixed in would work wonders and make this game even better!

Have a great day and keep working on it, cant wait for the next release!
Thank you @Xpl0it. Two reviews in a day :)

Homeless guy, the beach thing, the pervert kid at the Bar and especially mister Miyagi at school all wait for their turns to act again. Some things have to happen for me to progress in each event. Bathroom events will get an update after next release. I redid them after she got tanlines :) I have to balance workload. I accept the fact that all of you may not agree with me on this.

I had done an event with the homeless for this version. But I decided to cancel it. @Nelythia this is for you too :)

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paperwork

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I picked all the slutty way. Don't understand then why there is no choise to choose sleepwear!
How many times did she get peepers in the bathroom events? Initially, that's the only way to get her "comfortable".
 

fortuna95

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How many times did she get peepers in the bathroom events? Initially, that's the only way to get her "comfortable".
I choosed every time "open door" and i guess it was 4 times, is there a random peeping?

btw, found little typo at beach (fake date):
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